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§☺♥♪Dragonflight♪♥☺§ Is Back! Hoorah! wrote:

As Amber padded outside of the dark den, her golden fur billowed in the breeze. She closed her eyes and inhaled deeply, taking in the scents of the forest, but as words were being spoken, she flashed them open. Watching gratefully up at the leader whom had allowed her to stay. Though she did not want to bring any trouble to camp, she knew her brother would come. She could tell. When LightningStrike finished speaking, she made her pain painstakingly decision, and padded over to him. "LightningStrike... I have something I am in need of telling you..." She warily said, her eyes glimmering in the light, they were wet with unshed tears. These Pokemon were nice to her, but she did not want to help bring in a battle.

Dandelion cackled to himself, he was up in the shadows, sitting happily up in the trees directly above ThunderClan Camp. He would stay quiet, not a sound, and his piercing red eyes glowering down at the Pokemon below. Twirling around his fingers was an eerily blue shadow ball, and, occasionally, he would fire it into the sky and catch it. Sighing, a frown formed on his face, as he whispered to himself; "Oh Dandelion, dandelion, how I despise thy name Dandelion... how fearsome can thou be if one has such a name as Dandelion... If thou owner had named me good, maybe thy mess would never had occurred. Little does thou sister know, I am thy Pokemon who attempted murder of thy owner. Thou markings gone, and power abrupt, I shall finish thy deed one of these days..." He growled out loud, and vanished into thin air, though he could fly, he preferred it when he absorbed the shadows, and lucid wings of darkness sprung upon his back. Smiling once more, he vanished in the sky top the mountain tops, towards Bear Cave.

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[color=yellow]"What is it, Amber?" Lightingstrike asked, sitting down beside the Ninetails.

Character Name: Plumpaw

Character Age: 7 moons

Gender: She-Cat

Alliance: Thunderclan

Rank: Apprentice

Appearance (6 or more sentences):
-She is a orange-ginger tabby with yellow eyes and medium sized legs.
-She has short, sleek fur and can easily get cold from harsh cold winds.
-She has long, sharp pointy claws a long ears, and tail is two mouse-lengths of from the ground.
-Her pelt becomes soft and fluffy after its been wet, just like her brother's.
-She has long white whiskers and a kinda wet light pink nose.
-She isn't fat or skinnier, but in between the size. She is at least a bit smaller then a normal apprentice.
Personality (6 or more sentences--these sentences form their own section and do NOT count towards the 4 groups below; those are additional requirements):
-She is stubborn like her brother, yet has much more since to keep her mouth shut.
-She is gentle and caring with kit, and will never get them into harm's way.
-Plumpaw is also always ahead of herself when it comes to training or defending her clan. Once her mentor advises her on one step of the training-- she races ahead before her mentor could give the final intrusions!
-Shes different then any trouble-makers. Shes not very cranky or rude-- just curious!
-She is loyal and respecting and loves teasing her brother.
-She can get easily annoyed and pissed off, but will try to hold it in.
---Likes (at least 3):
-She enjoys teasing her brother.
-She loves it when her fur gets all fluffy after her fur drys.
-She loves helping the medicine cat or cleaning up the elders.
--- Dislikes (at least 3):
-Snowstorms, Cold wind and Thunderstorms.
-Cats complaining over small things.
-She hates it when her pelt gets sticky.
---Strengths (No MORE than 5):
-Her long claws help her slice deep wounds if necessarily.
-Current things camouflage her with her fur. [The sunset in open places, orange flower, bracken or reeds.]
-She always believes Starclan is there to help her, with encourages her in battles.
---Weaknesses (At least 3):
-Strong cold winds and snow. [Reason: Short pelt.]
-She easily forgives people.
-She won't pay attention to anything around her if shes depressed.
History (8 or more sentences):
Her mother had given birth to four kits, Herself, her brothers, Ratkit and Coldkit, and her sister, Creamkit. Her parents always liked Coldkit the best, and treated him like a king, which made her and her other siblings [Mostly Ratkit] a bit jealous. Soon enough, her brother, Ratkit dared Coldkit to explore the forest and bring back prey that they could share. Unexpectedly, he accepted the dare. She started worrying, since she heard there conversation, And ran to there mother bursting out the whole story, which made there parents has a suspension Ratkit trying to kill Coldkit, but before they could do anything her brother [Coldkit] came back with a robin in his jaws, dropping it front of his brother. After a moon and a half, her brother ran off to prove himself worthy just like Coldkit. And, when the parents found out, they were to late. Ratkit was dead, poisoned by some crow-food smothered in twoleg gunk. Plum was sad he had gone, and was surprised Coldkit wasn't looking to sad for there loss. After while, her parents and Creamkit died because of a disease from a rat and only Plumpaw and Coldpaw got there apprentice ceremony.
Roleplay Sample {Required for first advanced bio}:
Coldpaw was first.
Comments (optional): -Part of a plot

"Tigerstripe!" Echopaw gasped, hoping the tomcat was okay. Shaking her thoughts from him, she managed to give Edena a good nip in the ear, spliting it off. Edena roared in anger and pounced onto Echopaw, digging her claws into the Echopaws chest, while Echopaw struggled for freedom.

Petalpaw succeeded to grab the toms tail, getting clawed at in her flank in the process. Biteing a hard grip, she pulled the tom closer so she could pounce and rake his sides.

Rock grinned and walked up to Breezestar, licking the blood from his lips. Suddenly Edena stopped clawing at Echopaw, and stared at him with narrowed eyes. "Do, it, Kill her!" She ordered. Rock seemed to heistate before pouncing to finish the Leader off.

OCC- She doesn't have to fully die, since clan leaders only lose lifes. If you don't want her to lose a life, you may interfere with one of your charaters. ^^

Dovepaw held his prey proudly, following his mentor with a smile on his face.

Rock stepped out of the way, grinning. He watched the two bang into each other and contincued to walk toward Breezestar.

Echopaw bit Edenas paw since she was distracted for her and pushed the she-cat off he, getting a hold down grip of edena. Her eyes shined with fury as she clawed a deep cut in the she-cats belly. "Never, Ever, harm any of my clanmates again!" She hissed.

Petalpaw succeeded in her attack and The cat managed to scamble away and run off, fleeing. Petalpaw purred in victory until she noticed Breezestar was down. "Breezestar! Addertail, hurry!" She cryed.

OCC-
Yeah. . but this is the Free Roleplaying boards. I didn't know Fan-Clans in here get badges.

And I'm not sure if Echopaw likes Tigerstripe, that's Phoenixfires choice. I'm just filling in for her characters since she called me and said the storm shut down her computer, and to keep these ones active.

"Do not worry Amber. If danger comes to us, we will fight to survive. Just like we fight to defend our clan." Lightingstrike said. "Danger comes from everywhere. This is how we life, with a live to be proud of."

"Okay, so you start by fishing by not showing your shadow on the water . ." Wind started to explain, positioning his body. "Then, you want till' a fishes shadows swim near your paws, then aim where its going--" He broke off as he pounced, sending a splash in all directions. Soon enough, the fish fliped into the air and Wind pawed it down onto land and bit the fish in the neck. "Now, you try." He meowed.

Opps, sorry. I was thinking of the warrior books. .x.

BUMP!

OOC- No, not yet. But It'll be over when Rabbitpaw's finally put to sleep.
IC-

Beetlepaw watched his sister go in the medicine cats den, hopeing everything will be fine, Closing his eyes, he drifted into an uneasy sleep.

Dovpeaw placed his preyon the ground and notice Rabbitpaw missing, but guessed she was on a patrol and went to go to sleep where he and Rabbitpaw picked, leaving Beetlepaw alone.

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Duststorm sneeked behind Rock, he springed at Rock, attempting to pounce on his back.

Rock yowled in pain, trying to thorw Duststorm off into the tree while Petalpaw dragged Breezestar to safety. "Breezestar? Breezestar! Wake up, please!" She cried.

Edena seemed to give up right away, grabbing the nearest piece of prey and managed to esapse Echopaws grip. "We have what we came for, now run!" She yowled, leading the way of fleeing cats.

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"Great!" Wind purred. "Your lucky you got it the first time, a-lot of cats get impatient during fishing! Sometimes, the fish don't soon up till' moon-high! But there's a good amount of fish here." His voice was cheerful now, his shyness now out because of enjoying a good time. He liked it here, and the cats with it, too.

Soon, Patchflower had caught another mouse and vole. She enjoyed hunting by the stream, as long the any the water didn't flick onto her.

§☺♥♪Dragonflight♪♥☺§ Is Back! Hoorah! wrote:

Amber was begging to become frantic, this Pokemon, whom she both loved and feared, had actually knocked out of the elite fours pokemon badly enough that it could never fight again, this pokemon, whom had killed, this pokemon, who would stop at nothing to get its way, was her brother. It was her own blood that she was scared of. "You don't understand! These wounds on my shoulder, they are deep enough to go far more then just flesh, my attacker spared me from not loosing this arm. My attacker, was my brother."

Lightingstrike was shocked from her words, his eyes where flickering around his camp, thinking of words to reply. Finally, he decided to say something that he did not clearly belive that the Riverclanners would love doing. "

"Hey, Pinkie, can you look after Splash for awhile? I don't want her wandering of the woods again without another warrior watching her. Since your the only one here, do you mind if you keep her busy?" Hawk asked, nudgeing the small marill forward with her wing.

Fishtail flicked up a fish out of the water as it approached her tail, which was waving along with the current. Catching the fish in her jaws, she sank her teeth into it then put her fish down beside her.

[font=georgia]Fernstep shurgged, blinking at the she-cat. "Well, I doesn't matter to me. But I was just worried that--" He broke off, his fur prickling at the thought. Hopefully she hadn't noticed heistated. "--Your leader might exile you from Thunderclan if I stay on your territory, since this is trespassing." He finished quickly, thinking. No, Mouse-brained! Get some sense into you, she'll never leave clan-life for a dumb piece of crow-food who left Shadowclan territory from stress. Would she?

Name: Sappial [Sap-pi-al]
Rank: Theives
Gender: [She-cat]
Appearance:
A beautiful, medium furred dusty gray she-cat with darker flecks on her pelt and pretty green eyes, including a devious smile that can fool any toms that aren't unemotional.
Personality:
A devious, flirty she-cat with a slight respect to her group-mates of F.E.A.R. Every cat thee knows she's just a little flirty devil looking for trouble, trying to make cat jealous and fight for her love. She just loves the dirty fighting, and in the end it'll get messy. . .
Other: (anything else you want to add or say) Roar!!

And . .

Dew came back into the Shelter of the cave, soaking wet. He dragged his paws sadly toward the den he had told SwirlingLeaf to meet him there after the kits had gone to sleep so he could talk to her. He still wished to have his sister, but he knew doing this was the best for the kits.

Shes a great cat for the job. But before I decide anything, I'll want to see a few more Form's so other members have a chance. :) Anyways, don't let your hopes down! Everyone has a slight chance of winning the parts.

BUMPing this up!