Is My Shading Good? ( Critic Wanted!)

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    Just want to know if it looks natural and goes over the body well and stuff.

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    CALM DOWN FRIEND
    I feel the urge to call you straw-buddy or something right now


    I'LL TAKE THAT AS YOU LIKE IT







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    Fevdfbfvafdvhadhjvibhjbaihvbedh THAT'S THE BEST NAME EVA IM NOW STRAWBUDDY FEAR THE STRAWBUDDY. I BET YOUR IMAGINING ME AS A FOAMIMG MOUTHED STRAWBERRY CREATURE

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    ACTUALLY, I PICTURE YOU RIGHT NOW AS A STRAWBERRY SMOOTHIE
    BUT LIKE A FANCY ONE IN A WINE GLASS
    ONE THAT KEEPS SHAKING AROUND AND STUFF






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    SMOOTHIES IN WINEGLASSES
    SOOO FANCY


    Wow this was suppose to be serious or something but that went away fast
    OHWELL

    HAHA HAha haha HA
    Once upon a time, I used to be Soda Drinking Crow, and this was my mascot-thing:

    when I changed to Strawberry Crow, I remade it, but never posted it on the internet and it ended up being deleted

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    REALLY?
    I made it liK E FOUR MONTHS AGO OR SOMETHING
    I dont remember
    MAYBE FIVE


    ACTUALLY I JUST CHECKED
    Its four
    AND NOW I FEEL THE URGE TO REDO THE MASCOT AGAIN
    The one I did for my current name was a sort of light red/dark pink
    I SHOULDNT HAVE DELETED IT





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    it's pretty good miss strawberry, but please remember, for light there is different shades to it. Just having one shade for the whole body wouldn't make sense. And even if the light hits the back, not that much shading will be needed.
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    thank you :)
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    Yeah, I noticed that after I was complete with everything and pretty much went meeh
    though I did do this


    please WCRPG don't eat any pixels


    The lighting for whatever reason decided to be hard to see after I saved it, and because I am testing various lighting styles I decided to use blue. For a point of reference the original color was gray.

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    Due to boredom, I am making a cat for every season, and that one is winter
    annd I am working on the lineart for spring






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