Posts by tanglefoot12345

Tucking Blazekit underneath a low growing bush, Eagleflight started to hunt she wasn't very good and it took her a long time before she caught a mouse. Heading back to blazekit she set the mouse down Blazekit still nursed but she wanted him to try eating some chewed up meat. poking her head underneath the bush she called for him, but he wasn't there. searching wildly Eagleflight started to panic "BLAZEKIT!" she yowled then she caught the smell of another cat, it was faint but fresh. Eagleflight bristled somecat had taken her kit sniffing out the strange cats sent she started to follow the trail....

I LOVE IT! you put a lot of feeling into you writing.

poor sky, storm, and rose

I"m glad though that a hawk is now taking care of her it ads an epic twist to the story :)

Blackkit looked up it was past sunhigh, stepping warily on he didn't know how much longer he could force his paws to move.

Darkclaw got out of his den, slowly trailing out side he collapsed next to a shallow stream. Looking into the water he saw the reflection of his father Blackheat starring at him, jumping up darkclaw shook his head. Blackheart had been an evil cat, he had murdered anycat that had gotten in his way, he had been killed by falling of the top of a cliff after somecat had pushed him. Darkclaw didn't want to remember him, all his life he had been scared he would be like his father.

Whitekit limped after her, she could wait her paw was just a sprain.

to take his mind off his father and the dead apprentice Darkclaw started to hunt. catching a mouse easily, he trotted into camp and gave twilightpaw the mouse "here." he said "You must be hungry." he nudged it over so that it was close to paw.

Blackkit set his packages down and started to lick his pads, they where not the soft kit pads they had been a few days ago. Now they where thick and hard from all the walking. laying down he closed his eyes and rested. if only for a few minutes. "thanks misty." he meowed.

"I'm glad your healing well." he smiled and licked her ear. "and feeling better." even though he was happy for the apprentice the death of shadowpaw sliced him like a knife threw his heart.

Blackkit looked up to Silverkit, "do we follow them?" he meowed

OCC: sure, why not. :)

Greeneye looked at olivekits cut "you've cleaned it well." she meowed gently. chewing up some marigold she licked it into the cut wrapping cobwebs around she licked olivekits head "try not to get into any scuffles while that's healing, and come back again to get a change."

"your welcome dear one." Greeneye meowed warmly, "now what have you done to your paw." Greeneye asked Whitekit, looking at the paw she felt it "you'll be fine Whitekit" she meowed "just don't put a lot of weight on it and it should be healed up in no time." Whitekit nodded her thanks.

Featherpaw turned and started to chase scarredkit she touched his tail tip with her paw "Scarredkits it" she yowled and jumped away.

Whitekit followed limping, she felt the urge to start bouncing and jumping but Greeneye's warning stopped her from bursting. "What do you want to do" she asked.

OOC: thanks :)
Eagleflight followed the trail closely her anger was flaring. The trail zig zagged around tall green grass and scrubby trees, entering the forest she gazed at the giant trees covered in moss and the floor littered with leaves and twigs. There where so many new smells that she almost lost the trail. Picking it up again next to a rotting log she leapt over it, the sent was getting stronger. Eaglefight new she was close, coming up to a large hole she sniffed. Yes! the smell was over powering and she could smell Blazekit. Running into the hole she looked around stone started to close in on all side, it was a long narrow tunnel, but the smell of her kit kept her going. finally the tunnel started to widen up slowly, getting wider the further she went. A small light showed up ahead hurrying forward she entered into a large cavern, small holes in the roof let in sunlight. In the center of cave stood an old she cat her ragged fur hung loosely on her frame White scars where scattered every where on her from ear to tail tip. Eagleflight started screeching "what have you done with my kit!" ...

Blackkit stared in wonder at the beautiful place, he purred I delight "wow!"

Blackkit followed shuddering as the water splashed onto his black pelt shaking himself off on the other side he looked around.

"Okay." Whitekit spotted mousepaw with walnut. "Hi." she meowed

OOC: Yeah, but its still sad that her family died.
I can't wait to see what will happen next :)

"Watcha doing." whitekit asked.

Blackkit after many tries caught a vole, he held it proudly it was the first thing he had caught. he was so excited he decided he would try to catch something bigger.