Posts by Flyingrocks:D

[align=center][font=georgia]Alright!
Fly is here, to horribly critique your great stories! xD

but *ahem* alright...
honestly, in my opinion i really think they are good, and besides, your teacher i bet was like 'ah f*ck this kid, she didn't do her essay before *blows it off because she's an angry and impatient son of a bitch*' that's probably why you got a bad score on it xD. Or maybe it wasn't what she was looking for, but eh

but i love how your stories are usually right in their point of view, so you could see and understand how the character you're portraying lol big words and how he/she feels and stuff... but i'm not sure why, but i kinda get a repetitive vibe about it, because a lot of your stories are kinda like that... if that makes any sense. I mean, i love how you do it honestly, it's really good, but just... i don't know why, but i feel like your stories are kinda always like that, if you read each one though maybe you can kinda get the jitz of what i'm trying to say xD, but... yeah

but um... yeah, i'm not exactly a huge pro at critiquing stories, so hell what i'm saying is completely wrong and i'm just saying something that would make you fail more, but yeah, there we go

but let me say, i still love that story with Gwen's story it's so emotional and shit it was like 'oh my god noooooooeeee that poor boy!' ;w;, good story

... so um...
have... a kitty Jack Frost xD
[img width=340 height=510]http://i50.tinypic.com/1zdaez6.gif[/img]

[font=georgia]kitty Jack Frost makes everything feel better
but let me end this up with a good 'ol
bump

[align=center][font=georgia]before i do anything
... oh my god those tempates are amazing ;w;, they are so simple and i think anyone could make it but STILL... amazing ;w; *awes*

but wait... making a form... is this pointless if they are already in AVGHS? xD

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[align=center][font=georgia][color=black]Name:
Ellaina

Gender:
Female

Age:
like... 16 i guess xD

Personality:
When you usually see her at first, she'll seem just very quiet and shy... but get to know her, and she's... well a different story. When she's super happy or having fun, she'll get very loud without even meaning to, and probably would be the weirdest and spontaneous person in the world, not to mention she likes to joke sometimes. But usually it takes a bit to get to know her, so she usually seems kinda serious and distracted, and just... her really. She usually seems super happy half the time... but sometimes, that's a different story. But hey, just RP with her i don't think i'm even right with her personality xD

Looks:
Fuck pictures this is where it's at! She has super curly hair and deep dark brown eyes that sometimes seem black. She is one with make-up, and usually the only time you'll ever see her not wear it... is if she's at her house and you're staying over, that is when usually she doesn't care. But she usually wears whatever, though at times it's usually long sleeved, or a tank top, and usually it's always skinny jeans and converses. She also always leaves her hair down usually when around public, but once again you'll see it up when she's at home

Power/Weapon:
hell if i know

Romance [Crush/BF/GF/Spouse]:
Nope, she's forever alone, like literally in the other thread her only friends were legit, Radiant "dies a lot boy magnet xD" whatever her last name is and Ventus! I swear that's it! xD. ... but yeah lets stop with me ranting, and say, that's it

Other:
.... i still have a feeling i didn't even have to do this
BUT OH WELL IT'S DONE! xD

[align=center][font=georgia]... yeah true
... but i kinda noticed, in your stories you always seem to write in 1st person point of view, and i'm not sure why, it kinda seems repetitive if you think about it xD
but you're welcome about that, i tried my best

... but WELL THEN!
no kitty Jack for you then! xD
but... how the hell does Creepypasta make things feel better? Yes, getting scared shitless definitely makes me feel better! xD

but, if that's what you want... xD
... no lol just kidding ima post this instead! xD

[img width=172 height=510]http://25.media.tumblr.com/tum…fld1H7y11rr3gb8o1_500.jpg[/img]

[align=center][font=georgia](( hahaha i know, it's true though, she literally dies a LOT, and she's a magnet xD a legit, magnet xDD with butterfly wings and black hair...
iguessit'snotthebodythatcounts?XDtobehonestihavenoideawhypeoplelikehereither,she'sliterallylikeaboymagnetthere'sashitloadofguysthathadfallenforheratleastonceimeanerrgghxD
but oh sweet o3o
and please? 8D xD, they look sick

but question...
where should i start? xD ))

[align=center][font=georgia](( no.
she's a magnet with butterfly wings >:u xD
and um... errgh... errmgh.... wertoin... well.. um...
*sits there for a straight hour thinking*

... well, how about we just use black to white *no particular order, sorry i'll just let you decide xD*... either that or black and light blue... but arrgh i don't know
and for the symbol just use this fancy dancy thing: ♫

but oh okay xD
i'll do that... after the template xD ))

[fancypost bgcolor=transparent; borderwidth=0px; width: 430px; overflow: auto; height: 130px; padding: 2px; font-family: georgia; color: #000000;][justify](( ooh wait... i get it now xD
hahahahaha...
i still say she's a magnet /shot ))

Ellaina was wandering around aimlessly, like she usually did. This is what the curly haired teen just usually did, wander around aimlessly, especially when bored or thinking of other things. She wondered what her friends were doing, and soon she realized... that wow, it's been a while since she actually saw them, like... how many years? 2?... well what the hell was she doing? Sleeping, sadly Ellaina didn't even know where she went off to. She was, at the moment wearing just a kinda big long-sleeved shirt, that was bare on her right side, so you could see her straps and shoulder on one side, and as usual she was wearing black skinnies and just, some converses

But soon, she found herself bumping into Rose without even meaning to, as you can imagine, once again she wasn't even paying attention "oh, sorry!" [/justify][/fancypost]

[fancypost bgcolor=transparent; borderwidth=0px; width: 430px; overflow: auto; height: 130px; padding: 2px; font-family: georgia; color: #000000;][justify]Ellaina's expression while seeing that Rose had stopped herself from falling with vines was one of surprise, since well... she wasn't expecting that to happen at all. But soon, when Rose told her that, she nodded "oh... yeah, you're right" she said, rubbing her head "really sorry, i was well... just not paying attention, really sorry.... but um... at least, you didn't fall". It was then, that the curly haired teen smelled the blood, and soon, she frowned, turning her attention to what she was smelling, and wondering where that came from "... hey, do you smell that?"[/justify][/fancypost]

[fancypost bgcolor=transparent; borderwidth=0px; width: 430px; overflow: auto; height: 130px; padding: 2px; font-family: georgia; color: #000000;][justify]Ellaina quickly turned to face the girl, not looking too thrilled by her comment "whoop-de-fucking-do?... are you serious? What if it was somebody close to you that just died, would it be just another boring old death then?". But soon, her eyes widened, Kuro's powers starting to take effect as she saw the death now, fear starting to creep up, which made her shiver[/justify][/fancypost]

[align=center][font=georgia]Oh Emma...
well, i wish you luck in whatever happens in the real world, and blah blah blah blah acts like nagging mama blah blah blah

... so yeah C:
*waddles over and huggles*
see you, good friend!
Hopefully we can talk together again sometime

[align=center][font=georgia]oh really?
... we should, chat then C:, Via PM since i don't chat on the other chat anymore

but still... either way, i just... argh ;w;, i'm going to miss you man!
if you are going to leave for good...
but just *hugs some more* i really, wish you luck in whatever you do, and hope you come on this site some more c:

[fancypost bgcolor=transparent; borderwidth=0px; width: 430px; overflow: auto; height: 130px; padding: 2px; font-family: georgia; color: #000000;][justify]Ellaina on the other hand, was very much affected by what she was seeing. Things like this freaked her out, and you could tell by the panicked look on her face, but soon she tried to look over at Rose, though she was scared, since well, she could still see it "Even if you don't know them, you should care! They aren't always like Radiant, where they can just magically come back to life when they die, no they are gone forever" Ellaina said, growling "I mean sure, you aren't going to morn over someone you never really met, but if someone's dying you should at least be concerned! And simple logic my ass"

(( oh really?..
huh, then she's in her evil form... well that's a great way to start a friendship xD doubt there'll ever be one
but i have to admit, i think it's funny, usually when some of your characters meet Ellaina they always seem really annoyed by her and it always end up in an argument of some sort xD ))[/justify][/fancypost]

[fancypost bgcolor=transparent; borderwidth=0px; width: 430px; overflow: auto; height: 130px; padding: 2px; font-family: georgia; color: #000000;][justify]Ellaina looked up at the rather massive vine with eyes rather wide, but letting sadly her reasoning get the best of her instead of well, a fancy dancy word called logic. She looked over at Rose, and glared "if your high authority then the world is surely screwed huh? But let me ask you something, isn't there a way, you could help those that are going through death? Instead of pathetically watching as they slowly die? And what if it was someone very dear to you, would you just sit there and watch as they die?". Sadly Ellaina couldn't seem to shut up, as she just continued ranting "we could see this person right now, just killed by some force... and you feel just, nothing?"

(( well... yeah true xD. But jeez, i think after this Ellaina's just going to hate her, and Rose... well i don't know how Rose would feel xD
but yeah you're absolutely right, everyone's been just annoyed with her, except for Rad xD. I feel like my character is just... super annoying or something xD ))[/justify][/fancypost]

[fancypost bgcolor=transparent; borderwidth=0px; width: 430px; overflow: auto; height: 130px; padding: 2px; font-family: georgia; color: #000000;][justify]Ellaina listened though her reasoning... but couldn't help but agree, well on some aspects at least "so... you have died once? Wow... you're rather lucky to be brought back from the dead. But i have to agree... with some aspects. A stranger's a stranger, but even if you never even met them, shouldn't they be shown at least some concern? Not just nothing?... But you're right with how other people feel about strangers, i guess it is just other people's opinions, but still, you just feel absolutely nothing for those you don't even know?"

(( oh... well haha yeah xD
it would just be bad, especially if Rose tries to torture her for her amusement. Like i can just kinda imagine them meeting again when Rose isn't in her sadist form, and Ellaina just kinda freaks and Rose is sitting there confused xDD ))[/justify][/fancypost]

[fancypost bgcolor=transparent; borderwidth=0px; width: 430px; overflow: auto; height: 130px; padding: 2px; font-family: georgia; color: #000000;][justify]Ellaina was surprised to see the other girl here... but soon, when that all happen, her eyes widened, and soon she covered her ears, she couldn't take the screaming "NO, STOP DON'T KILL HIM!".... but of course, her words meant nothing, and soon the poor guy was killed. Seeing all of this happen made her shiver and soon she wanted to throw up "... Death isn't always like this... it's not so vicious at all... it's usually... nothing like... that" she said "... but please... don't.... do that again". She was feeling fear, a lot of it, it was once again written all over her face, and she tried to avoid looking at the man[/justify][/fancypost]

[fancypost bgcolor=transparent; borderwidth=0px; width: 430px; overflow: auto; height: 130px; padding: 2px; font-family: georgia; color: #000000;][justify](( hey Dragon, my brah... i'm kinda confused, there's two girls xD. It is to my character... right? ))

Ellaina gulped, but soon forced herself to be more brave... but she was still scared, that part was rather obvious "why the hell, would i give my life to 'save' others when it's obvious you don't save anyone?" she said, forcing herself to stay calm, but her voice was shaky. She seem to be, rather stuck in that one spot, she knew she should probably move, or run or some sort of shit that actually makes sense, but NOPE, she just stood there. She had to admit, this sucks, she didn't like how she was stuck in this situation... not to mention, she was rather pathetic as it came, so hell like she's going to fight back

[fancypost bgcolor=transparent; borderwidth=0px; width: 430px; overflow: auto; height: 130px; padding: 2px; font-family: georgia; color: #000000;][justify](( ooh okay xD
i thought it was for me, but then i was knida like 'well wait a minute... maybe she's trying to convince Rose to get scared or something' then i realized xD
alright, i'm glad i got it right xD ))

Ellaina shivered each time she spoke, especially when she spoke in her deadly tone. And she felt goosebumps, when Kuro said her name "wait... how do you... know my name? But you don't save people, you only revive those you kill, so you could kill another. That's not saving that's just cruel" she said. She felt rather huge fear, and wondered how the hell Rose isn't feeling the same thing. All she knew is... damn she should move or something this place is crawling with killers xD[/justify][/fancypost]

[fancypost bgcolor=transparent; borderwidth=0px; width: 430px; overflow: auto; height: 130px; padding: 2px; font-family: georgia; color: #000000;][justify](( haha yeah... i guess it would be pretty annoying if it wasn't... it would be too simple
but oh really?... good job getting grounded~ xD

but i wanted to say
i'm going to shove off c:
... as in leave
see ya xD

... but hold on
... how come everyone seems to always get angry or annoyed at her? Jesus Christ xDD ))

Ellaina seemed surprised "you... control shadows, then?" she said "but from what i hear, Gavin is brought back to life, but how come Kea has to give her life after that?". She was still scared, but once again, reason came into being, other than that darn logic, so she spoke what she felt, of course this is probably going to kill her someday, since well... yeah. But she was still scared, probably more now, because of a death threat[/justify][/fancypost]

[fancypost bgcolor=transparent; borderwidth=0px; width: 430px; overflow: auto; height: 130px; padding: 2px; font-family: georgia; color: #000000;][justify]Ellaina didn't say much of anything, since well, Rose spoke up. So instead she just listened intently, and stayed quiet[/justify][/fancypost]

[align=center][font=georgia]well... i don't know really, sometimes i just feel... just kinda awkward talking there :/, i'm not sure why, but i just do
but yeah i don't mind 'cha asking

but ooh really? :O
same here, i have no school as well c:
but you also have to go to the doctor?... what for, if you don't mind me asking

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emma ♥ wrote:

Oh.

I needed to change my medication and I'm really sick.

Imma pm yoooou :)

[font=georgia]ooh... well that doesn't sound good at all D:
is everything going to be alright?

but okay~ C: