Posts by pinkfloyd

He started to think, Where would a rouge be?

Brownpaw walked back into the camp and sat down with a mouse from the fresh kill pile. Despite his stomach being satisfied already, he thought that he could use half eaten food as bate, the rouge would come with his or her want for food.

Brownpaw fell back asleep quickly.

He opened his right eye to look at her. He enjoyed her company and purred with happiness while he dozed back to sleep.

When he he finished, he made sure that there was still plenty of meat on the bones to be crowfood. He picked it up, then left outside the camp where just at the edge of the shadowclan territory, he set it in place.

Hey Russia? Is the rouge gonna appear or not? Just asking for plot decisions.

Brownpaw saw Kage come closer and closer. He looked closer when he saw that another cat was talking to him. Dragonpaw! He quietly ran off.

Fine, Brownpaw didn't see. But when can he?

How about you start killing more and then frame it on another cat, then when the clan is thinking of banishing him or her, Brownpaw will find out whats going on. DRAMA!!!!!!!!!

What if Dragonpaw was a kin of Tigerstar. :0

Brownpaw was getting board, he was starting to doze off with boredom.

Brownpaw suddenly thought, if he left now, the Rouge would eat the crowfood anyway, but instead of just lunging out he could go home and come back tomorrow to follow the murderers sent trail, leading the an element of surprise.

(Id be fine with the Desertpaw story point) Brownpaw entered the camp after Dragonpaw. His cover story for why he left the camp would be that he tried hunting, but couldn't catch anything.

"Hunting, but i haven't caught anything because..." he paused when he realized that he didn't make a reason why he didn't have any fresh kill. He looked up at the sky for a second, then looked back at Desertpaw. "......Its going to rain soon, the black clouds are getting close".

(He could come right now and accuse Dragonpaw that he didn't fight the rouge and was just covering himself for the murder, she can be in the wrong and in the right. Good god i should write drama)
Brownpaw nodded.

(I think Carcacalclaw should become the new deputy)
"Not a storm, just rain. The clouds are over the middle of the forest so you can't see them from here"

He turned his eyes on Dragonpaw and eyed him. He knew something wasn't right.

"Oh its nothing, just now i feel as if he's changed. I liked him while we were kits and we played together with enchantedpaw and you. And i remember when we all got our apprentice names, just now Dragonpaw feels like a different cat"

Brownpaw sat down below the highrock and looked up at Tanglestar.

Brownpaw felt like his claws were going to pop out at any moment, but he remained cool.