Posts by Beanie2000

"I have some bad news. As before I told you Shadowsoar got sick, well some how Reedtail has the same symptoms," Blazestar paused for awhile as cats gasped. "The worst thing is, Emberfur does not no what the sickness is and so far hasn't found a cure or anything to make the illness hold off for awhile. But, for now we must carry on as normal, Emberfur has reasurred me that starclan will help us. For now I want everyone to concentrate on training the apprentices. Bramblestrike I want you to continue training in battle for a bit. I want the other warriors to teach the apprentices to hunt basicly. We need to fill up the freshkill pile if we ahve sick cats. I will go out too to hunt, Bramblestrike as you are doing the battle training here I'm leaving you in charge of camp while I'm out. I'm sure the warriors can work out who are going hunting and who are stayinghere to train," Blazestar dipped his head and jumped down from the rock then dissapeared from the volcano and went hunting.

Ok thanks to evryone for answering me questions, XD Hey Moonfur, PM me about what? Blazestar's kin? Because if it's a plot idea you can post it on the plot disscussion page.

"And that over there is the elders den, maybe they'l tell you a story. And other there is the leaders den- Uh kits why don't you go see the elders and ask nicely if you can listen to a story? I'll come get you later," Silver mewed noticing the crowd of cats around Onyxstar, "What's going on? Is Onyxstar alright?" Silver aske djoining the crowd.

"Yes, but for now we're doing group lessons. I want you to stay here with Bramblestrike, keep the apprentices that haven't done any battle training here," Blazestar explained quickly before he went off to hunt. He scented the air and smelt a squirel that he spotted nibbling a nut. He stalked it and pounced, killing it swiftly. Blazestar buried it before he carrying on. He grinned when he scented a rabbit, it had been awhile since he had hunted one. He saw the rabbit chewing greedily on a patch of growing grass. A few seconds passed. Bang! That was the sound of the rabbit thumping the ground, a warning to other animals. Blazestar gave chase, his lean muscular shoulders gaining him speed, his strong long legs giving great strides. When he was almost on the rabbits tail he jumped. Soaring through the air he let out a yowl of joy as he landed on to the rabbit. He broke its legs so it couldn't run, then bit its neck. He smiled at his great catch, a big plump rabbit, a sign the prey would be plentiful this Newleaf. Blazestar picked up his catch carefully and carried it back to the spot he had buried his squirrel. He then dug that back up and took up the two pieces of prey, making sure the prey was kept clean. He knew he would give his catches to.

Blazestar padded into Emberfur's den and laid down the rabbit for Shadowsoar and Reedtail, "Here, this is for both of you. First rabbit of newleaf," Blazestar said smiling, his voice muffled by the squirrel in his jaws. "Thank you," Shadowsoar croaked returning the smile. Blazestar nodded and looked around for Emberfur. He spotted her with Cloudkit and padded upto her. "This is for you!" he called dropping the squirrel.

Viperfang smiled, "You really think this is the best thing to do?" Viperfand mewed happy the apprentice forgave him and agreed on his choice.

I'd say Greystripe and Silverstream. They were perfect for eachother,

Ooc: Gimme a second, I'll make another tom, Well, I've been planning to anyway, XD Ok, random post with my hare Zen so I don't get in trouble.

Zen scurried through the trees. He smelled the familiar smell of his friend, Redstorm, but when he looked he saw it was not her byt a cat and two younger ones. Are they ok? he thought. Zen turned his attention to the lush green grass on the otherside of the older tom. Should I risk it? Zen wondered. He made a dash for it, racing behind the tom. He then quickly nibbled some lush grass, ready run if he needed.

EDIT: Beechtree raced upto Burnout and the shadowclan apprentices. "What do you think you are doing!" Beechtree yelled, trying to act like a great warriior even though he had only just been made one.

Ooc: Beechtree is kinda like Berrytail, XD

"So, if you don't mind me asking, what were you like before you died? How old were you?" Viperfang asked nervously still carrying Stormpaw's lifeless body.

Character Name: Beechtree

Gender: Tom

Alliance: (What Clan/ Tribe? Or a loner or kittypet?): Bloodcaln

Rank(CANNOT be leader, deputy or medicine cat/med apprentice unless you are making up their clan/tribe): New warrior

Appearance(Must look realistic--NO RED EYES!):a short furred blue tom with pale grey-blue eyes and a round face with a snub nose.

Personality: I am a bit naive, but I am a good fighter.

History(Not needed; --CAUTION! To have joined Thunder, Shadow, River or Windclan from outside the clan they need to have done so at under 6 moons old! Note this on the bio if you choose to put in a history and go this route with it!):

Notes/Other:

"I bet you could of been a great warrior if it wasn't for me. What shall I do when I reach Darkclan camp, I can't just go, Hi, um sorry I killed you're apprentice Stormpaw because I was a evil cat but now I'm a good cat so heres his body back, can I?"

Blazestar sighed, tired from the days comotion. He groggily entered his den and slumped down. He smiled at the peace and closed his eyes.

Ooc: Prophecy time!!! Yeah, I decided he gets a prophecy telling him what he has to do. But can Emberfur get a prophecy telling her what the "Thing" is?

Blazestar opened his eyes to see a crowd of starry cats surounding him. He saw Reedtail and gasped, "What are you doing here! You're not dead yet! Wait, yet..." Blazestar trailed off and looked at the elder. "You're going to die, aren't you?" Reedtail didn't reply, instead a beautiful she-cat padded upto Blazestar, his mother. "Hello sweetheart. I don't have much time, so just listen to my words...

The foul wind will blow through the clan, making cats shiver and fall,
Cats will wait in terror, until they aswell collpase in the winds sorrowfull ball.
But do not give up hope,
Will the wind continue you ask? Nope.

But that does not mean you can relax and daydream,
No, what happens to the cats who live in the winds realm?
You must find the thing that saves them all,
Make sure you do not let them fall....

The cats dissapeared, leaving nothing, "Wait! Come ba-" Blazestar stared in horror as he feels the wind blow and a shiver go through him, then he fell...

Blazestar woke up with start, sitting upright and breathing heavily. What had the prohecy meant? I must go see Emberfur!

Blazestar got up shakily and rushe dout of his den. "Emberfur!"
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Cloudkit nodded and lay down and took a biet out of the squirrel, "yum!"

Ooc: What do you think?

"Are you sure? What if they figure out I'm lying? Give me a second!" Viperfang lay down Stormpaw's body and ran towards a mud patch he spotted and started rolling, disguising his scent.

Ooc: Ok, an thanks! I still can't belive I came up with it right on the spot! XD

"I-I had a a dream! A P-prophecy!" Blazestar stammered, still in shock. "I saw starclan and there was loads of them. And Reedtail! Yes he was there! I think he is going to die! Then my mother she came and talked to me! She told me something about a fouk wind spreading through the clan, and cats will die if I don't find the thing that stops it!" Blazestar blurted out. "Do you know anything about it? "
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Cloudkit nodded and smiled, taking another bite.

Sorry, my fault, XD

Ok, let me think.... Maybe something along the lines of this.

*Cats appear in Emberfur's dream, blah blah blah*

You have heard the first part,
The words sharper than a dart.
Now it is you're time to tell,
The story that Emberclan must dwell.

You know deep inside you're heart,
The journey you must depart.
To find the thing the clan needs,
You know what it is, It is apart of you're deeds...

How about that? And then Emberfur wakes up and remembers what the cure looks like, and she has a feeling inside her that she has to follow to find the cure?

Blazestar raced into the medicine cat den where Shadowsoar was lying next to Reedtail worried, "Quickly! He's dieing!" Shadowsoar yowled. Blazestar shook his head and closed his eyes, the picture of his mother came back into his head...

The foul wind will blow through the clan, making cats shiver and fall,
Cats will wait in terror, until they aswell collpase in the winds sorrowfull ball.

You must find the thing that saves them all,
Make sure you do not let them fall....

The words drummed into Blazestar's head, making it ache. He opened his eyes and watched sadly as Reedtail gasped for air, trying to get a hold on his life that was slowly slipping away.
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Cloudkit heard Reedtail yowling, "Reedtail!!" He wailed dropping the squirrel and rushing into the medicine cat den. "Reedtail! NO!!!!!" Cloudkit screamed, a tear forming in his eye.

Ooc:

Silver nodded. "Yes, earlier I came into his den and he looked really bad, but he told me he was fine and he talk in private so I left," Silver explained.

Uh... How about, a relative of Emberfur's?

Viperfang got up out of the mud and went back to Stormpaw's body, "There, I know I smell horrible but least it will disguise my scent!"

Ooc: So sad...

Cloudkit quietly climbed on top of Reedtails' body and ley down, snuggling into his fur. He closed his eyes, willing himself to go to sleep. Blazestar sadly sat down, feeling sorry for Emberfur and Cloudkit. Shadowsoar just leaned back, "B-but how? I had the sickness longer! Why didn't I die first!"