Posts by musey

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[justify]these are amazing wowow
tracking!

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[justify]could somebody please put a 1px border in #080808 around this gif? thank you :^))

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[justify] Teayl how about ghouyl?? lmao i have no idea

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[justify]thanks!!

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[justify]hell yea

[fancypost bgcolor= transparent; width: 450px; border: 1px; border color: transparent][justify][size=9pt]i heard mogeko... my Lov

yells bc i want to join the elite but idk what to do, im so mcfreakin disorganized with my characters
cav Needs to be here for plot reasons but he was already denied once
i think i'm just going to have him show up again after he's exiled from the cartel lmao?? he'll sit there and whine until they get tired of putting up w it and begrugingly let him in

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[justify]god,, i love that. it's Perfect. gooch why is ur art so Good
do u have a deviantart what i really mean is are we allowed to follow it??

i love gore, honestly
i signed up for an anatomy class in school so i can chill w dead * and im pretty sure the teacher knows it by now

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[justify]tracking bc i'm unsure? i'd assume that human medicine could be used to a mild extent, but i'd still want to play it safe and avoid whenever possible.

[fancypost bgcolor= transparent; width: 450px; border: 1px; border color: transparent][justify][size=9pt]it might've been the ad on the page that redirected you - do you have an ad blocker?

[fancypost bgcolor= transparent; width: 450px; border: 1px; border color: transparent][justify][size=9pt]- darkheart
- shadowheart/soul
- tragicbackstory
- murderclaw, deathclaw, anything similar
- deadsoul
- holloweye(s)
- bloodyclaws/bloodclaw
- shadedpast
i feel like traditional-esque suffixes work best for these bc it's remiscent of 2012 warriors ocs lmao

wait a second. i found something: edgy warriors name generator

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[justify]on the noaa site there's a big ol "M" for major hurricane directly over my county
bye folks it was nice knowing u all

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[justify]the elite! they have a Bad relationship with the cartel but it's worth a shot :"^) cav lives there now, he might be able to help get ben in if he can convince them that ben's relatively innocent.

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[justify]using "ruby" from your second fancy storage : )

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[justify]i don't think that's any better than the word it is derived from. i would not recommend using it even if it is completely in character.

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[justify]a thesis statement is your "claim" for the essay - it basically says "this is what my essay is about, and in the following paragraphs i'm going to explain what this sentence means (in excruciating and unnecessary detail to coax you into giving me an a)". usually a thesis is worded like a factual statement; for example, "cats are better than dogs because of x, y, and z." then your next paragraph would explain/give information about X reason and how that proves cats are better than dogs, the following would explain Y (and how it proves the thesis), and the next would cover Z (+ the proof).
if you were given a prompt in the form of a question, the thesis would be the direct answer to the question (again, in the form of a statement), as if somebody asked it to your face and you had to give them as brief an answer as possible.

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[justify]i would take out "this essay will cover why it is acceptable" - your reader already knows that this is the topic of the essay after reading the first part of the statement, so adding that would seem redundant to them.
(on a side note, based on what i've learned you should only really add "this essay explains/discusses/etc" to an introduction if you are writing a scientific paper/academic journal, as in explaining the results of an experiment for professional review. otherwise, in an english paper it's usually seen as unnecessary by the person grading your paper. but anywAY ignore that)

you can also remove the part in parenthesis because it directly contradicts your original point. i, as the reader, basically interpret it as saying "it is acceptable, but it's not acceptable"; this will confuse your audience because it leaves the reader questioning what side you're on. when your goal is to convince the reader that you're 100% right, you want to be as concise as possible and leave no room for questioning whatsoever.
instead, you might consider rephrasing your thesis to something along the lines of "until further research proves otherwise, it is acceptable [...]". you could also make a statement such as "to an extent, it is acceptable [...]" so you can discuss both sides in the essay and take a moderate stance on the subject.

otherwise, you could just make your thesis "it is ethically acceptable to clone human life" and leave it at that. as long as the rest of your introduction has some substance and you have the evidence to back it, a thesis as short as that should be fine.

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[justify]sorry about that! my mistake :'^)

my basic outline for the intro is this: a hook, which can be optional depending on what you put in its place. ~2 sentences of an introduction to the subject itself (ex. "scientists began cloning mammals in year xyz..."). thesis statement. 3 sentences: each one is a brief summary of your supporting reasons. that's it, really - the intro should be short bc you'll use your body and counterargument paragraphs to fully explain your point.

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[justify]i!! Have to be quick bc my power went out but:
- when did cloning start? What was the first success?
- when did ppl start questioning it? why? what are the dangers theyre concerned abt?
- basically explain the ideas that surround the topic
Good luck now!!

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[justify]dittoing the elite! there isn't much to add, dipster covered everything i would've said :^) i will emphasize that there are a lot of diverse characters and it really doesn't feel like a stereotypical anticlan!

ARKHAM ★ wrote:

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Tracking; not considering going back, but I tend to keep up with things.

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[justify]some more ally interaction beyond parties/gifts (ex. a disaster, famine, infestation, etc. forces a group to seek shelter elsewhere - forcing the groups to get to know one another intimately and keep in touch later on) could help boost the activity even if it's just a few dual memberships.