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    oh! they would use the same cast? gooood. i can't imagine anyone taking the place of kaylee, or jayne or wash or any of them :P


    so i'm thinking of making my character the mechanic of the ship. sort of like the role of kaylee (pardon the reference), where he takes care of the engine, monitors stuff, etc. and maybe he can be a bit of a fighter when needed, too.


    he won't at all be skilled in managing the electrical components of the ship though (no robots 'n stuff). i don't want to overlap your character's abilities too much. and i don't want him to be overpowered. i hope thats ok...



    sorry im asking so many questions o_o my muse is just rampaging right now...

    ok now i can't sleep


    i'm just gonna post what i have so far, because my brain is a worthless piece of sludge that won't calm down and go to bed when it's supposed to



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    Name
    Saven Riger (sa-ven rī-jer)


    Nickname
    Sav, or just Riger


    Kind
    Human (cyborg)


    [font=georgia][color=black]Gender
    Male


    Age
    19 y.o


    Occupation
    Mechanic


    Crew position
    Engineer/fighter if he's needed


    History
    Saven Riger grew up on the planet Orelius- formally christened with the lengthy title of Phi Orelius 1.03A, it's colloquial name is much more common amongst the populous. Orelius is a small planet, not much bigger than a quarter of the size of the earth, that that was one of the many planets made habitable, then colonized, soon after earth reached it's carrying capacity. The people of Orelius are- or, were, rather, a hardworking society that made their lives by the innovation, production, and repair of automated vehicles. With Orelius's bounty of workable metals entwined throughout its terrain, the small planet quickly rose to be a respectable hub of automation and spacecraft engineering.


    Though an original descendant of Earth, of course, Saven Riger has always considered Orelius as his home planet. He was a mechanic's son, working part time for his father's shop, a brother, a worry to his mother, and even a lover (nothing serious) for a short time. At the age of sixteen, Saven Riger appeared to have his whole life laid out for him.


    Until the day.


    The terrifying, scarring day when everything young Saven knew was savagely ripped out from under him. Warheads rained down across the populated landscape, erupting everything into flames and carving huge craters where city blocks once lay. Children screamed, women cried, and even the boldest of men were struck petrified with agony. But soon, not even a faint whisper was heard. The missiles beat ceaselessly into the already slaughtered landscape until whatever force responsible for the attacks felt that the job was done. Among the wreckage, Saven lay in a broken heap, gravely injured. His right arm had been severed at the shoulder, and it didn't take a genius to know that he didn't have a long time left. Bloody, vision fading, and without any hope for survival, all Saven could do was wait for the death's cold embrace.


    But then, something mysterious happened. As quick as the bombings and explosions came, they suddenly drew to a halt. Then, they appeared. Out of the billows of dust dragged up from thousands of demolished lives emerged an ominous team of white-clothed figures. They carried a spooky, sterile presence with them. They seemed to float like silent ghosts toward a couple dozen or so crippled survivors like Saven. When one of the figures approached him, the last thing Saven recalled was seeing a pair of bright orange goggles staring down at him, and beyond them, a deep black void.


    The nest thing he knew, seventeen-year-old Saven was waking up in what appeared to be a hospital bed. His mind was foggy, his body ached, and his arms felt like lead... Peculiar... Looking down at his arms, the young man realized in confused horror that they weren't his arms at all, but a set of bionic ones. Thinking back, he could have sworn he had only lost one arm from the bombing. Struck with a sudden sense of fight-or-flight, Saven knew that he had to get out. No time to ask questions. This place wasn't right. Something was very, very wrong here.


    Somehow he managed to escape the mysterious compound he had woken up in, and was able to stow away on what he speculated to be an anchored trade ship. It was really, in fact, the ship of the notorious interstellar pirates. As the SSU Galactica took off into space, Saven pressed against the glass and watched his smoldering home shrink smaller and smaller into the thick, black universe. It didn't take long for Captain Ky Xendalia to pick up her stowaway's scent, and the two ended up by making a deal. Saven begame a regular crew member of the SSU Galactica.


    Personality
    Saven Riger will forever regard his desertion of his people back on Orelius as his biggest regret of his life. While staying back and pitching his efforts into fighting might have most likely gotten him killed along with the rest of the Orelians, Saven still can't shake the self-conviction that he was responsible for their fate. He abandoned them, and their deaths are a burden he expects to carry with him throughout the rest of his life.


    Upon joining the Galactica crew, a little more than a year ago, Saven initially approached his life and his predicament with uncertainty. So much had changed in such a short amount of time. But in time, Saven's true colors began to show, and he once again became the sarcastic, headstrong, and slightly abrasive character we all know and love.


    Tackling life with more complaints, shortcuts, and sarcasm than necessary, Saven, or "Sav" as he likes to be called, is still a good ways away from maturity. He never feels particularly motivated to take on any assignments outside of his job as a mechanic, (which he in fact takes quite seriously) so direct orders for such tasks are a must, otherwise nothing else would get done.


    In regards to his occupation, Sav has come to be known as the king of makeshift fixes, crafting parts priced at over-the-top market values from junk around the ship. While he is a respectable mechanic that has proven his value on more than one occasion, it is probably worth noting that some of his improvisations can be a bit on the dicey side. Sav has never had any sort of formal education, but if you ask him, experience is all the teaching you need.


    But no matter how experienced Sav is in the realm of mechanics, his coordination comes to a halt right there. When it comes to robotics, or computers, or anything heavily electrical, he is at a loss. This is rather unfortunate for the yoiung man with two bionic arms, as the prosthetic limbs are composed of both mechanical as well as electrical components, making self-maintenance a painstakingly fruitless feat.

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    Name (Nickname): Raiko (Rai)


    Gender: Male


    Age: 17


    Nation: Fire Nation


    Weapon(Optional, but recommended): Dual dao swords


    Skills(Engineer, Mechnic, chi block, etc.): sword-smithing


    Appearance(Description needed): Beneath Raiko's wildly messy sandy brown hair rest two brilliant golden eyes that seem to never stop moving. Raiko's physical body is fairly muscled, but also relatively skinny, giving him almost a scrawny appearance. He has no major scars that are worth noting, but does in fact have a gap in the lower half of his cheeky grin where a tooth was knocked out in a fight some-odd years back.

    Personality: Raiko is a think first, ask questions later kind of guy, and he isn't ashamed to admit it. He is an outgoing, outspoken character who can never seem to quench his thirst for adventure. He leads a fast-paced lifestyle, never staying in one place for long, and is always up for a fight or a new challenge to test his skill. For a guy that spends time alone a lot, he's actually quite the people-person, and is all too happy to make new allies.


    Strengths(Must have 2 or more): cunning, excellent sense of direction, street-smart, persuasive, quick on his feet


    Weaknesses(Must have 2 or more): acts before thinking, tends to run away from problems rather than tackle them head-on, stubborn, selfish


    Relationships: None


    Crush (Dont be afraid to have characters mingle ;)): Single


    Sexuality: Straight


    Theme song(Optional): N/A


    History: Orphaned at a young age, Raiko spent the first few years of his life making his way alone on the streets of the Fire Nation's cities. Come age ten, he discovered a broadsword master who took him in as an apprentice. After six long years of training and learning the art of the sword, Raiko eventually picked up and left his temporary home, and sought out the adventure he had always been looking for.


    Other: Raiko's favorite animal is a bear.
    ...You mean platypus-bear?
    Certainly you mean skunk-bear.
    Or armadillo bear?
    Gopher bear?...

    Just... bear... :P


    Favorite moments in either series (Just curious :-[):
    This question is impossible to answer.
    I'm sorry, but the series as a whole is too amazing to pick apart. The last agni kai, though, it probably the most powerful scene there is.

    hehe, thanks so much ;D
    and actually, exams start tuesday... buuuttt i'd much rather spend my time here. reson is a bit of a procrastinator, in case you all weren't aware :P
    i'm actually at a hotel now, so i won't have internet for a couple hours, but i'll have a post up soon, never fear!

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    [font=georgia][color=black]The soft droning of the Galactica's idling turbines have always way of soothing Saven Riger off into sleep land. But today they kept the young mechanic asleep for a little too long. It was half past 1100 when the crew's droid navigator commanded the engines to fire up, and the sudden shift in tempo finally roused Sav from his long slumber.


    A mess of hair fell over his weary eyes in a shaggy, blonde heap as he pulled himself upright in his bed. With a drowsy, lion-sized yawn, he began his routine of stretching out his arms high above his head, working out any kinks in his prosthetics that might have seized up over night. He heard a soft chink in his left shoulder as he rolled it out. Everything felt fine. With a quick glance around his room- which was more of a medium-sized closet that branched off of the engine room- he saw that everything appeared fine. Sporting a quizzical expression, Saven for the life of him couldn't figure out what could possibly have woken him. Then he heard the swelling rumble of the thruster's start-up sequence.


    Cussing under his breath, Sav lept up from his bed, nearly tripping on the tangled sheets, and clambered into the engine room. From his cluttered desk, he statched up his pair of leather gloves- a necessity for the ship's mechanic, as attempting to pick up even a screw off the floor was surprisingly difficult for someone with metal fingers. Wasting no time in climbing up to where he had been at work the previous night, Saven worked quickly and without hesitation. He had discovered a small hole in the pressure sequence valve the other day. And being the fantastic procrastinator that Saven was, had put it off until the next morning. Well, morning had come and gone, and now Galactica was preparing to blast off at hyperspeed with a broken fuel valve. Wonderful.


    With one swift yank of a lever, Sav disconnected the thrusters from the rotor. He could already see the look on the little droid's face when he discovers his ship is stuck in standby. "Somebody's not gonna be happy..." he grumbled to himself. Unbolting the broken valve from the engine, Save gave it one good tug. Fuel spattered everywhere.

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    [font=georgia] this is gonna be fuuuunnn.... :D

    btw, i love the idea about the crew getting captured. ooh, maybe they could get caught out in space by official intergalactic police guys and both them and their ship is taken custody. they could be taken to some interrogation/prison facility and they have to get their ship back (and fix it) before they can escape.


    i know its not a lot of detail. i'm just letting my muse wander. i iz bored .~.~.~.~. :D

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    [font=georgia][color=black]Saven was far away in his problem-solving thoughts when a sharp beep from behind jerked him to attention. The comm link was brought up on the engine room's screen, and displayed on it was a very displeased looking Vicorian, along with a slightly more than irked droid.


    The mechanic forced a small smile and a very weak laugh, the broken valve held before him in his gloved grasp. "Hey, Blade... Cloud..." he spoke sheepishly, straining to make sure to address Cloud by his actual name instead of one of the many nicknames he had in his arsenal. Fur-bot, LANdroid, R2D2, iCloud... the list goes on and on. But seeing as how he was now the subject of a liability, Saven had to act with a little more discretion. "I was just uh..."


    "Mister Riger."


    Saven's heart skipped at the sound of his name. As if things couldn't get any worse, now the Captain was on his case. He hadn't even been on the crew for much more than a year, and he was already screwing up, and ultimately jeopardizing the whole mission. Maybe even their own lives. So much more the raise... the young mechanic thought in the back of his mind.


    With a pale gaze, Saven looked down at the busted valve in his hands: encrusted in grime, and dripping with fuel. He turned to glance back at the dismantled engine block behind him, then back down at the valve. It dawned on Saven just then how ridiculous he must look- still dressed in his sleepwear of purely cargo pants, barefoot with bedhead, and covered in aqua-tinged fuel, he looked nothing short of an amateur. The young cyborg had his doubts about getting the engine up and running in such a short amount of time, but decided to embrace optimism with his best poker face, for both appearances, and his own sanity. "Engine will be up in five, Captain" he asserted confidently, throwing in a salute to Ky-X as an added bonus. Glancing at Blade through the comm link, Saven registered her cold look immediately. "Less than that" he restated.


    To top it all off, as he turned back to work, Saven heard the nagging order from none other then Cloud himself. "Thank you, Roger Rabbot..." he snapped sarcastically, before snatching something up off the engine block and tossing it over the camera. The screen in the command room had a view of nothing more than the underside of a grime-ridden rag.


    After much guess and check, and a few improvisations, Sav eventually had the valve replaced. Everything was up and ready to run. It hadn't taken more then a couple minutes, but to his crewmates in the command room, it must have seemed like years. He quickly switched the connection back on between the rotor and thrusters. "We're set!" he called out to the mic. "Go! Ready to engage thrusters!"



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    [font=georgia][color=black]Not a moment passed before Saven felt the ship hum to life, and promptly thrust into motion. He signed with exhausted relief. They wouldn't become prisoners of the universal command after all. "Yes, Captain" Saven accepted, trying to sound less despondent than he actually was. But in truth, Saven was despondent, discouraged, not to mention disheveled, and many many other negative 'd' adjectives. Dumb. That's really how he felt. Completely and utterly out of it.


    Before slinking back to his room to wash up, Saven freed the camera of the grungy rag, and tossed the wretched object into some distant corner of the room. He wasn't that dumb. If something went wrong, and the only way to check on the engine was through an obstructed camera lens, Ky would surely have Saven's head. He could get iced for doing such a thing; tossed straight out into the cold abyss of space, as if he were nothing more than a piece of scrap. Well... maybe the captain wasn't that cruel, but of course, it could only come to that if Saven was able to survive the first wave of his captain's wrath. Boy, did he sure screw up...


    The blonde-haired mechanic lumbered back into his room and tried to push all those thoughts from his mind. He wouldn't sit around and get hung up thinking about the past all his life. He couldn't afford it. Wasting yourself mulling over the past gets you killed in the present. And Saven had done enough past-mulling for two lifetimes.


    In his room, Saven did a quick, and otherwise hasty cleanup, scrubbing the spattered engine fuel from his skin and hair, and tossing on his usual getup. Pants: check. Work-boots: check. Hoodie (sleeveless, of course): check. For a guy with no evident fashion style whatsoever, getting ready for the day was relatively quick and painless.


    He then proceed to make his way down to the cargo deck, as directed by the captain, and sure enough, there she stood, alongside the blue-haired Vicorian. Saven eyed Blade skeptically. Blue hair... Such an oddity, even for a nonhuman such as herself. Then again, up until joining the Galactica, Saven had never had much exposure to many species outside of the human race.



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    ooc: there's a possibility i might not be able to post for the next couple days. we're getting a huge snowstorm ???

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    "Three copper dallions?" a small voice moaned before the market stall. A small red-haired boy dressed in dusky green robes looked long and hard at the shiny amber gem that rest upon the table. Then his eyes wandered down to his hand, which held a mere two copper coins. "C-Couldn't you spare one small copper coin, sir?" the boy piped, his golden eyes filled with hope.


    The merchant of the stall shook his head solemnly. "Sorry, kid. Can't go giving out freebies to everyone who asks for 'em. Folks'll start thinking I'm going soft. And then I'm out of business."


    The boy aimed his gaze up at the merchant and brought out his sad puppy-dog eyes. "Please, sir?" he whimpered. "I fear that I won't be able to find my way home without a stone that's big enough" The red-head offered his two measly dallions up to the merchant once again. And sure enough, the trader caved.


    "Well now, I suppose I can make an exception, just this once" he sighed. "But don't you go tellin' nobody!" The merchant took only one of the two copper coins and granted the boy the deep yellow-orange gem that he had his sights on.


    "Oh, thank you! Thank you so much sir!" The boy was beaming. Without further ado, the red-head turned on his heel, gave a small wave to the merchant, and strode merrily toward the Gelinor forest. When he was a safe distant from the merchant, the young rascal plopped his extra coin into his left pocket. The coin made a soft chink as it landed among the dozen or so silver dallions within. From his opposite pocket, the boy drew out two handfuls of multi-colored gems, or "charges" of all shapes and sizes. Blue, amber, green, white, even a couple purple. The boy could hardly hold all of the charges before him in his two hands. Today was a good day, the boy thought with a mischievous smile as he lost himself in the multitude of treasures.




    [font=georgia]((Sooooo, for the basic plot:
    In this world, people can train in magic. To use magic, you must posses at least one of the five gem types called "charges": Blue- water, Amber- fire, Green- earth, White- air, or Purple- magic/law. The bigger the charge you use, the more powerful your spells. The more different color types of charges you use, the more complicated are your spells. Charge gems only last so long. The more you use them, they slowly begin to fade, getting clearer, and clearer until they're totally transparent and unusable. The more you learn and train with charges, the higher-class spells you can cast. So you could have the biggest, most powerful gem in the world and only be able to cast the most basic spells if you don't have the advanced knowledge. High-level spells suck up charge juice faster than low-level spells, too.


    I'm not exactly sure how charges are made, but I'm thinking that that could be a good plot idea. Maybe there is a way of making charges but it isn't very efficient, and our characters go on some adventure and discover that the humans have been going at things wrong the whole time, and we discover some big secret.))


    ((I'm thinking that for a starting post, your character could run into mine, and gems can fall everywhere, if you want. Just a thought.))[color=beige]

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    [color=black]The red-haired boy was in the midst of savoring the sight of his handful of charges when he ran smack into another person. The boy recoiled, and his stockpile of gems sprung from his hands in an explosion of color. Dozens of the tiny objects rained down and clattered to the dusty ground. The boy mumbled something inaudible, and feverishly began collecting the gems from off the floor. From somewhere far behind, he heard a new, but familiar voice shout.


    "You mangy little imp!" the merchant, who had sold the boy his last gem for a more than reasonable price bellowed. "I've had about enough of wicked, good-for-nothing rascals like you scamming me! Get back here and I'll show 'ye-"


    The angry merchant clambered out from behind his stall and was rapidly approaching. The young boy desperately grabbed at his scattered treasures, along with a few unintended fistfuls of sand, and shoved them into his pockets. He thought he saw the person he ran into reach for a stone or two, but to his surprise, they didn't steal it for themself. A small hand reached out and returned the boy his rightful (rightfully stolen) charges. The boy looked up for just a moment to accept the small gems, and to his surprise, found himself looking at a young blonde girl, about his age. And it wasn't just any girl. She looked too proper to be scraping by the streets like the red-haired boy. Her spotless cotton dress verses his tattered tunic, her neatly cut and pinned locks compared to his scraggly head of hair. She was almost aristocratic. Probably a daughter of some high-and-mighty noble.


    "-tear 'ye limb from limb and feed 'ye to the rats!" The red-head blinked, the impending danger of the irate merchant snapping him out of his daze. Without a thought, he grabbed the young girl by the wrist and dragged her to her feet with him. "Run!"


    ooc: no, there's not gonna be romance..... no...

    [align=center][font=georgia]hey guys, sorry i haven't been on in a little while. life's just been busy (life? outside the internet?! no... what is this madness...) anyway, i'll get a post up soon and be a better/more committed role player in the future. promise :3

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    [font=georgia][color=black]Saven accepted Ky’s order of searching the crates for bugs without a second thought- he didn’t really have much of a choice either way- but her second request of him was less easy to stomach. Sparring practice. With none other than Blade herself. There wasn’t much in this universe that Saven felt he couldn’t handle with his unceasing willpower alone. But facing Blade the Indomitable was a feat that seemed to grow more and more daunting with each session.


    The young mechanic turned to begin searching the boxes for bugs as his captain directed, but he couldn't shake the thought of the gruesome training yet to come. In spite of his predicament, he shot a glare to the blue-haired Vicorian, only to see her return his glance with such a haunting grin, Saven felt his spine tingle. You sadistic, merciless… It was all he could do but to curse the alien through his thoughts. Saying anything to her face would be pointless; the young Vicorian hardly uttered a word. In fact, Saven hadn’t heard her speak once since his arrival on the Galactica. Suddenly Saven stood up straight from his work. His golden eyes staring straight into her icy blue ones. ”Why don’t you ever say anything?” he blurted out without a second thought. He knew he couldn't really expect much of an answer of her. Just as he knew that speaking to Blade in such a way on such a topic would likely get him trounced to a gutless pulp, but he was already facing a beating in the sparring practice yet to come.

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    [font=georgia]ooc: should they find anything on the boxes?