Posts by Weedpelt

Silverstar spotted a vole scuffling through the leaves. She got int a hunter's crouch, and pouced on the helpless vole. She sliced open it's throat, killing it easily. She took it back to the hole, and set it down next to the rabbit.

"So, I wanted to know, how would you feel about kits?" she asked. She looked at Troutsplash. She wondered how he would react to this question.

Silverstar padded up to Silkpaw. "How much have you caught so far?" she asked her.

"I know, I was just wondering," she mewed, "for future reference." She licked his pelt affectionetly.

"That is great," she mewed. "I got about twelve," she purred adding the last of her large catch. "How about we take all this fresh kill back to camp?" she asked the young apprentice.

Bluecloud smiled and stood up. She got into the form that Troutsplash was in, right in between his front and back legs. "Are you tired? I am," yawned.

Silverstar padded back into camp with her fresh kill in her mouth. She dropped it all in the fresh kill pile as Silkpaw did. "Now, our pile looks much fuller! This is enough to feed the Clan. Thank you, Silkpaw," Silverstar mewed to the young apprentice. She padded off to the center of the camp, where she lay down, warmed by a large patch of sunlight shining throught the trees.

RiverClan. Her name is Bluecloud

Bluecloud got comfortable in the form of Troutsplash. She wanted to fall asleep so badly, but she tried to keep herself awake.

"Very much so," she mewed. "We caught twenty- two individual fresh kill," she purred happily to her deputy.

Once she found her mate asleep, she relaxed and settled down to let unconsiousness take her away. In a few moments she was in a deep sleep.

"Well, here I am," she mewed nudging him back.

Talonpaw waited for his friend, Swiftpaw to show up for their hunting patrol by Pine Trees. He clawed at the ground, pretending it was a mouse. He couldn't wait to show his friend his hunting skills.

Character Name: Flowerpaw

Gender: She- Cat

Alliance: (What Clan/ Tribe? Or a loner or kittypet?): RiverClan

Rank(CANNOT be leader, deputy or medicine cat/med apprentice unless you are making up their clan/tribe): Apprentice

Appearance(Must look realistic--NO RED EYES!): Beautiful calico she- cat. She is dark tan, black, and white. One of her ears is partly torn from a battle. She has bright blue eyes that stand out wherever she is. She has pure white paws and a black tail. She has extra sharp claws.

Personality: She is a loyal cat that will do anything for her Clan. She follows any orders she is given. She is usually calm, but can sometimes have a bad temper. She does not boast and is generally kind. She is always honest, no matter who she is talking to (Not including enemy cats). She craves to be a warrior, someday.

History(Not needed; --CAUTION! To have joined Thunder, Shadow, River or Windclan from outside the clan they need to have done so at under 6 moons old! Note this on the bio if you choose to put in a history and go this route with it!): She joined as a loner's kit. She was only five moons old when she was adopted by RiverClan. Her mother was a loner named Sky. Her father, who died before she was born, was named Talon. Her mother died in a wild fire that took place very close to the river. She padded along the river until she found RiverClan.

Roleplay Sample: Flowerpaw waited along the river's bank for a fish to swim by. Her pelt flowed beautifully in the wind. Her fur was damp from the water that rushed along the side of the bank. She spotted a silvery object in the river. She put her paw into the water ready to take it's life away. She scooped it up, and killed it by cutting it open with her sharp claws. She padded back toward camp, to put her new prey into the fresh kill pile.

Likes: Soft, heartfelt cats that get offended easily.
Strong, handsome cats that have a soft side.
Kind, nice cats that do not talk much.

Dislikes: Cats that are stubborn and only care about themselves.
Handsome cats that don't follow the Warrior Code.
Cats that care about looks more than anything else.

Strengths: She distracts cats with her skill and attacks when they don't expect it.
She has very sharp claws that can leave deep wounds.
Her stealth makes it easy to catch prey.

Weaknesses: She unsheathes her claws before she attacks so that her enemies always know when she is about to attack.
She has a paw that is weaker than the others, so she limps if that paw gets wounded in any way.
She can have weak scent, so sometimes it is not easy to track other cats not from the same Clan.

Try now. Sorry.

Sorry. Try Again. I think I came up with some good ones

Ok. Thanks for the help! I hope it is right this time.

I just did. Or at least I think I did.

How is it now? By the way, sorry about messing up so much. This is my first advanced bio. Sadness is upon me. I am being really annoying, aren't I? Sorry about that too. Oh, dang, I'm getting off topic. I am so sorry!

Yeah, sure. Just one Second.

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