Posts by bluebeetle

Character Name:Fierceclaw

Gender:Tom

Alliance: (What Clan/ Tribe? Or a loner or kittypet?):Thunderclan

Rank(CANNOT be leader, deputy or medicine cat/med apprentice unless you are making up their clan/tribe):warrior

Appearance(Must look realistic--NO RED EYES!):Well muscleled ginger brown tom with forgiving blue eyes. 8)Strong white paws.

Personality:well mannored but fierce if he has to defend the territory.

History(Not needed; --CAUTION! To have joined Thunder, Shadow, River or Windclan from outside the clan they need to have done so at under 6 moons old! Note this on the bio if you choose to put in a history and go this route with it!):

Notes/Other:

Fiercekit looks around for his mother. "If you go you will have to wait longer to become an apprentice. And youll be breaking the warrior code! Do not get me involved. My mom may want all kits to stay in the nursery. She is bossy. If you go ill get in trouble for not telling on you!"

"Hi,I'm Fiercekit",Fiercekit said shyly and amazed at the games they played." Can I play,I have no friends?"

When do I become an apprentice?

"My name is Fiercekit. I want to be the strongest warrior ever. I want to be a deputy. I hope yellowstar chooses me! Thunderclan will not forget it. :)" As Fiercekit walked back in the nursery he held his tail high.

When do I start hunting?

Fierckit walked out of the nursery. Fiercekit was starving!" Where's the dawn patrol? If my mom doesnt get a vole then that means I get no milk! Cant Yellowstar oder them to come back to camp with dozens of mice? We need to be strong just in case shadowclan or badgers or foxes try to invade our camp!" As Fiercekit carried a soggy mouse to the nursery he glanced at the tunnel entrance just in case a few warriors came with fresh kill.

Character Name:Fiercekit

Gender:tom

Alliance: (What Clan/ Tribe? Or a loner or kittypet?):thunderclan

Rank(CANNOT be leader, deputy or medicine cat/med apprentice unless you are making up their clan/tribe):kit

Appearance(Must look realistic--NO RED EYES!):well muscled tabby tom with ginger brown fur ,strong white paws,and forgiving blue eyes.

:Fiercekit was born shy.His sister brownkit died of whitecough. This far fetched believes he was born to lead his clan and hopes he does. But his mom told him a terrifying secret. Hes half clan. Hes mixed with the blood of a shadow clan cat. Even though nobody knows he works hard to prove himself to other clan kits.

Notes/Other:

"Dont hiss at me! I was only making a clear statement. Besides, what if a badger chases us? What happens then daisykit? What happens then!" Fiercekit stared ready to pounce playfully ;) "Im ready for an adventure whenever you are though. Do you think we can fight a fox?"

As fiercekit played with his friends he smelle a fishyodor. As he walked out the nursery the odor got stronger. He swa a cat abou this height but stronger. This must be an intruder Well if this is an intruder he wont let him go easily." Mrooow!" He jumped as high as he can.even though he was a kit he was going to let the clan know they had a rival in our their territory. "Yellowstar theres a rival on our territory!" As he yowled he slid under the apprentice like how he watched one thunderclan apprentice do and aimed for his stomach.

"Anybody want to practice their warrior moves with me? We'll be the best warriors ever! If you dont want to do that will you play mossball? By the way my names Fiercekit." 8)

I know some of you love Hollyleaf. But obviosly she had no powers. I think Lionblaze was the best of the three. He was fierce. Back to Hollyleaf. I think she was way to soft.

Fiercekit started running. But where ever he ran he ended up in the same hollow. He could not escape this horrorful place." Dont try to run little one. If i train you can fufill your deepest ambitions." Tigerstar said dramatically. "I will never do that! My mother told me about how you tried to destroy thunderclan!" Fiercekit could not follow in his pawprints.
"Why would it matter to you? Your half clan! Or did you forget your part shadowclan part thunderclan. Or are you to busy trying to prove yourself to your clan mates!" Fiercekit couldnt believe it. This cat knew all of his deepest secrets.
Maybe if he allowed Tigerstar to show him his best fighting moves he could probaly betray him. He may just become deputy ....NO! He had to run before his ambitions could take over as they did with Tigerstar. Before he could run he was wisked away as several starrypelts rushed passed him. Suddenly he saw a gray shecat with battle scars looked straight at him. "You did well with fighting your own ambitions young one. My names yellowfang. This is starclan." Fiercekit looked around. So many leaders and medicine cats walked past him." You must return to camp." No he couldnt leave now he had so many questions to ask the previous leaders! But without warning he was back in the nursery.

"yay! My first vole. Motso, do you think we can learn fighting moves? I want to learn before i become an apprentice so i can be a warrior sooner!" Fiercepaws eyes shined with hope. This is going to be awesome!

Outside! Fiercekit could smell so many new things. Motso was real nice. Fiercekit wished he was his mentor. The thought swooped as fast as an eagle swooping for a mouse. But thats when he saw a butterfly flying straight to this small hole. He dropped into his own hunter crouch. He jumped swiping his kitten claws in the air. Fiercekit landed right in the hole. He looked up and saw the beautiful butterfly flying above the hole. Suddenly he smelled a musky odor. He looked ahead and saw a dog with a ginger pelt. As he sniffed it the dog jerked awake. Fiercekit ran at the sight of its slauthering jaws. FOX! "Help! Any body!"

Fiercekit awoke. The dawn patrol was just leaving. Fiercekit had nothing to do ,so he closed his eyes and focused on the evil dark hollow.

"So you decided to come back? At least your not a coward. First you should learn a paw swipe with your claws sheathed. You hear that:SHEATHED!" Fiercekit was getting annoyed. "Im not a mouse brain! Besides , i learned from my mom!"

Fiercekit slashed at the warriors mucsles. He expected this to be harder but obviosly the warrior was taking it easy since he was a kit. This was going to tak foreever

"Altraclaw? Im sorry about the fox. I didnt know it was there." Fiercekit looked at altraclaw as ashameness sparkled in his eyes and his paws swiped the grass.

Fiercekit smelled something on the breeze. What is that rustling from the bushes?

Fiercekit ran to the kits. "You wanna play fight? If you do dont expect something easy."

"uh.... can you keep a secret altraclaw? its very important.you cant tell any of the warriors or kits!" Fiercekit looked up at altraclaw scared of what he might say.

Fiercekit stared shyly.his mother told him this was secret. But altraclaw saved me right? "Yes i am thunderclan. But... I'm part shadowclan. Please dont tell . No body will treat me normally!" Fiercekit looked away so he woldnt see altraclaw run and tell yellowstar.