Posts by Nabi1

Oh. :( that's ok. I don't care about grammar

Thrushclaw runs over to Snowwing and hauls the tom off. He pins him down and churns at his belly with sharp rear claws. The tom fled, yowling. Thrushclaw snarls at the attack patrol, but they dogpile Thrushclaw. "Go get the Clan!" He yowls under four cats.

Kinkpelt, Eaglefall, and Fawnstep run to Snowwing. "What's wrong?" Kinkpelt asks.

Thrushclaw is becoming overwhelmed by the rapid scratches and bites, and feels exhilerating pain.

"Okay! Eaglefall, Fawnstep, you too!" Kinkpelt commands as they dash out and follow Snowwing's scent trail.

The pain makes Thrushclaw faint, but they keep attacking anyway.

Thry reah the fight and see four cats attacking Thrushclaw and rush into the battle. Almost immedaitly Kinkpelt's worst enemy (the killer of her brother) has her by the throat and bites. Hard.

Thrushclaw gets up and launches himself at another ShadowClan cat. Kinkpet says, "You killed my brother..." but dies.'"And I have killed you," her enemy (Redfang) snarls at her dead body.

Thrushclaw chases kff his cat and fights beside Bramblefoot.

Thrushclaw nods back and scratches the ShadowClanner. The cat (aparently the deputy) realises that they were outnumbered. She gives the order to retreat and they flee. Thrushclaw freezes. They can't afford to lose their deputy. But ThunderClan has. Thrushclaw yowls grief at Kjnkpelt's dead body.

Foxclaw freezes. "So... I'm dead?"

Shadowfoot looks up, gasps, and runs into the warriors' den.

Accepted! Rp thread in first post!

Birdstar shakes his head and peers at the almost- empty fresh- kill pile.

"Of course you can go!" Birdstar says happily. "I should go with you though. This could be great practice!"

(Do you want Fennelpaw or whatever to have a mentor? Guessing yes.)

(Who??)

"Perhaps... the Five Old Trees?" (Five really old oak trees that mice are always found) Birdstar suggests.

(Don't be. I always'make 'em short lol)

"Okay then!" Birdstar smiles. He turns and flies in the direction of the Five Old Trees.

(I'll PM Cranberrystqr (Auntumnspiral) about it if u don't mind)

"Of course!" He said, his wings beating a little bit faster at the thought. "I find a mouse or two everytime I'm there!"

(Remember they have wings)

Thrushclaw's tail bushes as he hauls Kinkpelt on his shoulders and he makes for camp.

(Dat ok ^u^)

Birdstar reaches the oaks and lands. He smells the air.

Birdstar sees a mouse and takes off. Before the mouse sees him, Birdstar is upon it. He snaps its neck.

When they get to camp, Thrushclaw saddly puts Kinkpelt down on the clearing.