Stella Marie DeFrenze; The makings of a Killer (feedzback)

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    Welcome To Oz,Where Nightmares Reign Surpreme!
    So here we go:


    Stella sat in the car humming softly. Her sister Dezzie was being annoying as always. "Mommy!!! Are we almost there?!" She screamed at the top of her lungs. " almost" her mother replied eyes on the road. Stella sighed moving sucked monkey balls in her opinion At least I wasn't leaving any friends she thought. "Hey Mom. Is the new house near the woods?" She asked. "Yes Stel" her mother said sounding annoyed. Stella sighed as her sister said something stupid "I heard there is a man who takes kids into the woods and kill 'em!" Stella rolled her eyes "Slendermans not real" she told Dezzie "But Davie told me he was!" Dezzie protested. "Don't listen to that dumbass" Stella growled. Her mother hit the breaks "Stella don't use that kind of language and Dezzie Slendermans not real"

    Welcome To Oz,Where Nightmares Reign Surpreme!


    Night fell as they reached the house. "This is our new home girls." Their mother sighed. Stella looked at it, it was a small two-story house with five or six windows and a little warehouse which she could store game and hunting gear. Dezzie yawned "Can we go in and get some sleep?" Stella was tired too "Yea mom can we" she agreed with her sister. They went into the house and picked out their rooms. Stella chose the oldest looking one, when her mom asked why she replied "They have more character." Stella tossed and turned on the little mattress her mom put down. She couldn't sleep "Probably just not used to the house" she told herself.

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    The next day they started to unpack. "Stella did you really need to bring this?" Her mother asked holding up a hunting knife. Stella grabbed it "Yes, I always have to have it with me" her mother mumbled something about Stella marrying that knife if she had it her way. Stella laughed softly going through the stuff she brought. She found a small plush fox that was terribly sewed together "I thought I lost you!" She hugged the little stuffed animal. "Stella you are thirteen years old, you shouldn't be playing with stuff animals" her mother scolded. "I don't play with Jackle!" Stella yelled. Dezzie snickered "Stelly plays with stuffed animals!" Stella turn to look at her "Shut up you twerp!" The mother whacked her in the back of the head "Stella apologize NOW!" Stella rubbed her head "sorry" she muttered. "Louder Stella!" Her mother yelled. " I am sorry" Stella said

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    Stella was taking a walk cause her mom said she needed to get to know the kids around here. She kicked rocks as she walked. " I don't think mom will mind if I scout out the woods" she said a devilish grin creeping across her face. "I wouldn't go in those woods if I were you". Said a voice behind her, she turned around to see a boy around her age, he had messy jet black hair and gray eyes. He was wearing a trench cost that was way too big. "Why not?" She asked super annoyed. "Didn't you hear three kids were killed there last night,all girls." The boy said. "Oh really?" She questioned. He nodded. "Then the bodies are still there...that cool!" Stella giggled. "You're one screwed up chick" the boy laughed "I'm Charles but i like to be called Fallen" he put his hand out for her to shake. Stella shook his hand "Stella"

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    Fallen laughed "Nice to meet ya mate" Stella noticed his accent "Your British?" He nodded "yea I am." Stella smiled "cool!" He smiled back "Wanna go in the woods anyway?" She nodded "Hell Yeah!" They walked into the woods. Stella was completely at home running up to trees, climbing them. She brushed her blonde hair back as she climbed a huge tree. Fallen watched her and laughed neither paying any attention to the sound of a twig breaking. "I am the ruler of the forest!" She laughed. Then she heard another twig breaking "Hey Fallen that you?" Stella yelled down. He shook his head "No not me I thought it was you!" Stella climbed down "I bet it's just a deer or," she grinned devilishly "it might be the killer coming to kill us!" A young boy fell from the bush near them "Um.... Sorry for intruding"

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    Fallen growled at the kid "Jack Mom told you not to come into the woods!" Jack rolled his eyes "She told you the same thing. Oh and we need to get home." Fallen nodded "You leaving soon Stella?" Stella shook her head "I think I'll stay out here a little longer."

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    I've had low motivation but I'm still gonna continue this story


    Mom won't mind if I'm late.....she's always too busy with her stupid boyfriend to care Stella thought looking around "Wonder if I'll find those dead people" she sighed softly. A twig snapped somewhere behind her. Stella looked behind her "Hello? Dezzie did you follow me you little twerp?!" There was no response, she shrugged it off. "Probably a fox" she said softly walking deeper into the woods. Stella heard footsteps "Okay you little s**t stop following me!" She growled. Laughter filled the woods "Im not scared of you!" She yelled. A shadowy man walked up to her "Hello Madame Stella." Stella glared at him "how do you know my name?" She growled. "I overheard you and that boy talking" the man said softly. "And so you followed me?!" She yelled. He nodded "You interested me...I am Delpho" he put out his hand for her to shake. Stella glared at him "I interested you?" She asked. "Yes....your fascination with death it surprised me" he grinned

    Her gaze soften a bit "Deaths cool, hey do you know where those bodies are?" He nodded "Follow me," he walked off deeper in to the woods. Stella followed him smiling widely. They walked for what seemed to be hours when they came up to a small creek. Stella saw the massacred bodies "Wow! That is.....Awesome!!" She walked up to the bodies, she took out her knife and poked one of the bodies. "Do you like to hurt people?" Delpho asked out of the blue. "What why would I like to hurt people?"she said confused. "Nevermind forget I asked" he said softly. She stood up and started walking back home "Um.....bye Delpho" she said softly. "Goodbye Miss Stella. It was about ten o'clock when she got home. Her mother walked up to her "Stella where have you been! I have been worried sick!" Her mom yelled. "I was out in the woods" Stella said bluntly, she started to walk upstairs to her room "Stella aren't you hungry?" Her mom sounded worried. Stella shook her head "I just want to go to bed." "Okay sweetie" her mom sighed. Stella walked into her room lying down on her bed. She still couldn't sleep Why can't I sleep?!

    Stella finally fell asleep, after what seemed like five seconds her alarm clock went off, "You have to be f*****g kidding me" she muttered hitting the snooze button. "Stella! Wake up you'll be late for your first day of school!" Her mom yelled from downstairs. "Ugh! I'm up! I'm up!" She rushed around getting ready, she ran downstairs grabbing a apple. "Have a good day" he mom said sipping coffee. Stella walked to school ignoring a lot of whistles from some jocks. Idiots she thought. "Hey Stella!" Fallen yelled running up to her. "Oh hey Fallen" she smiled. "First day?" He asked. "Yea...." The jocks kept whistling, one yelled out "Hey blondie you wanna come talk to a real man?" She rolled her eyes "Lets go" she muttered, he nodded. They walked to school.

    Stella walked home grumbling about homework, she walked through the front door. "How was your day?" Her mom asked. "It was okay" she muttered. Her mom looked at her skeptically, "What?!" Stella snapped at her mom. "Nothing sweetie" her mom said softly. Stella put down her backpack and went upstairs flopping down on her bed. "Damn school...I hate it!" She growled. Either I got treated like I was stupid or picked on cause of my eyes she thought taking her knife from her boot "Thank god they didn't have metal detectors like my old school" she whispered

    "Stel?" Her mom walked in. "Yea mom" Stella said softly. "Your dinner is on the table..." Her mom said softly. Stella looked up at her mom "I'm not hungry." Her mom gave Stella a worried look "Are you feeling okay?" Stella nodded "Im fine mom." Her mom sighed walking back down stairs

    Stella yawned falling asleep "kill....." something murmured in her ear. She tossed uncomfortably muttering under her breath. Dezzie ran into her room "Stelly! Wake up silly!" Stella opened her eyes "what do you want" she grumbled. "Can I play with your stuffed animal?" Dezzie asked. "No you can play with Jackle, he doesn't like you" Stella growled. Dezzie pouted "Meanie" she ran off. Stella's stomach growled loudly "alright alright I know you need food" she got up heading downstairs

    She grabbed some food heading back upstairs. Stella heard her moms boyfriends voice "Belle I've gotta go, love you" he walked out of her moms room "Hi Stel!" He said happily. "Hi Davie" Stella growled. "What's the matter Stel...still don't like me?" He asked. Stella nodded "You will never replace my dad" she growled heading upstairs