Posts by lilpuppie

Rainfeather stood up"I'm going hunting wanna come?" he asked ravenfeather

"What's wrong," she asked him worried

So here's the plot. my caracter.Silverbrook is a violent mean cat, who had been outcast from skyclan. then this tom falls in love with her. he is blinded by all the things she did wrong. then one day he sees her kill someone from his clan, but he still loves her so he trys to change her. ok

Silverbrook lay on the shore of the lake trying to wash the blood off her claws. She had just been banished from SkyClan for killing her brother, Rockshade. Her silver pelt had been washed from the blood already.

Silverpaw growled "let go of my tail"

ok

Ashpelt snorted "ill try" and lashed his tail

Silverpaw jumped in excitment "I love hunting, even if i can't see in one eye"

Silverpaw crouched down and stalked a mouse. It ran on her blind side, and she lost it. She sat up and sighed "I'm sorry" she muttered to her mentor.

Silverpaw shuffled her paw in the ground. she hated being half blind. Her one goid eye had to see evrything for her. "I'm not perfect" she muttered under her breath hoping her mentor wouldnt hear.

Silverpaw looked at him though she could barely see him. Her one pale green eye had a twinkle in it. She lashed her silver tail, waiting for her mentor to say something.

He walked off looking over his shoulder to see if she was fallowing

He crouched down to stalk a mouse.

She looked over her shoulder to make sure Darkwing was fallowing

Dovelight shook her head " you looked really spooked."

Dovelight laughed. "Saw your own reflection. Huh?"

Dovelight nudged him playfully "sure" she snorted

Dovelight looked at him as if he had grown a third head.

Dovelight sighed "You need to get some rest. to clear you mind." she said

Dovelight nodded. She started to walk away. She turned to make sure he was fallowing. "Are you coming" she asked.

He cought the mouse and sat down to eat it.

"Are you coming" she asked.