OK i think the story is pretty good but you will understand it better if you have read the 39 clues.... ok so um im Tiana 13 and tell me what you think about the story and plz tell me if i should continue and make it into a link sorry if its a little short i have little time between school and fixing up my new house but i will try to be on as much as possible. By the way this is like my first story :) hope you like it!
Part 1: Sinead starling raced to the command center, her red hair flying up and down as she sprinted. All she heard was a little girl scream, so she was pretty sure it was Ian, but no one could be to safe. She finally got to the command center and pushed open the giant silver doors, and of course it was Ian screaming. But he wasn't in trouble at all it was just Saladin the adorable grey spotted cat tackling him. Hamilton, Ned, Madison, and Jonah where all scrambling right behind Sinead. When they took a look at the scene all they could do was laugh. AS Ian screamed for help, Hamilton took out his phone and took a few perfect pictures. One picture caught a tear that was falling down Ian’s face, and the look on his face was priceless. Hamilton sent the picture to Dan, and within two seconds he got a reply.
Dan- whoa when did you take this :-D
Hamilton- couple seconds ago
Dan- lol that is hilarious dude
Hamilton- make sure to show Amy I bet she needs a laugh
Dan- oh I did and tell Saladin good job
Hamilton- I gave him a snack and said nice job
Dan- have to go before Amy throws phone in the lake
Hamilton- lol ok Just then Amy appeared on the giant monitor.
Amy- hey guys, I have good and bad news. Good news is that photo made our day thank you, and we found a vesper hideout. Bad news is its way up in San Juan in the San Juan museum. I would definitely have Jonah go, because it’s an art and history museum. Then Hamilton for strength and athleticism. Try to get there ASAP, good luck and see you gies soon. The face began to disappear, and then it was back to the vesper activity map, like nothing funny ever happened. The only reason why everyone did remember, was because Ian was still scrambling to get Saliden off. Sinead turned around and looked at Jonah and Hamilton, “Don’t just look around you heard her, get your stuff ready to go,” she said.
Part 2
The lights flickered for a moment, and the scent of smoke began to fill the air. That’s when Jonah Wizard heard the scream. He looked over at Hamilton to make Sure he wasn't the only one who heard the high pitch scream. Hamilton must have read the look on his face, because as soon as he shot the look, Hamilton shot upright and said, “ yeah bro, where did it come from?” They both began looking around rapidly for the person screaming for help. As they were looking around Hamilton saw a man run past him with a smoke mask in one hand and matches in the other, jonah knew he had to be a vesper but instead of following the man they ran toward the yell for help. Jonah was the first one to spot the gorgeous teen. She looked about 17 years old, blue eyes, dark brown hair, and had a perfect scared face. A beam had fallen on her and she was struggling to get it off. Hamilton ran towards the sound of Jonah’s voice. When they got there they both tried pulling her out, they knew she needed air. They couldn't pull her out so Jonah came up with a new idea. Hamilton began to pull the beam up but he could tell it was getting hotter he could barley touch it . The girl was beginning to feel unsteady, and knew she would pass out any second. As soon as the beam was lifted high enough Jonah began to slide her out. As soon as he got her fully out Hamilton dropped the beam and all the smoke made him begin to feel dizzy. Jonah and Hamilton tried to standing her up but she flopped back down and said she couldn't walk, they all tried a little harder and they figured her legs may be broken, twisted, or worse because of the beam. Hamilton decided to carry her, although it seemed like she weighed/more than a ton.
What is in that purse, boulders? Hamilton screamed “No!” she said firmly. “Can you let it go were kind of in a hurry here?” She began speaking in a threatening tone, “No way, no matter what happens to me I will never ever let go of this purse!” “Okay, okay,” Hamilton said as Jonah starts giggling. “You just got told by a girl dude,” Jonah said. The girl began to feel weary and said, " whoever you are i gotta go" "Oh no you aren't going anywhere until we know who you are." Just then the girl passed out and fell unconscious," Jonah said. The more they ran the dizzier they all felt. They finally got out of the museum and sat down in the trees. Hamilton sat the girl against a giant rock. Jonah began to speak, “I wonder what is in that purse.” “I think its rocks,” Hamilton said sarcastically. Jonah walked toward the purse and began to open it. On top he saw there was a rock with music notes carved on the top of it. He showed Hamilton, and Hamilton said, “what, there where rocks, oh that liar!” Jonah started laughing as he pulled the next thing out. He took out little bottles that said different kinds of venom, there were also needles, folded music sheets, a flute, bugs, tiny video cameras, weights, and a training schedule. “This is so weird,” Hamilton said, “it’s like she is a spy or a cahill. There are poisons and needles for a Lucian, bugs, and these video things for an Ekat, weights and training schedule for a Thomas, and the music rocks and papers and the flute for a Janus. We have to tell the command center!” Jonah got one of the needles and grabbed a poison that would knock her out for at least 8 hours. He filled the needle and shoved it into her arm, he wasn't sure if he did it rite but that’s how they did it in the movies, and he didn't care as long as she would be out of the way for a little bit. Hamilton got a hold of Sinead on video chat.
Hamilton- We sort of ran into some trouble, you see there was a fire and well long story short we have a girl in the woods with us, she is unconscious because of smoke, and her purse is very interesting. Sinead- interesting how?
Hamilton- well she has a bunch of stuff from all four branches.
Sinead- hmm, that is interesting.
Hamilton- what do we do with her?
Sinead- well I would bring her back here for questioning, but she will probably be up any minute do you have anything to knock her out longer?
Jonah- I took care of it she shouldn't be up till we get to the command room.
Sinead- do I want to know how?
Jonah- umm well I used needles and poison.
Sinead- I’m going to go with no see you gies soon.
Then the laptop went blank. "Well," Hamilton said let’s get going back to Boston.
its funny haha