Posts by BlueSky50010

Hi I'm completely new to this, I don't know much about the books but I know the basics. If anyone could give me tips on rping here or something, it would be appreciated, any advice or friends would be appreciated.

Character Name: Shardpaw

Gender: Female

Clan/Group{if any}: Thunderclan

Rank{if any}: Apprentice

Appearance: Dark ginger tabby with sky blue eyes and a white patch of fur on her chest.

Personality: She can be shy and sociably awkward at times due to embarrassment of her history. she has been frightened of monsters since the incident but with swift hunting skills, Shardpaw is the most hard-working cat you'll ever come across, never giving up, even when the odds are stacked against her.

History: She was once a loved house cat but when she got ran over her twoleg no longer wished to keep her because of her now broken tail which was too costly to have treated and as a result, she was abandoned at the edge of a forest, with only a blue ribbon left by her twoleg (she treasures the ribbon and will never take it off). This forest was home to Thunderclan and after testing her (This was tough, A clan cat was attacked by a fox and Shard ended up with sprained ribs but she carried on) and seeing her hunting skills they took her in as an apprentice.

lol thank you! I hope I'll enjoy it here!

A small ginger she-cat walked half-heartedly through the dense forest land, her paws throbbing with pain as the outcome of walking for a lost amount of time. She had witnessed her own mother perish at the hands of a raging river, so she just kept walking, on and on, until she found some place of shelter. Her senses were dull but her ears lifted slightly as she heard the rustling of leaves somewhere around her...

Yeah that sounds awesome! (I've started a thread on Hawkclan lol)

Really guys? A conversation on my welcome thread? Anyways...what do I do about a mentor?

There was a sudden rustle in a near by bush, shard paw jumped out to see what was going on...

Shardpaw followed the young kit and the warrior, she meowed quietly to herself, brokenkit had heard her and turned round to see the strange apprentice.

The apprentice noticed the cats' hesitation, and hung back so as not to frighten them, especially the young kit.

Shardpaw the apprentice arrived at the clan hideout, she had a mouse in her mouth which she had caught once she had hung back from brokenkit, brokenkit and lilyclaw were in the nursery. Shardpaw meowed lovingly as she saw brokenkit's shadow in the den playing with another kit. Shardpaw meowed heavily as she saw lilyclaw leave the nursery, not wanting attention; shardpaw leaped off.

OOC- ummm guys, brokenkit is already in the nursery and lilyclaw has left! Why are you ignoring my posts?

OOC-Hello!?!? I do exist you know!

The cat meowed longingly and confused as the monster with their twoleg in drove off, leaving them at the edge of a forest. The cat was cold and hungry so, guessing their twoleg wouldn't return, they stalked off into the forest to find shelter. It was dark in the forest, the large trees blocked the quickly lowering sun as the cat walked around hopefully. The cat kept walking with no sense of time apart from the slowly darkening of the forest. There was a rustle in a near by bush, a mouse scuttled out, it took the lost, abandoned cat only a few seconds to catch it's prey. The cat fed happily. There was another rustle in the bush, but it wasn't a mouse that came out...

OOC- ok, ok, sorry, I'm new to this, I won't bother changing it seeing I'm already out of the rp!

OOC- locking this thread because I'm changing clans, moving to thunderclan.

OOC- do u guys have to go on about the mini modding? Kinda embarrassing! Lol, sorry bout that new here don't really know the rules but the dramamaking wasn't in my opinion dramamaking I was being me, expressing myself, trying to be heard because I was upset and wanted some help on the whole what was I doing wrong and rping stuff! No hard feelings...

The abandoned cat was startled by this, she dropped the mouse and stood back "T-Thunderclan? Oh I'm s-sorry I was h-hungry and was l-looking for s-shelter when I-I found the m-mouse and caught it for f-food." The cat said extremely worried and fearful.

The nervous cat calmed a bit and edged forwards. "T-Thank you, just naturally a good hunter I g-guess. Umm, I guess I smell of twoleg because I did have my own one b-but he left me here, the only thing he left for me was this r-ribbon." The cat lowered her head to show the other cat her beloved ribbon which was tied around one ear in a little, blue bow.

The abandoned cat backed away, "I don't want it ruined, it's the only thing I have from my twoleg." The cat treasured the ribbon. She sat down and meowed while starring at the warrior cat, "So...do you have a name?"

"Umm Shard" the abandoned cat said.