Dovepaw shook her head and walked pass the other cat.
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Fishpelt followed the cat.
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*Firestar watchs* haha!
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Name:Confusionpaw
Rank:Medicine cat apprentice
Gender:Tom
Personality:Kind, Wise, Would do anything for his Clan, Brave
Age:7 moons
Looks:A grey tabby tom with pale blue eyes and a scar on his right paw
Crush:None
Mate/Kits:Too young -
I know your not 'copiing my story' but the beginning is just a bit like mine.
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OOC~ Someone go get the person who plays Smokestar, or Brimstar!
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Firestar: Sandstorm! *Runs over and licks her*
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Firestar: *Cocked his head* I am not sure.
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You are welcome
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Character Name:Sunsetriver
Character Age:17 moons
Gender:She-cat
Alliance:ThunderClan
Rank:Warrior
Appearance (6 or more sentences):Sunsetriver is very small for her age, and dosen't show off her muscles as much as other warriors do. Her ginger and white tabby pelt is usually ragged, although it can be very smooth when she wants it to be. Sunsetriver's amber eyes go well with her ginger pelt and she has very short claws. She has long legs, a long tail, and is missing half of her left ear. Her right hind paw is pure black and she has small black smudges on her tail. Across her right eye she has a short scar from battle.
Personality:Sunsetriver is very kind to almost all cats, but can be very hostile towards loners and kittypets. In camp she almost always has a smile on her face and is very bubbly. She tends to get in trouble because of her half ear and usually gets things wrong. She dosen't respect apprentices, all except her own, and she thinks that all cats younger then her should listen to her. Her mood can change very quickly and that can sometimes get her in trouble.
---Likes (at least 3):
~Sunny days
~Basking on sunning rocks
~Having sun with her Clanmates
--- Dislikes (at least 3):
~Rainy days
~The water in her pelt
~Bossy cats
---Strengths (No MORE than 5):
~Cheering up cats
~Hunting {in the snow isn't very great}
~Jumping {long legs}
---Weaknesses (At least 3):
~She changes her mood quickly
~Only has half a ear and can't hear well
~Her ragged pelt can get her stuck in small areasHistory (8 or more sentences):Sunset was born a loner and her mother, Ice, was killed by her father soon after the kits were born. The four kits were abused, beaten, and bruised everyday by their father, untill a towleg came and took the four kits away. When Sunset was taken in as a kittypet, there were three kittypets that alreay lived there. These kittypets hated Sunset, and tried to driver her out several times. One day, the kittypets tried to kill Sunset, but the young she-cat made a ran for it and found herself in the forest. She walked for many days, and finally came upon ThunderClan, deciding to join.
Roleplay Sample (Required for first advanced bio):
As the early morning sun shone in through the entrance to the warriors den, Sunsetriver rolled over and then blinked once. The ginger she-cat blinked oncemore, getting up and shaking off her ragged pelt. She groomed her pelt quickly, and then padded out the entrance. She looked back at her black paw and shook it. The ginger tabby walked over to a tiny moss strip and kneaded it. She finally lay down and looked up at the misty sky. The sun could barely be seen, and there was a tiny sliver of moon that shone through the clouds. Sunsetriver looked out among the Clan and caught a quick glimpse of the kits that had a moss ball in one's mouth. The she-cat giggled at this and then began to groom herself oncemore.Comments (optional):I really want to improve my roleplaying skills, so just inform me if I did something wrong.
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Sunsetriver had been sitting within the crowd of cats and other animals and hung on the tom's every word. The ginger and white tabby smiled and hissed loudly in approval and slowly did three with ease. This is quite easy. The she-cat thought as she began her sixth one. Once she had done 17, the she-cat took a breath and quickly did the last three. They were harder then they looked, but she had done them and sat down to hear Century's next demand.
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I just read the rest of chapter one. It's awesome!
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Blackfoot narrowed his eyes and mewed,"Yes, it is DarkClan right?"
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Stormcloud narrowed her eyes,"Dogs aren't the worst. Unless their against cats. Which these ones aren't. And as for you," she swung around to face the maine coon,"I don't like your tone. Please, swearing cats get on my bad side easily."
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*Jumps for joy* Yes! I love your writing!
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Brightlegs cocked her head and narrowed her eyes. She shook off her pelt and followed Hillsong.
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Leopardfur cocked her head,"I just wanted to join. I'm a loner as some call it. But do ranks really matter? Were all cat, nothing should change that."
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Fishpelt looked at Smokestar and mewed, sitting down and putting her tail over her paws,"I am Fishpelt. May I join SkyClan?"
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Softpaw had come out from hiding and saw the wolf. She said in a happy tone,"Why everyone so glum!?" Scartail glared at the wolf.