Posts by layspotatochips

^{The length of your post is actually really good. I would suggest using third person (she, her, hers, etc.) instead of using first person (I, me, my, mine, etc.) point of view. I mean, it's okay to use first but most people roleplay using third person. I might also suggest capitalizing your words that need capitalized because sometimes, while reading, I got a bit confused. Other than that it really looked like a quality RP post.}

^{ooc. okie dokie with me :3}

^{ic. Avox felt the gentle nose of her father and let out a small squeak to acknowledge she'd felt him near. The black pup curled up with her head on her paws and let out a small sigh. She was warm, full, and ready to take her first nap. So, slowly, she drifted off to sleep.}

^{Yeah, yours was good, Flute c:}

^{And yes, Sprite. If you try to add as much detail as you can to your posts, they will seem a lot longer. It's an easy way to gain muse too. If you need to regain muse I would go read a book, or even read through a few literate threads on the site... at least that's what I do.}

^{I'll be picking with in a week/week and a half, guys c: Just a notice.}

^{ooc. I'm fine with that as well c:}

^{"Hey Leafslash, long time no see," came the cheery voice of Beadedfeather. The cream tabby perked her ears with delight upon seeing the CycloneClan warrior. "What's up?"}

[justify][sup]Name: Hazelkit - Hazelpaw - Hazelkiss
Gender: female // straight
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[justify][sup]Appearance: Hazelkiss is a small, yet strong tortie smoke with hazel eyes.
Personality: Hazelkiss will be known for her rebellious attitude, always wanting to argue and go against what her elders tell her to do. It will be in a rather shy way, if against someone other than her family, but it will still be there, the scowl and the stubbornness. Hazelkiss will be shy around those she doesn't know very well, but not that shy. She may bat her eyelashes or give a small smile, but if you talk to her, she'll talk back. Hazelkiss is a bit mischievous but she's also very friendly, and often drags friends into her troubles as well.
Plots Hmmm... lets see.
- a power (probably the ability to take lives from a dying cat)
- she'll get a role model in her life that she tries to be like.
- a pet.
- will think of more.

^{Naw, I'm on all the time, but this week is really busy. I'll try to make it tonight if I can c:}

^{Adding them up~
I'll make an RP thread and post it here in a few.}

[justify] ^{A pair of pale yellow orbs opened up in the sunlight. A large, catlike red body stood, flexing it's strong muscles and letting a yawn escape it's bared teeth. The cat stepped out of the cave, revealing itself and it turned out to be Calvor, the Caesar of the Gladiators. His eyes narrowed and looked out upon the vast mountain range that was seated below them, lined with trees and greens that were beginning to sprout. His mouth opened to taste the warm air. Today was going to be a good day, he could feel it.}[/justify]

^{http://warriorcatsrpg.com/index.php?topic=1018033.new#new}

^{^^ There you all go.}

^{I'll also post it on the first post.}

[fancypost borderwidth=0px][justify][sup] The young she-cat felt her bit of happiness slip away as she listened to the Cave Warden speak. His words echoed in her ears, and her blue eyes fought emotions. At first she wanted them to narrow in a form of anger, to show the tom how displeased she was with such an idea, but then she remembered that this wasn't a Skull tom, but a Cave Warden. After all, he had just been asking how she was treating her higher-ups. Her claws fought to dig into the ground, and Praeclarus ended up standing there as still as a statue as he spoke.

Now it did take a moment for the tom's message to sink in. At first she wasn't sure if he was telling her this so she might know for her own knowledge, incase she wanted in on this 'program', and then it occurred to her that maybe he was telling her this because a higher position liked her. And finally the realization hit her. Yeah, a high position was interested in her... him. The thought was positively unexpected, and honestly surprised her. She hadn't given much thought to having a mate or kits. She supposed now that when the time was right she would, but not now.

Why was Kimba so interested in her now, anyways? Praeclarus opened her mouth to speak, but suddenly her throat felt dry and words didn't come out. It took at least another try before she could finally talk. "I...um...so you want me to be apart of this program?" she asked, feeling her ears begin to turn hot.

^{Tracking for later on, though I see Clari's already been added up ^^}

^{Well, I'm sticking with smaller companies now because I'm not too self-confident about sending a book into Harper or something huge. My father works with a guy who is an author, and he uses smaller publishing companies too but has gotten a surprising amount of recognition. He's given me a lot of advice about publishing.}

^track

^{The first thing I remembered when I woke up today was "Ohh, my mom's birthday!" And then, "Ohh, the Rosefang litter choosing!" :3 Can't wait. Good luck everybody!}

[fancypost borderwidth=0px][justify]^{"N-No, I'm not uncomfortable. You just sort of surprised me. Sorry," Praeclarus said and offered the lilac tom a weak smile. Seeing as he was getting comfortable, the she-cat sat down as well, eying Kimba with icy blue eyes that were filled with shock right now. "I want to honor Skull in any way I can," she told the Cave Warden. Even if that means having kits with a tom I barely know, she thought to herself.}

^{Clari may have been a very feisty she-cat who used her mouth more than her claws to solve disputes, but she was always loyal to her high positions. Her heart was in the right place. Praeclarus was willing to give her life for Skull - even if females weren't treated as equal as males, but that was the life Praeclarus was used to. Not being as equal, and so she saw no wrong there. She'd grown up in that kind of lifestyle, even if it wasn't as strict as Sharven and Voltaire were making it now.}

^{Not it seemed as if Kimba wanted to take her out on a walk. That would be nice, and she needed the fresh air to clear her head. A little more time to decide would be nice, even though she was strongly considering doing the deed. Slowly, Praeclarus stood once more. "A little time to consider would be nice," she said with a small smile, "and I need the fresh air."}

^{Nightpaw --
BloodClan
She has no real relations, but her mentor was the third tier Aima and she's on pretty good terms with the HPs. As a side note, the kits will have bobcat in their blood because Nightpaw is half bobcat.}

[sup]username Laylee
name of cat Ricochetpaw (Ricochetbullet)
gender male
clan ThunderClan
appearance Rico (as he's more commonly called) has a large frame. He's muscular, tall, lean, and quite handsome. His fur is at medium length, and he's a chocolate tabby tom with bright yellow eyes. Quite the handsome young lad, too.
personality If there's one word to describe Mr. Ricochet here is that he's a big playboy. He's goin' from girl to girl, charming her. He's also a big flirt as well, and uses his charming, macho appearance to get girls to like him. He's also a bit of a rebel, going against authorities to cause mischief and to basically have fun. He loves to run around and goof off to have fun.
plots
+ He's going to have a Spanish accent.
+ He'll want a close bro relationship with Earlypaw.
+ He might get addicted to catnip after his 'girlfriend' dumps him.
+ Will think of more, I don't like to plan out their whole lives before I get them.

^{Do you want me to make them a thread :3}