"Thanks Crumbpelt." Floodwhisker meowed "That means a lot. Anyway, Frostwind already treated my paw. I just need to wait." She nodded.
Frostwind was inspecting Leafpelt's eyes when she sighed. "Oh Leafpelt. I don't think there's anything I can do. I'm afraid you're permanently blind."
Leafpelt mewed with a sigh. "Oh. Oh well. I am just as happy hearing my kit's voices instead of seeing their faces. Thank you Cloudberry."
"I'm Frostwind."
"Oh."
"Okay!" Frostpaw bounded excitedly towards camp. Upon getting there, she selected a rabbit off the pile.
Guys, we need more players, and a medcat. So, here ya go!
Pinepelt sat quietly in the medicine den. His spotted pelt stood out from the snow. His green eyes searched quietly, growing more and more annoyed. "Now, who took all of my POPPY SEEDS!? I certainly DIDN'T use all of it!. The tom had not been so low on herbs in all of is twenty moons. Catmint, poppy seeds, all gone! I guess I'll have to go gather more. He thought. [img width=510 height=340]http://upload.wikimedia.org/wi…lis_catus-cat_on_snow.jpg[/img]
Redstorm giggled. Pinepelt had no idea he had taken his herbs just to pull on his tail. Again. His long red fur stood out as he bounded back across camp to put the herbs back. He meant no harm, he just wanted to bug his littermate. He didn't even care if his was acting like a kit. He was twenty moons too, and he could do what he wanted to his brother.
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I thought this picture seemed appropriate for their relationship, [img width=510 height=328]http://www.funcatpictures.com/…a-i-can-see-you-idiot.jpg[/img]
"She's okay." Frostwind said. "She's asleep now, but earlier the thought I was Cloudberry!" She let out a purr of amusement.
Floodwhisker nodded and headed to the warriors den to rest.
Is Floodwhisker too young to mentor someone?
She purred. "I could use a bit of freshkill," She said. "If it's no trouble." She returned to sorting and placing herbs.
She nodded. "Thank you. I will share with Leafpelt." She Moved the squirrel in front of the sleeping elder then nudged her awake. "Leafpelt, I got some food to share."
"Fireflight?"
"No. Frostwind. Wait, who is Fireflight?"
"Eh. Nevermind. Squirrel then?"
"Yeah."
After the short confusion, they ate the squirrel and Frostwind sat up. "Leafpelt, who is Firelight?"
Leafpelt responded sleepily. "Ach, my sister. She died a little while before Floodwhisker and Mudshine were kitted."
Frostwind then remembered the ginger tabby. "Oh, I remember. I'm sorry."
"Don't be. She was a mouse-brained fool who thought she could befriend badgers." Leafpelt let out a purr.
Floodwhisker opened her eyes. "Is it time?" She mewed quietly. She dreaded having to face a BobClan warrior.
She got to her feet and limped towards Mudshine
As they came to the abandoned twoleg nest, Floodwhisker sniffed the air. "I don't smell anything.." She mewed nervously. Maybe the BobClan hadn't come. Or, maybe, she died. Yes she most likely died. Without thinking, she said, "I think she's dead."
"Get to It?" Floodwhisker asked. "What exactly do you mean by, 'Get to it?'" Floodwhisker clearly didn't trust the she-cat at all. "What is it you have against our father anyway?"
Hey, why does it say, "Feral front" at the top of the page instead of "Warriorcatsrpg" Like usual?
Floodwhisker's fur bristled. "I will not kill my father!" She hissed. "What if we just, just," She thought of what he did to her mother. He blinded her and left her a defenseless elder! Thats It! She thought. "What if we just, oh, crippled him? Does Shadedstar have nine lives? We could get him down to his last, then just cripple him!" This sounded perfect to Floodwhisker.
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Floodwhisker cringed before nodding. "Okay, but, um.." she paused for a second. "... Be nice!" She leaned against her sister as they lead her to their camp. This could still be a trap, she thought.
Floodwhisker said coolly, "I'ts not just because he crippled my mother" She paused. "It's also because he is our father. Our father, and a traitor!" She hissed. "He had us, just to prove false loyalty!" She quieted down after a minute. "Mysticflower," She said, her cool tone returning. "You say you're his mate. Have you actually had his kits?"
Really? Four pages??? Recap?
You can have prophecy but, PLEASE, don't make her amazingly perfect. If there was some downside, or she had some problems, it could balance the character.
"Hmm." Floodwhisker thought for a moment. "If you're quick, you could roll on your back to knock them off." She paused for a moment. "But wait, you'd need to do a full barrel roll if you don't want to expose your belly." She wondered if that was practical.
Floodwhisker nervously nodded and stepped toward Mysticflower. What if her father didn't trust them? What if he attacked them? What if it didn't work? Floodwhisker's paw felt better, but still weak. How many lives did she need to take from her own father in the end?
Leafpelt was speaking to Frostwind. "I wonder why my boys follow that mouse-brained fool of a father."
Frostwind sighed. "They think he's the good guy. Remember, they disappeared before they were apprenticed. He raised them as Bobclan warriors before they could be told that they weren't friendly."
"Hmm. Mudshine, could you please be careful out there?"
"I'm still Frostwind, Leafpelt."
"Why do you sound so much like Mudshine? Eh, I'll learn eventually."
Pinepelt came back from his herb gathering with plenty of what he needed. As he entered his den, he let out a yowl of frustration. "They were here, THE WHOLE TIME?" The angry tom ran out of his den, fast as lightning. He barreled into his brother Redstorm, who was hiding poorly in the snow. This was a common sight.
"Oh hi Pinepelt! Whats up?" He said coolly.
"I TOLD YOU." Pinepelt hissed. "DON'T. TOUCH. MY. HERBS!" He gave him a light bat on the top of his head, claws sheathed, and stalked off.
Frostpaw walked into the apprentice den, to see Mistywillow with a strange cat. "Hey, who's that?"
Floodwhisker padded on beside her sister. "I don't know." She paused. "What if, we said that we snuck out after considering his offer?" She shivered with anxiety. "I wonder if he actually ever loved us..."
Woah.. I was led here through someone else's signature and this looks so cool! Well, it's probably too late to join, I can't animate and my voice is so high pitched I feel can't play anyone older than a female apprentice. 
Oh well.
