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(.whisper.) · Jul 16th 2014

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(.whisper.) · Jul 16th 2014

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[fancypost bgcolor=coral; borderwidth=0px; width: 330px; height: 20px; border-radius: 20px; color: white; letter-spacing: 2px; text-align: center][size=20px]salutations lovelies![/fancypost]

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welcome to my nice little fancypost shop! i'm rin and i like to make people happy but not like a complete people pleaser, you know? this an advanced fancypost shop where you have tables, scrollies, and all that fancy goodness. now, so far it's me working and i reply by a 3DS so you can image how frustrating it is to type on a small screen. anyway, i hope you enjoy these custom made fancies! c:

if you wish to use already premade templates check out my siggy. [/fancypost]

[fancypost bgcolor=coral; borderwidth=0px; overflow: auto; width: 140px; height: 180px; color: beige;].rules

-be patient. i'm sure you can wait a few hours or a day at least, yes?

-DO NOT remove my watermark or anyone elses and claim it as your own! that is theft and you WILL be reported. we worked very hard to make sure that you are satisfied with your fancy. okay? okay.

-no arguing on here. this is an argument free zone.

-i have the right to deny your form, whether it be a trainee, worker, or customer. if i catch you being nasty or rude i will ban you and report you.

-if you wish to have a picture in your fancy please supply the image. i don't that much time to go scavenging for one.

-everyone has their own prices but those that work need to make sure they're reasonable.

will add more if necessary. c:[/fancypost]

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-worker (still apart of the staff team

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-trainee

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-customer

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[fancypost bgcolor=beige; borderwidth=0px; overflow: auto; width: 140px; height: 180px; color: coral;].staff team

.boss
rin

.second-in-command (1/1)
rose

.workers (1/∞)
storm
rain

.trainees (0/5)[/fancypost]

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[fancypost bgcolor=beige; borderwidth=0px; width: 140px; height: 180px; color: coral;].slots open

1. open
2. open
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[fancypost bgcolor=coral; borderwidth=0px; overflow: auto; width: 140px; height: 180px; color: beige;]. prices

.rin

100fk for basic
350fk for average
1,000-3,000fk advanced

.rose

100fk for any type

.storm

50fk for basic
100fk for reg.
200fk for adv.

.glitch

25fk for basic
500-5,000fk for adv. or unique

. rain

100-200fk for fancies[/fancypost]

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[fancypost bgcolor=beige; borderwidth=0px; width: 330px; height: 20px; border-radius: 20px; letter-spacing: 2px; color: coral; text-align: center; margin-top: -15px;][size=20px]good bye sweet child[/fancypost]
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(.whisper.) · Jul 16th 2014

[align=center]yay! c: more is still coming!

(.whisper.) · Jul 16th 2014

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twelfth ( it's coded so there's no preview of what it looks like. try it out if you dare.)

thirteen (similar to seven)

code

(.whisper.) · Jul 16th 2014

it's fineeeeeeee c:

(.whisper.) · Jul 16th 2014

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[align=left][fancypost bgcolor=#111111; borderwidth: 0px; overflow: auto; width: 230px; height: 310px; color: lightgreen; border-radius: 10px;]i'm done for today cx will add more later.

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© rin | #lookrin

(.whisper.) · Jul 16th 2014

Oh okay, I see where I made my mistakes

(.whisper.) · Jul 17th 2014

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3.0

(.whisper.) · Jul 17th 2014

[align=center]Ah, ok. I see

3.5

(.whisper.) · Jul 17th 2014

[align=center]i'll gladly mentor you. :3 mind you, this is my first time so sorry if i'm crappy. cx

(.whisper.) · Jul 17th 2014

[align=center]Oooh, that really helped. I kept forgetting the 'Bb' and 'Dd' genes and so it all really makes sense. So I'll take a step back and redo the dilution again and add in the punnet square.

Fawn x Lilac
b1b1 dd x bb1 Dd

b b1
b1 bb1 b1b1
b1 bb1 b1b1

d d
d dd dd
d dd dd

kittens will be fawn and lilac

Blue x Blue
BB dd x BB dd

B B
B BB BB
B BB BB

d d
d dd dd
d dd dd

kittens will be blue

Blue x Fawn
Bb Dd x b1b1 dd

B b
b1 Bb1 Bb1
b1 Bb1 b1b1

D d
d Dd dd
d Dd dd

kittens will be blue and fawn

(.whisper.) · Jul 17th 2014

[align=center]no problem. c: let's get started!

[fancypost borderwidth=0px; width: 450px; color: coral; text-align: center;][size=25px]Describing
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[justify][color=beige]I'm sure you're wondering: "Why is describing the first thing I'm learning?" Well you see, not many people are good at describing. Yes, there are those out there that are outstanding but that takes years of learning how to use correct grammer, spelling, punctuation, have a large vocabulary, and plenty more. Describing will be very useful when it comes to making threads, making forms, and be able to show others what you're imaging right then and there. Let's look at a few examples below.

Example l: Anna is walking her friendly dog named Rex. He's a great runner a lot and playing dead.

That's okay but we can do better than that. Ask yourself this: How long has Anna had Rex? Just exactly how friendly is the dog? What type of dog is Rex? Is there anything special or unique to him? How is he a great runner? How good is he at playing dead? Let's take a look at it again with those questions answered.

Example 1: Anna is walking her dog called Rex, who has been with him for five years, is quite the docile and outgoing type. The canine likes to greet other dogs and people as well, making him well known in the neighborhood and nearby dog parks. Rex is a lovely Boxer and Chow mix, making him different from others. The male has a ebony muzzle, innocent hazel optics, and a tail that curls like a Chows with a few white hairs at the tip. He's an amazing runner, almost a speedy gonzales, and has won several ribbons. In addition to that, Rex is so fantastic at playing dead that sometimes it looks like he actually is.

This is much better. You gain more sentences and make them less choppy. It also helps making paragraphs bigger and more detailed. Let's do another.

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[color=white]Example 2: It was sunny outside with clouds in the sky as it dragged into noon. Derek went over to the house and went to the porch and sat down, watching the kids through half closed eyes. It was going to be a good day.

Again, this is okay. There's a lot of detail that can be add in to make it look nicer. Ask yourself: What are clouds like? Are they fluffy and fat? Wispy and thin? Feathery and carefree? What color is the sky? It's not always that clear actually. It can be lighter or darker shades, all depending on the clouds. Does it feel hot and humid out? Or is it breezy and at a comfortable temperature? Was the porch wooden, brick, or cemented? Was the the house new or old?

Is Derek relaxed or alert? Just because it seems like he's doesn't mean he is. What are the kids doing? How do we know that it's going to be a great day? All of this can be put in there and make it better. Also, you can describe the sun and moon as celestial bodies. Knowing that word and what it means helps expand your vocabulary.

Example 2: The large, burning celestial body blazed fiercely as the time slowly crept its way up to noon. The thin but wispy alabaster clouds floated across the clear, cyan sky, making it almost seem like a mosaic. Derek, a tall, lanky man, sigh softly in relief as he approached the old, abandoned house. By the looks of it, time and nature have worn away the wooden home at a slow but steady pace. All of the windows were broken and there were multiply large holes inside and outside of the house, vines and other signs of vegetation grow all over. The silent male shuffled over to the porch at his own pace and placed his rump on it. The wood underneath lightly creaked and groaned soft but otherwise, it was able to hold his weight without caving in. The leader leaned back ever so slightly and let his eyelids droop halfway over his pale green oculars.

He silently watched his younger companions play around in the field in front of him. They were playing a childish game called freeze tag but hey, everyone has an inner child within them. Even though he appeared to be resting he was actually alert to every single noise and movement happening right now. Though a part of him was happily content and had the faintest of smiles formed on his plush, light pink lips. No having to run from hunters since they've lost pursuit several miles back in the thick, dense forest. Today was going to be a great day after all.

[b]Answering all of the questions I could think of helped me get a paragraph and a half. By adding in that simile and personification gave you an idea of how it was imagined. We'll go into detail about that stuff that after a few things. So now it's your turn!

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1. Allen went to the store and bought groceries. He met a girl named Miranda there and left with a smile on his face. Boy, he was a happy camper.
2. Susan went to a restaurant and waited five minutes before she was seated. Her waiter was slow and had poor manners and her dinner was terrible but the desert was good.

(.whisper.) · Jul 18th 2014

[justify][size=11px]black x fawn
Bb Dd x b1b1 dd

B b
b1 Bb1 bb1
b1 Bb1 bb1

D d
d Dd dd
d Dd dd

kittens will be black, cinnamon, blue, or fawn

cinnamon x chocolate
b1b1 dd x bb1 Dd

b b1
b1 bb1 b1b1
b1 bb1 b1b1

D d
d Dd dd
d Dd dd

kittens will be chocolate, cinnamon, lilac, or fawn.

blue x fawn
Bb Dd x b1b1 dd

B b
b1 Bb1 bb1
b1 Bb1 bb1

D d
d Dd dd
d Dd dd

kittens will be blue or fawn.

(.whisper.) · Jul 18th 2014

[justify][size=7pt]perf! c: do you understand what i mean when you can add plenty of details to posts? even the days you're museless, having the ability to describe (if it's possible because there are situations where you can't) will still give you a good paragraph or two. not many people think of that because most people stick to the generic things, you know?

(.whisper.) · Jul 18th 2014

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[hr][/fancypost][fancypost bgcolor=; border: 0px; width: 500px; font-family: georgia; font-size: 11px; text-align: justify;]Display Name:» rin (just call me whisp cx)
Activity: 7/10-8/10 though I might not be on next week and two days.
Roleplay sample:

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The grassy clearing use to be clean and free from contents spilled out of human bodies. But now many dead bodies layed scattered all over the place, crimson liquid soaking into the ground and drying at a slow but steady pace. Two figures stood amongst their fallen cormades as they breathed heavily, holding each other in electrifying death glares. One was a tall, muscular tanned male that had a swollen purple eyes with blood trickling out of the side of his mouth and down his chin, dripping to the ground. His black vest was shredded horrifically and had specks of red dots over it. His one good eye, a hazel color, blazed in utter fury as he stared at the other, who did the same back.

The other male looked no better but it was clear he wasn't human at all. Many long, slightly ruffled tails waved within the still air, the smell of something metallic filling it up. His oculars were a leafy green and had his pupils narrowed into tiny slits as he watched the hunter in front of him. He let out a gusty breath and bit his tongue, cursing inwardly. Taking in those arrows to the hip and thigh was a stupid idea but at least he tried to save his friends. His lungs burned painfully with each breath he took. One of Daniel's friends rammed a knife into his chest, puncturing a lung. The only good thing that came out of it was that the son of a gun died a few minutes later, burning to death as his friend Jean burned him to death.

"Why?" the supernatural being spoke, voice steady and soft. A victorious smirk landed on his burised lips as the other man looked completely surprised at how he sounded. "What do you mean why?" Daniels voice was rough and scratchy as if he hadn't used it in ages. A dark, throaty laugh boiled in Casper's chest and bubbled out of his mouth at a quick pace. It was cut off quickly as it started as the kitsune went ridged and looked more like a fox as fury etched itself on his face. "You're such a fool! This all could have been avoided!" That being said made the hunter bristle in defiance. "No! If your kind wasn't around this would of never happened!" the tanned male hissed through his teeth.

The creamy male snarled in anger and hurt at those words. Yes, kitsunes were notorious for being trickster spirits and causing trouble but what creature doesn't? In addition to that the taller male knew more about his kind than anybody because he was a hunter... For his kind. Couldn't the guy just give him a break and quit with all of the chasing and fighting, which was constantly repeated over again. Then it landed them here, a miniature but catastrophic fight that ended badly with such terrible casualties. "This all of your fault. All. Of. It!" Daniel kept hissing and spitting. The fox spirit huff in ignorance and wetted his dry lips with a swip of his pink tongue. The sudden need of water hit him like a bus and exhausting rushed over, coating him in its embrace.

Casper wobbled slightly as he took a step back and tensed up. Seems like his hunter buddy over there was ready to continue on. "What are you trying to accomplish here Daniel?" the chocolate haired male questioned warily. He had a feeling that the answer wasn't going to be good and it wasn't. "To kill you and use you as a personal rug," the hazel eyed male growled quietly. If not for his keen senses for being a kitsune, he wouldn't of heard it. A wicked smile twitched up the corners of his blood caked mouth as a low, mocking whimper came out. "Oh no. Please don't hurt me! I'm just a wittle ol' fox that's lost his way," he sneered in a snarky tone.

"I'd be careful if I were you. You have no idea what I could do," Daniel gritted through his teeth. "Oh no. No, no, no, no, no, no, no. I don't think so buddy. I'm going to kill you and then bury my friends," the old soul wiggled his index finger. "Oh really?" The twenty-one year old hunter reached a hand into his back pocket and grasped cold and metal. "Really!" Casper shrieked as he fully transformed. The kitsune leapt at the man and froze at the sight of a familiar gun. It wasn't like any other but it would take more than a mere regular person to know what it was.

It was the Colt.

With lightly fast reflexes, Daniel pulled the saftey lock back and aimed at Casper's heart. "Hasta la vista foxy," he grinned evilly before pulling the trigger.

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(.whisper.) · Jul 18th 2014

[align=center]brown ticked tabby x cinnamon
Bb Dd Aa Tata x b1b1 dd Aa Tata

B b
b1 Bb1 bb1
b1 Bb1 bb1

D d
d Dd dd
d Dd dd

A a
A AA Aa
a Aa aa

Ta ta
Ta TaTa Tata
ta Tata tata

kittens will be black, blue, cinnamon, fawn, black ticked tabby, blue ticked tabby, cinnamon ticked tabby, or fawn ticked tabby.

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chocolate tabby x fawn tabby
bb1 Dd Aa Tata x b1b1 dd Aa Tata

b b1
b1 bb1 b1b1
b1 bb1 b1b1

D d
d Dd dd
d Dd dd

A a
a Aa aa
a Aa aa

Ta ta
Ta TaTa Tata
ta Tata tata

kittens will be chocolate, cinnamon, lilac, fawn, chocolate tabby, cinnamon tabby, lilac tabby, or fawn tabby.

Tabies will be ticked.

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blue x lilac classic tabby
Bb Dd Aa tt x bb1 Dd Aa tt

B b
b Bb bb
b1 Bb1 bb1

D d
D DD Dd
d Dd dd

A a
A AA Aa
a Aa aa

t t
t tt tt
t tt tt

[i]kittens will be blue, lilac, blue tabby, or lilac tabby.

tabbies will be classic.

(.whisper.) · Jul 18th 2014

[align=center][size=11px]:o omg are you like, my twin?!

(.whisper.) · Jul 18th 2014

[justify][size=7pt]Darn cx Well at least I improved.

(.whisper.) · Jul 18th 2014

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(.whisper.) · Jul 18th 2014

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