Posts by sandmane

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Lifeclaw swimmed, trying to help Tigerstripe, she could feel her lungs get filled with water, she was about to see double

(he would think of it)

Lifeclaw gave Muddykit to Tigerstripe

Lionkit ran out of camp, and over to the others

Lionkit looked worried at Muddykit, he licked him brotherly

Lifeclaw had fainted when she had tried to swim, so it wasn't that difficult

(eyup and I am thinking of killing off Lifeclaw, and Muddykit is giving her a speciel gift before she dies)

Lionkit looked at Blazepaw, looking worried

Lifeclaw opened slowly her eyes, she looked at them, very weakly

Lionkit looked at Muddykit and ran then over to Lifeclaw

"Please don't" she meowed, and spilled out some water, and continued speaking "Even if... Ravenpaw did came... Then.. Then it would be too late" she meowed looking at the kits

Lionkit looked sadly "No, please don't leave us, and don't leave Muddykit! He needs you!" he squealed

(could we say that Muddykit finally speaks, cause of sadness?)

(okay)

"The water got into my lungs, and there is too much inside" she meowed, and coughed

she turned her head to Muddykit, she began to see double again "So... Sorry muddykit, but... I can't stay" she meowed, beginning to closing her eyes

Lionkit cried "No!... I don't want you to leave us, we had found a good mother, and... You is the only member in Muddykits family, you can't leave us" he cried

she turned her head, with closed eyes "Sorr.... Sorry Lionkit... But... I have lived my days, and you must live yours" she meowed, with a fading voice

Talon had to see what was going on, when he came to Thunderstar, Tigerstripe and the two kits, he couldn't believe his own eyes

No sound came, and no cough came either, her body went to Starclan, a little spark of light appeared to give a sign, that she wasn't there anymore

Lionkit cried "No... It... It can't be" he squealed

Talon sighed "huh... What happened exactly?" he asked looking at his leader

Talon sighed, and had to get the dead body of Lifeclaw back to camp

Lionkit had to comfort Muddykit

(okay I am only using Lifeclaw if a prophecy will be going on, if she shall show the prophecy)

Lionkit comforted Muddykit "I know you miss her, and I miss her too.... But.... I'll always be here for you" he meowed sounding promising

Talon got Lifeclaw's dead body into the camp, and layed her body in the middle of camp, he didn't knew what to do, so he just layed here there

Lionkit followed Muddykit

Talon turned his to Lillykit and walked over to her telling her that the only thing he knew was that Lifeclaw had gotten too much water in her lungs

Lionkit layed with Muddykit

Talon nodded "Yeah, but he sees Lionkit as his brother" he meowed

(remember that it's Thunderstar)

Talon nodded, and sighed "Many wouldn't know how to handle their feelings, I'm sure that she was a great friend in the clan" Talon meowed

Lionkit curled up against Muddykit and tried to comfort him "It isn't your fault Muddykit" he meowed trying to let Muddykit think of something else

Lionkit felled asleep beside Muddykit

Talon nodded "Since Lionkit is the closet to Muddykit right now, then he should try get Muddykit, to understand that everything will be alright" he meowed

Talon nodded "Yeah, I hope he'll be okay, Starclan may guide his way he meowed

Lionkit slept and sighed

Talon sighed and nodded "Yeah I suppose that" he meowed

Talon was starting to feel tired he decided to go to bed, he walked over to the warrior den, laying down in his nest, felling asleep