Posts by KateandHumphrey1234

I would like to join and am a experience player with a new account but first question are you semi-advanced?

Ok because i Usually get stuck with a person who just writes like 3 words and I don't like it but lets get started
(Is it like the law that In Alpha and Omega that a alpha and omega cannot be mates?
Name~Snow
age~20 moons
looks~A pure white wolf with deep blue eyes
history~Snow was once in love with the leaders alpha but when that happened she was forced to marry the neighboring packs heir and there love was lost.
personality~Snow was once a loving caring funny wolf but since he lost his love he had turned to a depressing wolf that did his duties and escaped to a cliff to stare at the moon

Snow was walked out of camp as he bumped into a omega and mumbled "Sorry" before continueing out of camp as he stole a glance at the alpha female Kate with some watery eyes and started to run out of camp when the mate came up and he sat on the cliff and the cliff had a meaning to him that he would never share. He really missed Kate as he sighed with sadness his eyes still watery.

Will be better formatted later

(If you want to read a story I made please just pm me I need some reviews before I publish the first chapter on Fanfiction)

I am going to post this on Fanfiction and I need some reviews first

FIRST STORY (Would like constructive criticism)
Lets get some things straight, I'm replacing Garth with my charrie Snow for Lilly and will post Bio next chapter and will do Pov's of all of them and I'm writing this on my phone so may take awhile to update and apologize for any auto correct mistakes I orverlooked (Please tell me if this is too long)
Chapter 1 It Takes a Turn The Worst
Humphreys POV

It was just a normal day in the western (was it?) pack as I walked through camp and smiled to a few wolves as I recalled the recent events that have plauqued my mind with memories. From rescuing Kate to seeing Garth and Kate divorce it had been an interesting week. As I walked through camp I saw Kate aproaching and we smiled as nuzzled each.other. I felt warm sensation spread through my body as we touched. "I love you Humphrey" she barked as I just stood there in her embrace. "Want to go on a walk before the moonlight howl?" I asked with a smile. She smiled "I'd love to" she said simply. I led her around the familiar territory in silence our company was enough for our endless love.

As the sun fell over the horizon I nudged her towards the mountain "We should probably start heading there." I commented as we sped up slightly. We emerged into the clearing and saw a few wolves already here. Me and Kate waved to them as we took our usual spot at the top of the mountain. As more wolves started to appear I howled first as Kate joined in. Our howls harmonized together in bliss as other couples joined in. Kate leaned on my shoulder and I knew we were meant to be together. As the howling died down me and Kate finished along with the last few wolves. With the moonlight shining on Kate's fur I looked at her beauty mouth agape as she giggled. I blushed and looked away but looked back into her eyes "Kate can I ask you something?" I said nervously looking into her face "Will you marry me". But instead of the surprised face I was met with a forlorn face l "what's wrong Kate" I asked nervously

Kate's POV

I was on the verge of tears but not the good kind as I choked on the verge. She couldn't say yes not now, not with the arising problem. All I could manage to say was “I'm sorry" and I ran away In tears rolling down my face. I ran to my den as my dad asked "What's wrong Kate" as I cried into his chest. “He asked me to marry him" as I felt him nod “Sorry Kate but It's the pack law" I cried more as my mind flashed to Humphrey and I really hoped he would be ok.

Humphreys POV

I stood there as I felt tears coming 'what did I do wrong' I thought. I felt a tear roll down my face as I ran off to my den. When I got there I broke down In tears as memories flashed to all the good times we had together. But as the thoughts of Kate were going I was pounced on by someone I assumed was Shakey and I grunted “Shakey get off me" I howled but no response came. My lack of silence cause my eyes be covered as I was engulfed by darkness.

My eyes opened to 3 silhouettes and the moon as my eyes adjusted I saw It was Kate, Winston, and Garth. Winston then barked with a growl behind it “Humphrey you have charged with the murder of a litter of pups and one alpha, your punishment is banishment from this pack!"

Don't you love cliffhangers :)
Please tell me what you liked and what you didn't and what would make it better.
Work on the second chapter and hope to release 2 chapters a week.
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Snow looked at the moon forlornly as his heart felt like it was shriveling up when he decided to go back he put on his tough face as he walked back and sat besides Angel with a sigh as he stared at Kate and her mate with a sad expression

He looked at Angel "Wha" he said surprised that she had spoke to him but when he saw her cowering and licked her shoulder in a comforting way "Hey I won't hurt" he said surprised that someone would think he would her.

Snow just looked at her going into like a trace as he thought of the memories of Kate and of how he felt when they became mates as he started tearing up before snapping out of it and looked at Angel closely "Sorry for bothering you" he said before starting to stand up

He looked at her with soft eyes “are you sure" he asked unsure “i wouldn't want to be a pest" as he sat down and looked at her

He smiled "yep that's my name" as he bowed respectfully "and your name is Angel i think"

(Sorry if it.was.short.on phone amd didnt want to worry you)

Name: Humphrey
Age:15 Moons
Rank:Warrior

"Well it's a very nice name" He smiled and licked her shoulder "I hear your name and I don't want to keep you waiting" as he walked to his roomy den alone and in the center started thinking about Angel

(Had Lunch)

Snow snapped out of his thinking before walking out of His den and snuck out of his den so no other alpha would question him as he didn't even notice anything as he sat in his usual spot at the cliff.

Snow looked to the moon and closed his eyes in bliss and the next action just came naturally.
He did one simple action.............Howl.
For the first time in his life he howled a song of sorrow and hate to the sky full of emotion.

He just stopped suddenly as he laid down where he was as the sounds of the forest soothed him. He drifted away like the leaves as he fell asleep his head in his paws.

Snow woke to the sound of birds chirping and the rustling leaves as owls settled down to sleep. He stood up and walked slowly back to camp and sat down as he waited for the leader to hand out orders.

Snow looked over at Angel "Hey Angel" He said with a smile and motioned to sit next to him.

"Are you ok" She asked noticing a limp "Who did it to you" he growled looking around

He nodded "Ok" and looked at her "So what are you gonna do today" I asked trying to get to know Angel Better before he had his alpha duties

"Now who would boss you around" He asked curiously not knowing many bad alphas. "Your such a great wolf to be around" he said nudging her playfully

He started to choke on his words no wolf has touched his heart in such a way since his old lover. His face flushed with redness "Well ummmm I" He scratched his ear "I think it's time for my alpha duties" He said quickly standing up not ready to get close to someone else.