Posts by Malakai17

Alright cool what will the alien look like and what kind of Persanality would it have or is it emotionless

Ok I'll try and help think of a name

You should start mostly set the scene wher you are and what your doing and then whatever else I just need those two things and I hope I don't have to say this often :) but can you make sure your descriptive especially with describing the scene

That's alot better than I can write most of the time I like you :) btw punctuation is not my friend, how about Toroak for the Alien

IC-
The doctor raced to the other side of the TARDIS and pulled down the left lever and grabbed the mallet a whacked another switch " aha gotcha ok now that I locked on to the Toroak's location I can" he looked around and saw that he was alone in his moment of victory and he sighed lightly "alright well I just have to, oh no not the contra-fibulator " and he hit it with the mallet and fell back as the TARDIS landed "ha okay now where am I" he began as he stood up and looked to the monitor "ok August 18 Saturday 2014 oh well good not Sunday blimey Sunday's are just rubbish ok not to find that Toroak." And with that The doctor ran and opened the door to a chilly snow covered street, he quickly reached inside his suit and grabbed out his sonic screwdriver and as he scanned the immediate are he got two different readings one of a human girl and one of a Toroak he quickly looked around and saw a young woman watching him and. He walked up to her so that he could get her to leave the area so that she wouldn't get hurt "hello I'm the Doctor " he said not expecting the reaction he got from the woman

"My hair what's wrong with my hair" the doctor began slightly hurt at the comment " what are you going on ... About" the doctor said pausing at his last words as he looked around and found himself looking at a tall young man with a sort of glow that was not easily noticed by most and there was a small snow cleared area around him and the doctor immediately recognized it as the Toroak "look forget about critasizing me I just need you to get to of here come on just follow me but don't look round he can't know you've seen him, well it, well him I guess look we just have to go now before he tries to come after us, now before you ask questions lets just go " he said taking a small and slow step backwards a held out his hand for her to grab and gave her his kindest gaze from his dark brown eyes

name-Echoed Lightning, also called thunder by those close to him
Age- adult about 2 and a half
appearance-
personality- he is a mostly calm and caring wolf he often jokes and or boast often to help keep spirits high, he is extremely protective of his pack mates and is not often open to outsiders among other things his is fiercely loyal to the pack and would give his life to protect the pack
Rank-fighter
crush-Zia
mate-none
pups-none

Echoed Lightning padded along a familiar trail along the north border of the territory he stopped quite often to renew the border but he made sure it was jot too noticeable so that the pack could not be detected while he walked along his mind began to wander he remembered his first days with the pack, he remembered how he had stumbled into a field where the pack was hunting and at first they left him alone but when the deer fled they turned their attention to him he had been just a pup and didn't know how to live on his own and his pack was dead and the pack accepted him and he vowed to never lose another wolf close to him and he learned every battle move and constantly trained to become the best fighter ever, but as he passed along happily remembering fond memories he almost missed the scent of the wolf, he stopped in his tracks and took a deep breath to breathe in the scent he could tell it was a male's scent and it was semi recent at least from the night before he followed it for a little ways till he was just at the very edge of the territory border and he decided to hide behind behind a clump of strong scented bushes to hel hide his scent a s he waited for the wolf so he could see just what the male is doing here.

From the bush that Echoed Lightning was buried into he could just see out of it and as he crouched and listened and watched. When a twig snapped not far off he quickly snapped his head in the direction it came from he couldn't see anything from where he was he he inhaled deeply and it was the male that he had scented before he skunked from the bush and headed to the wolf and soon he was within Echoed Lightning's sight he began a low growl to warn the wolf of his presence and stepped forward into the wolf's line of sight who are you and what are you doing here he began standing tall and round but also guarded in case the wolf was hostile

Thinking he had possibly scared the wolf he sat down hopping to get the wolf to talk or at least say his name; he softened his voice slightly and asked again" who are you, are looking for the pack that is said to live here he said trying to make sure that if this wolf didn't have that intention he would not know that it is where Echoed Lightning comes from.

Echoed Lightning tilted his head as he read the words "I see well I can take you to my alpha I am not sure that you will be accepted but he i normally open to wolves follow me, oh by the way my names Echoed lightning when we get to the camp you can tell me your name he said as he turned around to lead the wolf to camp

Would he be open to a long romance story between him and a wind clan or thunderclan cat? And is the cats name Jim or will he have a warrior name?

talon this wolf wishes to join the pack I found him at the North border and I could scent he was alone and he does not seem to be a threat he barked as Talon approach. His gaze travelled around the camp and his eyes caught sight of Zia and h began to stare at her more subconsciously but he soon realized he was staring and he quickly turned his attention back to the alpha hoping Zia didn't notice his staring

Ooc- I'm getting tired of writing out Echoed Lightning every time so I'm going to use his nickname Thunder but you guys can use either, but thunder is normally used by wolves that are closer to him than other wolves

Ic Thunder followed Zia to where she was sitting and sat beside her so you fell asleep while on guard I sure hope Tallon didn't seebhe barked jokingly to Zia while lightly hitting her shoulder with his playfully

i think he could be a good fighter like he could hold his own in a fight and I think he could be a good wolf to have in the pack what do you think he said just befor the alpha called the meeting well it looks like we are about to see what the Alpha thinks. After you he said dipping his head to the she wolf and holding his paw for her to go first

Hey shy wolf I got bored and snapshot your tiger wolf and made silhouette I think you will like

Thunder followed just behind and sitting beside Zia do you think talon will allow him into the pack you might not see it well more just notice but he is mute I myself have nothing against it, I myself think some wolves should keep there muzzle more often he barked to her jokingly

no he wrote in the dirt that he chooses to be mute and then as he finished his response to Zia and he then hears that the wolf will be joining them he feels a small bit of happyness her liked the wolf even without voicing his feeling he seemed like a nice wolf we could show him around tomorrow on the dawn patrol

Zia why don't I come with you two we could all hunt while we are out and I need to freshen up some of my hunting Scills anywayhe said smiling

ok well then lets go he barked happy to have a chance to see weather the new wolf was more of a hunter of a fighter, and he could spend time with Zia.
Sorry for the short post don't really know what to put sorry

Then come with me I can take you somewhere that can keep you safe nothing can get into it" he said to her with a trusting smile on his face