Ace nuzzled her back. His calm brown eyes lit up.
Eclipse looked around. So many large caves. She never saw so many in her life. Suddenly a thing came out of one. It yelled something and then some more, smaller things came out. They all stared at her. Then a bigger one, bigger than all the others, came closer to her. Her instincts told her to run but something else made her stay. He calmly patted her head and put something around her neck.
Ace smiled back. His thoughtful, calm, brown eyes were shinning.
The thing then started to pull her. She just walked on. He took her into one of the caves. This cave was huge. It's roof was oddly shaped and it was red. Inside it there were more horses. All of them were in their own little cave. She was put in her own cave, too. In this cave there was hay and water. A glass piece in the wall let her look out in the huge pasture.
I'm already pretty literate when I rp but I want to become more advanced. So could you help me, please? 
So should I give you an rp sample? :3
Ace saw her blush and walk backward. His brown eyes blinked and his tail flicked.
Eclipse fell asleep. When she woke up she was still in the smaller cave. The thing was letting the other horses out of the small caves and was putting them in the pastures. When he came to her, he patted her and said something before letting her out into the field.
Ace smiled and stepped closer to her.
Eclipse looked around. She was in a herd now! The horses were talking, playing, and running. A horse finally came up to her. It was a foal. "Who are you?" The young foal asked. "Eclipse." She answered to the white foal. "I'm Snow." The young mare said. "Where are we?" She asked. "A ranch!" Snow said surprised.
Cat- Softwhisper yawned. Her light grey pelt had a slight glow to it. Green eyes shinning, she looked around camp. Not a noise was made. Camp seemed so quiet. Everyone was still asleep. The sun had just rose and the grass was still shinning with traces of dew.
Human- Jessica smiled. It was early fall and the leaves were just beginning to change color. A soft breeze passed by her face, sending a slight shiver through her body. The jacket she wore wasn't warm enough. The cool autumn air still made it's way through her coat. After that, she walked inside, leaving the coldness of fall behind.
"Sure." He said as he walked away from the stream. He waited for her before running beside her.
"Oh." Eclipse said confused. But before she could ask any more questions, the foal was gone.
OOC:
Accepted.
OOC: accepted
IC:
She woke up. She shook her black pelt and stretched. Sniffing the air, she wondered if any wolves were near her. She liked being a loner but she still got lonely.
MistClan
Plot
MistClan has been forgotten for many moons. Now cats don't even speak of it. Only MistClan cats know that it still lives.
MistClan lives in a forest. There territory is big but they face many problems there. Twolegs live really close and a few warrior were even captured before.
[size=36pt]Rules[/size]
1. No auto hitting.
2. Don't power play or god mod.
3. Apprentices can't have mates.
4. Medicine cats can't have mates or kits.
5. MistClan still believes in StarClan so they follow the warrior code.
Character sign up
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Gender:
Age:
Personality:
Appearance:
History:
Wanted rank:
Mate, crush, or kits:
Other:
My characters
Name: Stormkit, Stormpaw, Stormtail, Stormstar
Gender: Male
Age: 20 moons
Personality: Stormstar is very clam. He almost never gets angry. He can be rude at times but he always tries to make up for being mean by being nice. He thinks about his choices carefully.
Appearance: He is a gray tabby with huge, piercing, blue eyes.
History: He grew up in MistClan. His mother was once leader and his father was a great warrior. All his siblings died and his parents are now dead too.
Rank: Leader
Mate, crush, or kits: Nope
Other: He has many scars. Most aren't very bad but he has one bad scar across his right flank.
Name: Softwhisper
Gender: Female
Age: 12 moons
Personality: Softwhisper is very quiet. She normally keeps to herself. She enjoys company but she doesn't talk often. She trusts cats very easy though and can warm up to someone very quick.
Appearance: She is a light grey color with white back feet. Her body is very slender and small. She has calm, dark, amber eyes.
History: Softwhisper was born a loner. Her mother died and she and her brother were taken in. They found her in the woods by the border. Her, nor her brother know about this but some cats treat her differently because of this.
Rank: Warrior
Mate, crush, or kits: Nope
Other: Her brother is Ravenclaw.
Name: Ravenclaw
Gender: Tom
Age: 12 moons
Personality: Ravenclaw is very proud. He stands up for what he thinks is right. He likes to tease other cats and he has a good sense of humor.
Appearance: He is mostly black but be has some dusty brown tints to his fur. He is muscular and strong. His eyes are a light amber.
History: He was once a loner. He was found with his sister near the border. His mother died and they were left alone. They took he and his sister in. He doesn't know about this and some cats treat him differently because of this.
Rank: Warrior
Mate, crush, or kits: Nope
Other: His sister is Softwhisper
Name: Hollypaw
Gender: Female
Age: 6 moons
Personality: Hollypaw is very talkative. Sometimes she can talk a little too much. She seems to always have something to say. She speaks her mind and gets excited easily.
Appearance: She is small yet sturdy. Her pelt is black and she has green eyes.
History: she has no siblings. Her mother died giving birth but her father is still alive.
Rank: Apprentice
Mate, crush, or kits: No
Other: She isn't based off of Hollyleaf :P
OOC: accepted
I can't post pictures on my iPad.
IC:
Destiny sniffed the air once more. She could smell a wolf near her but she just sat down. It was the wolf she saw yesterday.
Destiny looked up, slightly stunned. "Start a pack? I was thinking about starting a pack someday." Destiny replied.
"Ok." Destiny said, still surprised.
"Yeah. But we'll find some. We should find a territory first." She said.
Could you help me?
"Ok." Destiny said as she looked around. "I like it!" She said as a grin appeared on her face.
Just a few tips and such. :3
Character Name:
Softwhisper
Gender:
Female
Clan/Group{if any}:
Rank{if any}:
Warrior
Appearance:
Softwhisper is small and slender. Her fur is short and soft. Her pelt is a light grey. She has white back feet and calm, big, amber eyes.
Personality:
Softwhisper is very quiet. She doesn't talk much but she enjoys company. She trusts cats easily so she can warm up to you very quick.
History:
Softwhisper was born a loner, though she doesn't know this. Her mother died giving birth near the border, leaving her and her brother alone. The Clan took her and her brother, Ravenclaw in. She was raised by a queen who she believes is her real mother.
