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    [fancypost bgcolor=coral; borderwidth=0px; width: 330px; height: 20px; border-radius: 20px; color: white; letter-spacing: 2px; text-align: center][size=20px]salutations lovelies![/fancypost]


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    welcome to my nice little fancypost shop! i'm rin and i like to make people happy but not like a complete people pleaser, you know? this an advanced fancypost shop where you have tables, scrollies, and all that fancy goodness. now, so far it's me working and i reply by a 3DS so you can image how frustrating it is to type on a small screen. anyway, i hope you enjoy these custom made fancies! c:




    if you wish to use already premade templates check out my siggy. [/fancypost]
    [fancypost bgcolor=coral; borderwidth=0px; overflow: auto; width: 140px; height: 180px; color: beige;].rules




    -be patient. i'm sure you can wait a few hours or a day at least, yes?




    -DO NOT remove my watermark or anyone elses and claim it as your own! that is theft and you WILL be reported. we worked very hard to make sure that you are satisfied with your fancy. okay? okay.




    -no arguing on here. this is an argument free zone.




    -i have the right to deny your form, whether it be a trainee, worker, or customer. if i catch you being nasty or rude i will ban you and report you.




    -if you wish to have a picture in your fancy please supply the image. i don't that much time to go scavenging for one.




    -everyone has their own prices but those that work need to make sure they're reasonable.




    will add more if necessary. c:[/fancypost]


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    -worker (still apart of the staff team







    -trainee







    -customer




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    [fancypost bgcolor=beige; borderwidth=0px; overflow: auto; width: 140px; height: 180px; color: coral;].staff team




    .boss
    rin




    .second-in-command (1/1)
    rose




    .workers (1/∞)
    storm
    rain




    .trainees (0/5)[/fancypost]


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    [fancypost bgcolor=beige; borderwidth=0px; width: 140px; height: 180px; color: coral;].slots open




    1. open
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    [fancypost bgcolor=coral; borderwidth=0px; overflow: auto; width: 140px; height: 180px; color: beige;]. prices




    .rin




    100fk for basic
    350fk for average
    1,000-3,000fk advanced




    .rose




    100fk for any type




    .storm




    50fk for basic
    100fk for reg.
    200fk for adv.




    .glitch




    25fk for basic
    500-5,000fk for adv. or unique




    . rain




    100-200fk for fancies[/fancypost]



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    [fancypost bgcolor=beige; borderwidth=0px; width: 330px; height: 20px; border-radius: 20px; letter-spacing: 2px; color: coral; text-align: center; margin-top: -15px;][size=20px]good bye sweet child[/fancypost]
    [align=center]© rin

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    [align=left][fancypost bgcolor=#111111; borderwidth: 0px; overflow: auto; width: 230px; height: 310px; color: lightgreen; border-radius: 10px;]i'm done for today cx will add more later.




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    © rin | #lookrin

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    [align=center]Ah, ok. I see


    3.5

    [align=center]Oooh, that really helped. I kept forgetting the 'Bb' and 'Dd' genes and so it all really makes sense. So I'll take a step back and redo the dilution again and add in the punnet square.


    Fawn x Lilac
    b1b1 dd x bb1 Dd


    b b1
    b1 bb1 b1b1
    b1 bb1 b1b1


    d d
    d dd dd
    d dd dd


    kittens will be fawn and lilac


    Blue x Blue
    BB dd x BB dd


    B B
    B BB BB
    B BB BB


    d d
    d dd dd
    d dd dd


    kittens will be blue


    Blue x Fawn
    Bb Dd x b1b1 dd


    B b
    b1 Bb1 Bb1
    b1 Bb1 b1b1


    D d
    d Dd dd
    d Dd dd


    kittens will be blue and fawn

    [align=center]no problem. c: let's get started!


    [fancypost borderwidth=0px; width: 450px; color: coral; text-align: center;][size=25px]Describing
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    [justify][color=beige]I'm sure you're wondering: "Why is describing the first thing I'm learning?" Well you see, not many people are good at describing. Yes, there are those out there that are outstanding but that takes years of learning how to use correct grammer, spelling, punctuation, have a large vocabulary, and plenty more. Describing will be very useful when it comes to making threads, making forms, and be able to show others what you're imaging right then and there. Let's look at a few examples below.


    Example l: Anna is walking her friendly dog named Rex. He's a great runner a lot and playing dead.


    That's okay but we can do better than that. Ask yourself this: How long has Anna had Rex? Just exactly how friendly is the dog? What type of dog is Rex? Is there anything special or unique to him? How is he a great runner? How good is he at playing dead? Let's take a look at it again with those questions answered.


    Example 1: Anna is walking her dog called Rex, who has been with him for five years, is quite the docile and outgoing type. The canine likes to greet other dogs and people as well, making him well known in the neighborhood and nearby dog parks. Rex is a lovely Boxer and Chow mix, making him different from others. The male has a ebony muzzle, innocent hazel optics, and a tail that curls like a Chows with a few white hairs at the tip. He's an amazing runner, almost a speedy gonzales, and has won several ribbons. In addition to that, Rex is so fantastic at playing dead that sometimes it looks like he actually is.


    This is much better. You gain more sentences and make them less choppy. It also helps making paragraphs bigger and more detailed. Let's do another.


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    [color=white]Example 2: It was sunny outside with clouds in the sky as it dragged into noon. Derek went over to the house and went to the porch and sat down, watching the kids through half closed eyes. It was going to be a good day.


    Again, this is okay. There's a lot of detail that can be add in to make it look nicer. Ask yourself: What are clouds like? Are they fluffy and fat? Wispy and thin? Feathery and carefree? What color is the sky? It's not always that clear actually. It can be lighter or darker shades, all depending on the clouds. Does it feel hot and humid out? Or is it breezy and at a comfortable temperature? Was the porch wooden, brick, or cemented? Was the the house new or old?


    Is Derek relaxed or alert? Just because it seems like he's doesn't mean he is. What are the kids doing? How do we know that it's going to be a great day? All of this can be put in there and make it better. Also, you can describe the sun and moon as celestial bodies. Knowing that word and what it means helps expand your vocabulary.


    Example 2: The large, burning celestial body blazed fiercely as the time slowly crept its way up to noon. The thin but wispy alabaster clouds floated across the clear, cyan sky, making it almost seem like a mosaic. Derek, a tall, lanky man, sigh softly in relief as he approached the old, abandoned house. By the looks of it, time and nature have worn away the wooden home at a slow but steady pace. All of the windows were broken and there were multiply large holes inside and outside of the house, vines and other signs of vegetation grow all over. The silent male shuffled over to the porch at his own pace and placed his rump on it. The wood underneath lightly creaked and groaned soft but otherwise, it was able to hold his weight without caving in. The leader leaned back ever so slightly and let his eyelids droop halfway over his pale green oculars.


    He silently watched his younger companions play around in the field in front of him. They were playing a childish game called freeze tag but hey, everyone has an inner child within them. Even though he appeared to be resting he was actually alert to every single noise and movement happening right now. Though a part of him was happily content and had the faintest of smiles formed on his plush, light pink lips. No having to run from hunters since they've lost pursuit several miles back in the thick, dense forest. Today was going to be a great day after all.


    [b]Answering all of the questions I could think of helped me get a paragraph and a half. By adding in that simile and personification gave you an idea of how it was imagined. We'll go into detail about that stuff that after a few things. So now it's your turn!


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    1. 1. Allen went to the store and bought groceries. He met a girl named Miranda there and left with a smile on his face. Boy, he was a happy camper.
    2. 2. Susan went to a restaurant and waited five minutes before she was seated. Her waiter was slow and had poor manners and her dinner was terrible but the desert was good.

    [justify][size=11px]black x fawn
    Bb Dd x b1b1 dd


    B b
    b1 Bb1 bb1
    b1 Bb1 bb1


    D d
    d Dd dd
    d Dd dd


    kittens will be black, cinnamon, blue, or fawn


    cinnamon x chocolate
    b1b1 dd x bb1 Dd


    b b1
    b1 bb1 b1b1
    b1 bb1 b1b1


    D d
    d Dd dd
    d Dd dd


    kittens will be chocolate, cinnamon, lilac, or fawn.


    blue x fawn
    Bb Dd x b1b1 dd


    B b
    b1 Bb1 bb1
    b1 Bb1 bb1


    D d
    d Dd dd
    d Dd dd


    kittens will be blue or fawn.

    [justify][size=7pt]perf! c: do you understand what i mean when you can add plenty of details to posts? even the days you're museless, having the ability to describe (if it's possible because there are situations where you can't) will still give you a good paragraph or two. not many people think of that because most people stick to the generic things, you know?

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    [hr][/fancypost][fancypost bgcolor=; border: 0px; width: 500px; font-family: georgia; font-size: 11px; text-align: justify;]Display Name:» rin (just call me whisp cx)
    Activity: 7/10-8/10 though I might not be on next week and two days.
    Roleplay sample:

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    [align=center]brown ticked tabby x cinnamon
    Bb Dd Aa Tata x b1b1 dd Aa Tata


    B b
    b1 Bb1 bb1
    b1 Bb1 bb1


    D d
    d Dd dd
    d Dd dd


    A a
    A AA Aa
    a Aa aa


    Ta ta
    Ta TaTa Tata
    ta Tata tata


    kittens will be black, blue, cinnamon, fawn, black ticked tabby, blue ticked tabby, cinnamon ticked tabby, or fawn ticked tabby.


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    chocolate tabby x fawn tabby
    bb1 Dd Aa Tata x b1b1 dd Aa Tata


    b b1
    b1 bb1 b1b1
    b1 bb1 b1b1


    D d
    d Dd dd
    d Dd dd


    A a
    a Aa aa
    a Aa aa


    Ta ta
    Ta TaTa Tata
    ta Tata tata


    kittens will be chocolate, cinnamon, lilac, fawn, chocolate tabby, cinnamon tabby, lilac tabby, or fawn tabby.


    Tabies will be ticked.


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    blue x lilac classic tabby
    Bb Dd Aa tt x bb1 Dd Aa tt


    B b
    b Bb bb
    b1 Bb1 bb1


    D d
    D DD Dd
    d Dd dd


    A a
    A AA Aa
    a Aa aa


    t t
    t tt tt
    t tt tt


    [i]kittens will be blue, lilac, blue tabby, or lilac tabby.


    tabbies will be classic.