Posts by Dawnflight of Riverclan

While he walked away once he wa sout of sight Willowpaw splashed into the river. The clouds were gray and lightning flashed. The river was raging. She splashed in the water only to see she was getting pulled further by the current. A sharp rock cut her stomach and a wound opened. She yowled loudly for help. For anyone.

She used her best swimming skills and eventually fell down. She was too stupid to notice a storm was going. She was such a mousebrain! She yowled louder.

She longed for sooft fur brushing hers and then everything went black and she saw a bright light.

She was dreaming. She was in a ghostly white meadow. She saw three cats. "Y-your dead." She gasped. "Yes and your Willowpaw." One said. "We must tell you that Silverpaw..." she woke. She was on the sandy riverbank. She wanted to find out what they were saying though! She saw Silverpaw standing above her with his pelt soaked.

She saw Rainclaw on the riverbank as well. "I just remember going for a quick swim..." she murmered the last word and trailed off remembering the rest.

Willowpaw coughed up water. "I'm fine she said confused." "I was such a mousebrain going out in a storm like that." She murmered.

(Bye)

Willowpaw sighed. She would be a warrior soon enough. And that soon enough was now. She walked to camp to earn her warrior name.

Willowpool came back proudly. She was a warrior now. She was WillowPOOL. She wondered if she looked stronger. She saw Rainclaw and waved expecting her to say "Hey Willowpopl!" Knowing just from her new courage that she was a warrior.

I meant to say Willowpool

She walked to her proudly. "Hello Rainclaw." She felt more pride already.

//htg

Byes!!!!

Dawnpaw padded to him awkwardly. "Copperpaw." Sne nodded. "So um how is it going?" She felt awkward talking to him.

She looked at the dark gray clouds in the sky forming. A storm was coming. She didn't care. Today was the day she would learn to swim. She dipped her paw in the river. It was freezing and the current was strong. Her other leg dipped in and she got pulled in. She yowled for help as thunder sounded. The river was rushing her forward and she got cut by a sharp rock. She hoped Copperpaw would save her like in a corny romance. She imagined what the kits would look like... she snapped tk reality and gilded as loud as she could for help.

Somehow I put gilded instea dof yowled? Idk lol

A stunningly beautiful rogue walked in. Her graceful movements were perfect. Her voice like honey she said to him: "Hello, i-i seem to be lost." She blushed. "This is embarrasing the rogue said shuffling her paws. "By the way I'm Dawn." She then smiled.

Willowpool padded around nervously. Her pelt was still damp and she was shivering crazily.

"S-silverpaw?" She said shaking.

"Is that you?" "You seem strong Silverpaw!" She yawned.

Willowpaw padded up to him. Well not Willowpaw but Willowpool

Not stronger... just more pride... different. Willowpool tilted her head to one side.