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hmmm...........What clan?

GIVE US A HINT!!!!!!!!

Once Brackenheart had lost her sisters scent, she flopped down onto a peiice of moss. It took her a heartbeat to realize that she crossed the border. It was too late though, a patrol of Shadowclan cats surrounded her, hissing and snarling. A huge tom leaped on her and pinned her down. He raked her spine and Brackenheart let out a painful yowl. She tried to turn and swipe at him, but she couldn't reach him. He raked her back again and blood gushed from her back. She let out a high-pitch screech before geeting her head pushed into the mud. A familiar scent washed over her. She looked up to see her mom standing above her. "Cripplefeather! Thank Starclan! Help me!" she cried. Her mother stared at her coldly and looked at the tom. "Continue, after you kill her, go after Ceadrstorm and use that as bait for Ribbonsky. Then kikll them both. We shall rule the forest shortly." She meowed calmly. Brackenheart's eyes stretched wide and she let out another screech. Her head was once again pushed into the ground and agony shook her body as she was exposed to new wounds each time she was hit with a powerful blow. She managed to scream once before she was pushed into the mud again, "Cedarstorm, Ribbonsky! RUN!"

Crookedstar????

The Shadowclan cats lept off of Brackenheart and Brackenheart raced after her sister. She is not leaving! Not when her kits are depending on her! Brackenheart thought furiously. She picked up her sister's scent and went to full speed. "Ribbonsky!" she yowled. "You can't abondon your kits like this!" she knew her sister couldn't hear her and Brackenheart stopped once she reached the end of clan territory. She sat down and hung her head. First my mate and now my sister. she thought. She sighed and laid down, closing her eyes.

I GIVE UP!!!!!!

When she slept, Brackenheart's dreams filled with memories of her and her sister playing as kits, training together. Then realizing that all of that was now gone. She awoke with a new determination. She had to find out why her sister was doing this. She pelting away and followed her sister's scent.

OOC: btw, why is Ribbonsky running away?

YES I GIVE UP

dUSTPELT?

Brackenheart finally caught up to her sister. She leaped on her and pinned her down. "What are you doing? Why are you leaving? You can't leave me or your kits! My mate just died and your kits are depending on you! WHAT ARE YOU THINKING!??!" She spat

WHAT!?!?!?!?!?!?! IT WAS DUSTPELT!!?!?!??! ........I feel like a genius

Oh I'm a goofy goober, yah,
You're a goofy goober yeah,
We're all goofy goobers, yeah,
GOOFY GOOFY GOOFY GOOBERS YEAHHHHH

Thnx Star Gazer :)

I have one

I don't do the same as the other cats,
My mother left me,
My brother never recieved his apprentice name,
I go to the water and sleep like any other cat,
WHO AM I?

(this is really hard)

Brackenheart stumbled to the side, shocked by the force of Cedarstorm's body. When she heard his wails shouting out how much he loved her, she felt her heart crack. She new that no matter how much love she secretly felt for Ceadrstorm, he would never love her back. She let the tom cover his mate with licks as Brackenheart turned and padded away. Tears streamed down her face, but she didn't let anyone see. Suddenly an ear-splitting screech shook the ground. Brackenheart turned to see the Shadowclan cats leaping for her sister and her mate. Brackenheart leaped in front of a pair of out-stretched claws that were aiming for Cedarstorm. She felt the cold claws dig into her throat and quickly felt the gush of blood spill around her chest. She fell to the ground and a pool of blood quickly formed around her.

Fernfall wrote:

I was old.
I was fron the clan of shadows.
Thunder's blue star took me in.
And I lived as a medicine cat.

Who is she:

What is "Thunder's blue star":

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Yellowang and Bluestar

SOMEBODY ANSWER MINE!

(yah, its fine)

Brackenheart was slowly fading away. She saw Cedarstorm fighting and tried to tell him to stop and run. Brackenheart knew what these cats would do to anything that got in their way. She shuddered when she imagined Cedarstorm get ripped, limb from limb by these brutes. Brackenheart balcked out, only to be awoken by a beautiful white cat. "My name is Snowlily. I am going to help you. You are part of a bigger prophecy and can't die now." Brackenheart couldn't speak. She heard the medicene cat say as she healed Brackenheart, "The bracken will rip away the feather, letting it burn into the fire. A raven will then rise and rip apart the bracken, only to be stopped by the rain." After Snowlily was done saying the prophecy, Brackenheart was pushed back into reality to be welcomed by seeing Cedarstorm fighting. The prophecy whirled in her head, but she pushed the thought away for now. She would think about it later, for now, she had to help her friend.

(if you want to know what the prophecy means, message me)

OOC: dang, i liked Ceadrstorm's plot idea. I think the two of those together would make the best story ever! It would be so exciting and dramatic! But, instead of Cedarstorm picking Brackenheart, how 'bout he picks her for a while, then realizes how much he loves you, and goes back to you! Do you like that idea?

IC: Brackenheart fought the Shadowclan cats.

I have one

I don't do the same as the other cats,
My mother left me,
My brother never recieved his apprentice name,
I go to the water and sleep like any other cat,
WHO AM I?

(this is really hard)