Posts by Jojo

I haven't RPed in English before, only in Dutch (I'm from the Netherlands ^^") So, I wanted to know if there were some things I could improve. It'd be very helpful if you would take the time to help me! :3

Xx Jojo

The scarred brown tabby she-cat opened her eyes slowly. It took her a few seconds before she could see her surroundings clearly, but after Scarface had realized that the brown-ish walls around her were from the Warriors Den, she stood up and shook her head to wake herself up. She walked to the place where the daylight was coming from, and when she stepped outside she had to close her pale blue eyes for a second to not get blinded by the burning sun. When she could open her eyes again, she looked around in the Camp. A few warriors were eating some fresh-kill, and greeted her. She nodded back to them as a "hello", and began walking to the entrance of the Camp. Scarface yawned again. The muscular she-cat still wasn't fully awake, but she did remind herself that she had to walk less like an angry badger. She'd scare away all the prey off the territory! Quickly, she began taking lighter steps and it didn't take long until she was a hundred percent awake. Suddenly, she felt a presence behind her. Scarface unsheated her claws, and turned around quickly. She growled at the cat behind her, but she couldn't recognize him/her. When she realized that it wouldn't be logical for an enemy cat to be this close to her Camp, she laughed apologetic. 'Sorry, didn't see ya there!' Scarface meowed while still grinning a bit nervously.

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Username: Jojo
RP experience: 2 years, but only on Dutch RP websites.
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Name: Fernscar
Past Names: Fernkit, Fernpaw
Future Names: Fernstar(?)
Gender: Tom-cat (Male)
Age: 12 moons
Clan: CherryClan
Rank: Warrior
Past Ranks: Kit, Apprentice
Future Ranks: Deputy(?), Leader(?)
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Personality Traits: Sassy - Helpful - Proud - Friendly - Optimistic
History: Will get explained in RP. His mother was a kittypet, and his father a Clancat.
Built: Average length, pretty muscular. Strong paws.
Fur pattern: Full with different belly/nose.
Fur colours: Black with white belly/nose
Eye colours: Amber yellow.
Theme song: Welcome to the black parade - My Chemical Romance

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Fernscar padded out of the Warriors Den and looked around curiously. He saw one of the other warriors, Redbloom, talking to Flameleaf. He walked up to them and stopped a few tail lengths away from them out of respect for their personal space. 'Hello guys!' he greeted, while sitting down and wrapping his tail around his paws. 'How's it going?'
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'I think we're about to go patrolling. Care to join us?' Flameleaf asked the black tom. Fernscar smiled, and nodded. 'Of course!' He answered. He looked at the she-cat and Redbloom. 'Have you already made plans of what part of the territory we're going to?' he asked. While standing up again, the CherryClan warrior blinked with his amber eyes while waiting for an answer, which was supposed to come from the two warriors.
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"Its up to Redbloom, he asked me." The she-cat shrugged and looked at the small white cat expectantly. Fernscar looked at Redbloom too, waiting for an answer. He unsheated his claws and took a quick glance at them to see if they were sharp enough for hunting. When this was the case, he looked back at Redbloom.
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