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    P.S. Don't let the length of my post scare you away. You don't have to write anything nearly this long. I just wrote a bunch so you could explore the Center of Operations with Macavity. :)


    IC: Macavity prowled about the location he'd chosen, purring contentedly. His center of operations was a massive factory. What it had once produced, he did not know, but the machines left behind fascinated him. Some of them looked quite dangerous: more than adequate torture or killing devices, should he deign to use them. Of course, he'd have to learn how first. He pressed a few random buttons on one of the control panels stationed along the catwalks, but received no reward from his efforts, even when he pressed the enticing red one. Likely the energy required to run the machines had left the building long ago. He'd have to find some way to restore it. He was nothing if not resourceful.


    His paws carried him along the handrail of the catwalk. He'd already decided he didn't care for the walking surface the twolegs would have used while passing to and fro on their daily business. It was formed of a steel mesh, just enough metal to support a pedestrian, but with gaps in between the metal strips wide enough to swallow the pads of a cat's paw and force him to walk on the unprotected spaces in between the toughened skin, a painful prospect. It would have been another good form of punishment if he could only figure out how to make a cat stay on it. Oh, well, ideas would come later.


    At the end of the handrail he jumped, landing lightly on the sill of a window. From here, he could see the road passing the front of the factory. Down the road, the city began to open up. He could see a theater's lights flashing in the darkness of evening, advertising their latest show. His mind wandered to his home in London, where he'd viewed the performance of "Firefrorefiddle: The Fiend of the Fell." Inspiring! He'd been only a kit when he'd seen it, but he truly felt he could credit the masterful actor of the character Firefrorefiddle with driving the desire to pursue crime into Macavity's blackened heart. He smiled as he remembered how strongly Mr. Mistoffelees had remonstrated their parents for bringing him to see the show, every one of his ebony furs standing on end. Macavity chuckled.


    Further down the road, a train was just pulling into the station. Back home, the train was how many cats traveled from city to city. Macavity purred, thinking of the cars opening to allow new members of his company to step upon the city streets before beginning their life of crime. From what he'd witnessed, however, cats in the area usually traveled by foot. It was a good method, permitting a cat to hunt his own game as he moved, rather than hoping he could hold out until the cars stopped moving, then scrounge something in the next city. He was glad of the factory's placement, far enough from the city to provide good hunting grounds, near enough that those cats inclined to steal their food could bring twoleg fare to the freshkill pile.


    He looked through the catwalk to the concrete floor. That would likely be the area the cats would congregate, with their paws practically pampered compared to the harsh treatment of the catwalks. Side offices would make ideal places for queens to raise kits, with cubicle spaces to keep them isolated and drawers that could be opened to keep the kits warm in. If a queen preferred, she might simply claim the space under the desk, more open, although somewhat exposed to passersby. A workers' locker at the far side would do to keep slaves in. If the dark, cramped quarters didn't break a cat's spirit in a reasonable amount of time, Macavity didn't know what would. He'd already recovered all but three of the keys and hidden them away in his office.


    He leaped onto another handrail and ran along its length, jumping when it was split by a walkway, running again, ever upwards. Up, up, up to the highest office, no doubt once belonging to the chief twoleg, the one who had kept the place running smoothly in its prime.


    Macavity slipped through the doorway and his paws were instantly greeted by a thick green carpet. He paused to knead the plush material a bit, then jumped onto the desk. It was a wide, impressive platform from which he could address insubordinates, also providing a spacious plane on which to nap and contemplate his organization's next deeds of villainy. The desk drawers made good places to hide any trinkets in, especially considering that most cats didn't know how to open them. Even if one cunning feline could open the drawers, he wouldn't be able to find the location of Macavity's precious slave keys.


    A bookshelf stood against a side wall, fully stocked. Books had always mystified Macavity. Twolegs opened them, perused them for hours, and then shut them, a satisfied expression on their faces. One day, he too would be privy to their secrets. Harsh penalties to anyone who damages those, he noted to himself.


    Enough wandering. Satisfied with his exploration, Macavity left the office and wandered down the rails to the catwalk floor. He would have to be present should any cat come in ready to join his organization.


    ...Or to be enslaved.


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    I now offer advertisements for your psuedoClans. (: Give me a basic description of what you want in the advertisement, any lyrics/words you'd like, and the name of the psuedo. They will be three times the height of my normal 84px height signatures.


    Hope I'm doing this right. :)


    I'd like an advertisement for The Company of the Hidden Paw, my new pseudoclan. (Link provided in case you need more background on what the clan is like) It needs to have a dark feel about it, and if you can find a ginger cat with green eyes looking at the camera (as in at the viewer) that would be great. The text would be:


    Do you feel a thrill
    When you're breaking the law?
    Then you belong in the Company
    Of the Hidden Paw!


    If that's hard to fit in, then you can use just "You belong in the Company of the Hidden Paw"

    Nightblack stood in confusion as Rosha and the clan leader argued back and forth, unsure of who was right. One thing he knew, Rosha was increasingly looking a far cry from the cat Nightblack had met in the Gathering, and Nightblack didn't like what he was seeing. He was almost thankful for the intervention of the fox.


    Nightblack didn't know if his ebony coat had protected him from being picked out by the fox or if the predator was simply picking the healthiest cats for his prey. Whatever the case, he had avoided both Nighblack and the injured female. The black cat hurried to her side and began licking at her face and wounds. "Wake up," he whispered. "Wakeupwakeupwakeup. Fight's over!" The events surrounding them told another story, and he kept a wary eye on the fox as he tried to revive the she-cat, but she would be no use to anybody in her condition. Nightblack had seen a fox only once before, back at his farm clan. The beast had reeked havoc in the henhouse and in the kitting den underneath before the twoleg finally killed it. If the fox came anywhere near him and the injured female, Nightblack resolved to make it a point to defend her, but more than anything he wanted to get her out of the way.

    "Tower Prep?" Faith looked around the room, bewildered. Three beds, three armoires, one with her name posted on the front of it. What was that doing there? She looked at Kate, confusion evident on her features.


    "I don't get it. Where's my room? The last I remember, I was doing geometry. I think that's the last I remember. I don't remember coming here." She slowly swung her legs over the side of the bed and stood, as if that would somehow give her a clearer view of her situation.

    Faith hit her forehead lightly with the ball of her palm. "Oh, right, sorry. I'm Faith Carson." She smiled again before the bewildered look crossed her face again. "So this is a school? Like a public school? Or..." she turned and glanced at her bed, "I guess it would be a boarding school or something."


    There was so much to take in and she didn't know which facts to start sorting together. Being in anything remotely like a public school was a scary prospect for her. Her life previous to this had been rising at eight, starting school in her living room at nine, reading on her bed from ten to twelve, an hour's lunch break, an hour's writing at her home computer, and math until she finished the lesson, however long it took. Public school friends had tried to explain to her how their school days progressed, how they filled out their papers, how the teacher wrote lesson assignments on the board, and her mind swirled. Would she be able to cope? And why was she here in the first place?


    "You don't know how you got here either?" she asked, finally fixing on a detail to piece together. "You just woke up here too? Do you have any idea why?"

    I found this nifty Player Inactivity Character Care Form lying around. Since I'm playing the leader of a new pseudoclan, I thought it might be a good idea to fill it out. There's a section I'm supposed to agree to that says:


    "I have read the Character Inactivity section of this game's rules. I acknowledge that in my absence lasting longer than three weeks I may lose any power positions I have. I accept that blame cannot be placed on any failure of my designated character adopters if for whatever reason, they fail to roleplay my characters while I am gone."


    I don't remember seeing anything about Character Inactivity in the game rules I read. Can someone give me a link?

    I've always had trouble trying to figure out time and how it passes in RPs. Most of my characters come into the RP as young adults and do very little visible aging as a result, since I don't know how to mark how quickly they're progressing. I think the source of my confusion is how a thread that only covers a few hours' time IC can take weeks to write OOC, or how I've seen days IC pass in a few hours OOC through time-skips.


    Some friends of mine have kindly explained to me how liquid time works, that I can post with my cats in more than one place as long as I can work out in my head the order in which they're moving from place to place. That helps with my adults, thankfully. Now I've adopted a newborn kit, and unfortunately the thread where she was born with her littermates is pretty dead. Not much you can do with a blind kit who only wants to suckle.


    My question here is, how long until I can play her older? Do I have to wait until I see activity from her littermates showing they're a little more grown up? (Not something I'm expecting to see anytime soon, since her birth thread is so inactive.) Or does time pass the same as OOC? I'm in a plot supposed to cover a six-month span that will only actually take three OOC months because the person starting it says we're "double-timing." What's that about?

    It goes like: <url=yourlink> WORD </url>


    Just change the <>s into []s. :)



    Edit/P.S.: If I have questions about code and I see someone's figured out the answer, I like to quote their post so I can get a glimpse at the code underneath when I see it in the reply screen. Then I just leave without sending anything.

    It would be a long day of hard work. The freshkill pile was empty. It would be the lifeblood of Macavity's equivalent for a clan, it would not do to have nothing to feed the first cat to join him. In lieu of actual members, the Hidden Paw must work for himself.


    He paused, his ears alert. Suddenly, he pounced, using his entire body weight to drive his forepaws into the snow, a trick he'd seen a fox doing before. His skills at imitation paid off as his paws hit something warm and furry. In a bite and a moment, the mouse was dead.


    Macavity laid down to eat his catch immediately. Larger prey for the freshkill pile, a fitter cat to catch it. If he'd had it his way, he'd be in the twoleg territory, robbing homes of pies and dinners. However, much to his frustration, Macavity's practice was to prevent his paws from getting dirty in the crimes his company committed. He had to own that the practice had its uses, but many days he had to hold himself back from doing those things he'd loved as a younger cat. How eager he was to fill his organization with criminal minds like his own.


    But first he must fill the freshkill pile. As he polished off the mouse, he pressed his face and paws into the snow, quickly washing off the blood, and rose, prowling the area for his next victim.


    About your kit: if the thread is dead, and a certain amount of time has passed, it is assumed that you can play them elsewhere as older kits.


    How long would the "certain amount of time" be? Is it the same as OOC time, so that if my kit was born two weeks ago it would be two weeks old? Would I be able to double-time so that the kit would be one moon old? Or if I gave myself a month to make sure the thread's really dead, would I be free to half-time so the kit is two weeks old instead of one moon, if that's what I wanted?


    Or are you referring to the "certain amount of time" as however long I'd have to wait to make sure the thread really is dead?

    Howdy. I'm trying to work on some of the areas I perceive as weak points in my writing. I'll take any and all help I can get.


    Firstly, I struggle with description. On a good muse day, I don't notice it, but I always worry when I have to write a bio (I like to fill in advanced ones, just to make sure my character can go wherever I want it to). Personality is easy, I pick one facet of the character and run with it. Appearance, on the other hand, makes me break into a sweat. "I have a white cat with long hair and blue eyes. What do I add? She loves to run? Isn't that Personality?" Eventually I get through it, but I'd love to develop my confidence with description to the point that I don't have to worry about how to fill in Appearance or how to describe a setting.


    Secondly, I can get pretty wordy, even in normal OOC posts. I'd love to learn how to cut down my writing in general. IC, I know longer doesn't always mean better, but if I reach the end of my muse for a post and have only written one paragraph, I fight to write at least one more. Three is better, and if I do four or more I feel accomplished. I would like to find someone who can challenge me to cut down on my word/paragraph count without losing the advanced post feel.


    When you combine weakness in description with wordiness, you get a player who tends to use their characters' thoughts as filler. I get the sense this doesn't do anyone any real good, since the other players can't have their animals act on the characters' thoughts and too much of the character may get revealed. I just recently made a character who I need to be mysterious, and I'm concerned that if I don't figure out some other way to write posts than to rely on his thought life, he'll lose the sense of enigma I want for him. Can I get someone to help me break some of these bad habits?


    P. S. If you want to help me with wordiness by critiquing this post, be my guest. ;) I'm sure what I learn in OOC posts will also help with IC posts.

    Wynn, if it's not realistic to farm PMs off to other staff (if it is, I think it's a great idea too), what if you were to post a list of your priorities for responding to PMs on a prominent place on the site that newbies are likely to see. That way, if people get angry with you for not answering them quickly, you can point them to the list and say, "Don't get angry with me. You should have seen this. I'll get to your PM, but I have higher priority PMs to answer right now."


    Of course, you'd probably do it a bit more tactfully than me. ;)

    I'd noticed this and resolved not to do it when I began posting on the boards, but I broke my resolution at one point when I didn't really know how to make my cat respond to the situation. I posted about it in the Roleplay Talk boards: the other player wasn't responding to my attacks and I didn't know where my character was in relation to theirs anymore. Usually, if I've made an "OOC post," I've tried to find some way to RP my cat, even if they're not doing anything. For instance, I made my cat aware of how painful his wounds were mid-battle.


    What I find annoying is that people aren't even playing their cat. They're not even playing any character. It's not roleplaying if you don't take up a role of some kind. Personally, even if someone says, "The autumn wind whisked leaves through the forest," it's an OOC post and there's been no roleplaying done. I tend to try to focus on my cat when I have to post like that.


    I'd do it less if I thought to PM the other player. I'm afraid that if I PM it will be an annoying invasion of privacy for the other player. I'm sure there are players who find OOC posts just as annoying, though.

    The cold shocked the newborn and he responded as any cat would, with an instinctive urge to draw a breath, his first ever. Something around his face prevented him, however, clinging to his tiny nose and mouth. The kit couldn't even cry out in distress.


    Suddenly, he felt something warm and soft press against him, and in an instant cold air filled his lungs. He squealed. His gasping breaths punctuated the frightened cry, turning it into a series of tiny squeaks. For several seconds, he laid crying in the cold, then something warm and soft caressed him. Tiny fingers on its surface pulled away the sticky wetness that covered him, combing his fur. As his mother's breath covered him again in warmth, the kit got his first taste of comfort and security.

    Damaged's eyes widened as Rin's tail wrapped around his. An ally? Damaged had never had one before. The tabby had to admit, it felt good, especially when his ally was an old tough like Rin. But the alliance would prove problematic, though. Damaged had never trained to fight alongside an ally, especially not joined at the tail. Then again, maybe he could train now.


    "I'll stay as close as I can," he agreed, "but if you get in the way, I'm breaking loose." He allowed Rin to pull him in his direction as the old cat attacked the Havana Brown. A Scottish Fold with black tabby swirls was advancing in his direction, and he reared up to block the cat's assault on his face, their paws clashing against each others'. What Damaged really wanted was to fight with Wrath and Envy again, if he could just finish with the Fold quickly enough. He'd leave the weak black cat to Shadow, if the kit could get up and rejoin the battle. If he could take Envy, he was sure he'd make quick work of the small white cat, but if Wrath attacked first, Damaged had no complaints about keeping him busy.

    "Nice to meet you," Faith said with a smile. "I certainly will, and I'll let her know I know you." Her mind was turning. With a friend like Kate, maybe she could get an edge on some of the details of school life -- pick her brain a bit. Kate probably knew more about school schedules and homework than Faith did. Even if she was new at the school too, she'd at least have an idea of what to expect. "How long have you been around here?" Faith asked.

    The final kit squirmed as he became aware of a new feeling deep within himself. It was an emptiness that gnawed to be filled. Before he could move to alleviate it, something swept him forward. He collided with a mass of fuzzy, warm, wiggling bodies. Their scent washed over him, mingling with his as he struggled over them, sensing that his emptiness would be filled just on the other side of the furry wall. When he could move no further, he opened his mouth and began to suckle.


    He felt the bodies around him pressing tighter as his emptiness filled, unaware that he was part of the reason for the shame that crowded him and his siblings of another father closer together.