Posts by Animegirl256

I agree with kid when concerning the 2 forms and kid , I said earlier that your character was okay c:

@Akuma-When putting people to sleep, the opponent can fight that ability right? Because even if you hit them directly, they have to be able to try to fight it, otherwise any time you directly hit someone you can overpower them a lot. Also, when healing yourself using dreams, please don't make it so that you are fully healed, instead, just a little bit so that you are not in perfect condition once your enemy wakes up again. I need to ask kid about the amount of time the people are asleep so just hang in there okay? c:

@Akuma-

Okay, here is what kid said to me:
"It'd be better if it took a while for the opponent to actually fall asleep. Like its a gradual drowsiness until it finally kicks in. Something like it taking 5/6 mins. to actually knock the opponent out, maybe longer depending on the person, and they stay knocked out for 5 mins. so its a pretty good balance in my opinion. I think there should be a way though to counteract the drowsiness, such as the person affected/targeted to be able to shake it off before they're incapacitated. Otherwise it'd still be overpowered. He [you] did say that if his [your] character was attacked or startled the effects would wear off, but there should be a way for people to do it on their own."

If you could change your form to match what we're saying that'd be great and then we could potentially accept.

@Akuma-I like it! Accepted!

@nornslaver-yeah I was ready to accept your form but kid wanted to be sure you were fully finished so if the picture is all that's left, yeah you get the spot.
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@toxicsoldier-it's 4am right now, so I will read your form later today. I need sleep T-T

Okay, before I forget everything:

@ToxicSoldier- Here are the things concerning Ara that I really need you to change so that all can be fair.

1. I would really appreciate it if you would just get rid of the pheromone magic altogether. In a sense, using the pheromones to create illusions is the same thing as creating shadow clones for illusions against enemies. It is actually that magic in itself that both kid and I find it to be overpowered, considering your character is not an S-class mage. With that magic being removed, that means that you can't have your first ability and the last ability will have to be changed a bit, since like I said, the shadows can serve the same purpose. (Also, any weaknesses having to do with pheromones will have to be either removed or changed so things don't get confusing if someone *namely me* has to refer back to your form after a while)

2. In the Night Stalk ability, there is a time limit on the "invisibility" correct? Please do make that specific.

3. When creating shadow weapons, please do not make them "nearly unbreakable". If you fight against that weapon, there will be a harder chance in gaining an advantage. All weapons deteriorate at some point.

4. When using the Nightmare dome (like I said, please remove the pheromone aspect), make it so that it is possible to escape. S-class mages will have learned to trained their mental state into knowing what is real and not (I'm not saying it will work 100% of the time, but there needs to be a chance). You also said that using the spell is harmful to the user correct? You DO NOT have to do this, but I think it would make sense if even when the spell in ineffective, the user still gets some harm done to them.

5. Finally, you mention how light can weaken the dark spells. Currently, we don't have any light mages (we will get a lightning dragon slayer I assume, but keep reading) and most of the time, especially during the exams/trials, battles will be during the day, so that will seemingly almost always affect Ara's magic.

And then for Scarlet, I agree with kid , it looks really good, you just need to add more weaknesses (refer to kid 's last post)

Oh yeah, I realized I wasn't specific when I said what type of mage you are. I'm assuming if you are a regular mage, that means you are an S-class trial participant? If we ever run out of participant spots, we can always add a few more.

Just a quick FYI: I'm at my grandparent's until next Friday (?) helping out at my aunt's VBS. I know kid is in another state but I don't know for how long. Please hang in there guys, I don't know how often I'll be able to check up on forms and answer questions, but I will try. I can't really right now, but I wanted to update y'all. Thanks c:

I am back! I'm getting on to going over forms some more right now. Sorry for the wait everyone!

@Toxic-Yeah, like Kid mentioned, from what I've seen, you haven't fixed or answered what I asked you to. Mainly, you still have weapons in the 'Shadow conjure' spells as "nearly unbreakable". Also, you didn't answer my question about being able to escape from the Nightmare Dome (depending on the target's mental strength). Those are what I really need to be changed and/or answered before I can accept your form.

@Lunarlord- I really like your form, but like Kid said, maybe you could remove 1 or 2 currently known elements (seeing as they aren't S-class) and list some pros and cons. Or just like you did with the iron, list a weakness and we'll see from there.

@Cloud- I know you said that you wouldn't really use Dragon King mode all that much, but knowing that you could use it, I really don't like the idea of you having a "Dragon Mode". This is because you are just an S-class participant and even though it only lasts for 2 minutes, that is (in my opinion) too overpowered for my liking, even if I apply it to an S-class mage. Also, please to refer to Kid's post about your form because they get a say too. Aside from that, I really like your created magic! I'm excited to see it in use.

@Frost- Okay, so here's the thing about your magic: Both Kid and I find all of your magics to be the same type of thing, so if you could combine those into one, we'd appreciate it. Also, we don't really like the idea of the power gems because they don't really correspond with the magic used and it's not really fair that the weapons of darkness can just reform after breaking. Even with requip weapons, if they break, you have to wait a while for them to be restored. It's not often someone can nullify your magic, because of the sheer diversity between them. Finally, because the character is part cat, do you have some more increased senses or stats that come with that? If so, maybe you could lower those stats because of the already powerful magic.

@Cloud-Thank you for fixing your form c: You are accepted!

@Frost-Thank you! I really like your form and I'm excited to roleplay with you! You're accepted.

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full name&& Lana Mai Crowne
nicknames&& "Lan"
name meanings&&
• Lana- Valuable, precious
• Mai- Blossom of apricot
• Crowne- "deriving from the German "kron", Polish "krojin", crown, or a nickname for someone who had a tonsure in fulfillment of a religious vow.
aliases&& N/A
sex&& Female
gender identity&& Female
pronouns&& Female pronouns
age&& 22
birth date&& July 17th
sexual orientation&& Questioning
romantic orientation&& Questioning
social status&& Lower-middle
job occupation&& Unemployed
street status&& Not very well known.
other&& She does go around finding info on Baycrest to find those connected and kill them for revenge.
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written appearance (at least one paragraph)&& Lana is a 22 year old female, with long blonde hair that reaches to her middle back. She is either seen with her hair curled or straightened. With dark green eyes, she wears eyeliner, a small amount of mascara and foundation at most when she uses makeup. Her outfits usually incorporate her black leather jacket and a sheath for her homemade knife that can be found on her right hip. She has a slim figure and an intimidating look on her face that she naturally developed over time.
height&& 5'7
body modification&& On the inside of her right wrist, she has a small sun & moon tattoo to remind her that she if she can get through the night, she can get through the day. Here it is
hair&& Blonde
eye color&& Green
skin tone&& Fair
usual attire&& Lana usually wears a light gray patterned t-shirt with a black leather jacket and blue skinny jeans. She also wears black, knee-high heeled boots with a butterfly necklace and a sheath for her home made dagger placed on her hip.
faceclaim&& Katie Cassidy
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written personality (at least one paragraph)&& Lana, when you first meet her, will seem almost unapproachable. She wants people to perceive her as a threat, especially those associated with Baycrest. She generally likes to take control of things and acts stubborn against others, even people she holds close to her. That being said, if you are someone she considers a friend, she will become nicer towards you, open up and show her thoughts more. However, ever since the incident with the experiments, she has never fully trusted anyone else, in fear of something worse happening to her. She has a deep hatred for anyone that is connected to Baycrest, leading her to seek revenge on them. While she is working on finding targets, Lana is unpredictable, with a 'shoot first, ask questions later' attitude.

Lana will always fight for what she thinks is right, and she will go against you and your ideas if she finds them to be completely ridiculous or unsuccessful.
known quirks&&
• When bored, she tends to tap things (tables, containers, whatever she's holding, etc.)
blind quirks&&
• She tends to twirl her hair when she's not actually paying attention to something or someone.
disorders&& Diagnosed with anxiety and ADHD
illnesses&& N/A
birth and growth abnormalities/deformities&& N/A
habits/obsessions/hobbies&&
Habits:
~Twirling her hair
~Tapping her fingers on things
~She sometimes thinks out loud and talks to herself.
Obsessions:
~Finding info on Baycrest
~Learning about who she can trust
~Using and maintaining her homemade knife
Hobbies:
~Hunting
~Questioning people about Baycrest
~Drawing whenever she is able to find materials
~Stealing from people
abilities&& Lana, during her time at Baycrest has learned how to change the center of gravity in the area around her. The max amount of area she can affect is around 33 yards in diameter, but the larger the space she affects, the more of a downside it causes, but that will be explained in a moment. Lana can affect the center of gravity of up to 3 other people and things (not including herself) at a time, but it can only last for so long. She doesn't know exactly how long she can keep it working, but she guesses its around 30-45 minutes as she is afraid of what could potentially happen if she used it longer. The downside to her ability is that the bigger the area, the more subjects affected and the amount of time used can cause her to be in intense pain, sometimes to the point where she will pass out from exhaustion. She gets a headache, very minor or unbearable depending on the listed variables. Lana doesn't feel comfortable using her ability to the point where she can pass out, because she wouldn't know what was going on around her during that time. Also, Lana has learned that if she shifts her gravity just a little bit, she is able to run faster, not making as much noise.
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likes&&
• Rock music
•Hunting
•Her jean jacket
•Moving around (running, pacing rooms, etc.)
•Socializing (to an extent depending on the person)
•Drawing and occasionally graffiti
dislikes&&
• BAYCREST
•Headaches
•People who don't listen or cooperate to/with her
•Being degraded because of her social status
•Being unsure about her decisions
•People not caring about the well being of others, especially the ones close to them
•Guns
fears&&
• Losing someone who she holds dear
•Guns (especially the sound of gunshots)
•Using her abilities to the extent of death
•Being recaptured and experimented on by Baycrest
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history&&Lana has always been in the lower part of society. Not like unable to eat low, but an intense lack of money and small amount of possessions low. She was born an only child, to her two hardworking parents, each of which who had full time jobs, leaving her at home for most of her childhood. When she was around 10, her father was fired from his job at an auto shop in the less populated area of New York. This made life a little bit harder for everyone in the family, but they were still able to maintain themselves.
When she grew a bit older, at the age of 14, Lana was out on the streets, practicing some graffiti art on the buildings in the surrounding area, she was captured by Baycrest. She was tested on for 5 years until she got out and was able to go back home to her parents with her new abilities, appreciative that she was one of the survivors. However, when she got back to her parents, still inexperienced with her new abilities, Lana was ignored by her parents after accidentally shifting the gravity in the house, causing everyone to essentially float in the air. They were afraid of what would happen if she remained with them, so they kicked her out of the house with a few sets of clothes, a little bit of money, a suitcase full of toiletries and a dagger she had created before she was taken. This is how she came to live her life as it is now, searching for Baycrest and living life on her own.
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relations and ties&&
• Gregory "Greg" Crowne- Father; alive but lives separately from Lana
•Laura Crowne- Mother; alive but lives separately from Lana
theme songs (optional)&&
• [url=https://www.google.com/url?sa=t&rct=j&q=&esrc=s&source=web&cd=1&cad=rja&uact=8&ved=0ahUKEwjaytCny9jNAhUCfiYKHa9lAe0QyCkIHzAA&url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.youtube.com%2Fwatch%3Fv%3DpWRJAHaOrYg&usg=AFQjCNHZdCOlC3Gq6nC_paEtS2LyPdTgMA&sig2=AUoHi1ccRbOT266C7Jaocg&bvm=bv.126130881,d.eWE]Fireflight-Unbreakable[/url]
other&& None that I can think of right now, but if I need to let you know something, I will.
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@Krupa- I really like it! The history is interesting and the magic is actually something I haven't worked with before when it comes to canon magics (because Romeo has that magic) and I'm excited to do so! You're accepted!

@Astral- I like Nyx and her history a lot, but (I hate to do this >~<) I feel like 3 dark magic users in the guild would be just too much and there isn't much diversity. If you could change your magic, that'd be great. I'm really sorry about that by the way. I hope you understand my reasoning. As for being an S-class mage, there's too little people for the S-class to participant ratio to seem okay to me and Kid. However, we will have to figure out a way to decide who is the winner of the exams, so just keep that in mind and I'll get back to you when the time comes!

@Astral- its perfect! thank you for doing that. You're accepted!

I'm gonna make a plotting thread now and I'll put the link for it on my first post in a few minutes. I'm not sure if Lunar and Toxic have seen my posts regarding their forms, but we do seem to have enough people to start and if they do join later on, like I said, we can add more spots in both categories.

Okay, I put the link for the plotting thread on my first post under all of the claimed spots!

Damn, I'm stuck between your 1st and 3rd idea....
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But actually, the first idea would let her get to know the guild better, how they act, and what their priorities are, right?

I'm leaning towards the first one, because knowing Ryuko, I have a vague idea of how she'd react to your character simply talking about the dead master. Perhaps one of Ryukos closer friends can rush forward as she advances in anger and quickly calm her down just before the magic council arrives. But yeah, we should establish relationships. Let me get on the computer and I'll start looking over everything real quick.

Oh, and Kid, before I forget, later tonight, maybe after fireworks I'll fix my form on the other thread.

So far, not including Katsuki, we have 7 members that we are actually in control of. Like I said before, I'm still waiting on Lunar and Toxic's forms to be fixed, so we'll just group the people we have right now.

Should we group by personality or magic, like how Gray and Natsu (jldfjalfdsklf) are opposite elements, but they're kinda like bros?