Ashstorm wants a crush and friends!!

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  • At first the kit backed away uncertain of the two big cats, but realized they were good and inched closer to them. The kit had a snow white pelt and blue eyes. "I- I think s- s." the kit stuttered. Ashstorm smiled warmly at the kit. "Well dont worry about a thing we'll take you to our camp." he purred and gave Brightpaw a sideways glance as if asking if she agreed.

  • " yeah you don`t have to worry, you will be fine now " she meowed and gave the kit a warm smile. " so what is your name? " she asked softly

  • "M-my name is Blizzard." the little she kit stuttered. "And my mother left me and my dad died." she explained to them having a feeling they were going to ask where her mom or dad was.


    ooc: Haha sorry I'm bak! x3

  • Brightpaw looked at the kit with sympati in her eyes. she could not belive how some mothers could abandon her kits like they are nothing. " nice to meet you blizzard " she meowed and gave her a warm smile.

  • Ashstorm began to think that Blizzardkit would be a great name! Who would take care of her though? Probably another queen. he thought to himself and then snapped out of it. "Thank you for saving me!" she said in a cute voice looking at both of them and then wobbling over to Brightpaw and rubbed up against her leg. Ashtorm smiled up at Brightpaw.

  • Brightpaw purred to the kit and then nuzzled her. the she cat really loved kits, she thought they where so adorable. she really looked forward to get her own kits. she looked up at ashstorm and smiled warm to him. " lets go back to camp now " she meowed and looked at the kit again and smiled.

  • The kit scrambled onto Brightpaw's back. " Horsey ride!" she squeaked and then gently lay down on her back. Ashstorm let out a warm purr and a laugh. The kit quickly fell asleep on her as if she hadnt had a good sleep in moons. Ashstorm felt ver accomplished. "I cant believe her mother abandoned her." he commented looking into brightpaw's eyes.

  • brightpaw looked at the kit on her back and purred. and then begin to walk towards the camp looking at ashstorm. " yeah i know, i can`t understand it!, some she cats should not have kits!! " she mutterd angry

  • "Exactly! I mean why havethem if your just going to leave them." he said with a frustrated snort. How could cats ever do that! he thought to himself in anger. He calmed down though by looking at Brightpaw. He slowly walked closer so that there pelts brushed slightly. And nervously he entwined his tail with hers.

  • brightpaw was very angry by the thought of a mother leaving her kits to die. she could not understand some cats. But she calmed down then ashstorm walked closer to her and took her tail in his. Now her anger was complete gone, it had get replaced by warm feeling inside of her. and she could not stop smiling. she licked the tom cheek softly and took her tail tighter around his.

  • Ashstorm's feelings had completely changed in just one moment. He now was completely filled with warmth and happiness. He felt her soft tongue rasp over his cheek and he smiled and let out a warm purr. then he felt her wrap her tail with his more tight and his heart pounded with love. He put his head on hers for a moment as they walked and then gently took his head off.

  • Brightpaw purred warm then he took his head on hers. she could feel her heart beating faster. she never thought she would feel this strong for a tom. she really loved him and would love to be toghter with him forever. then he took his head of her, she looked at him the houl way back to camp with love in her eyes. it was then they went under the tunnel to the camp she realized they still hold thier tail tight around each other tail. ( sorry could not come up with a good word XD) She did not know if he wanted to let the clan know that they where mates yet, becuase of thier age Differences. But she desided to see what he would do. Because she did not care what the clan would say about them. so if he let go of her tail she would understand and respect that he wanted to wait, before the clan get to knew about them.

  • He purred the whole way back to camp and couldnt get that smile off of his face. As they brushed under the tunnel and walked into the clearing he still kept his tail wrapped with hers. He didnt care any more if his clanmates knew they were mates. He was proud and overjoyed to be with such a wonderful young she cat. He knew some clan members may unapprove of it because of age and blah blah blah, but he didnt care one bit. So as they walked into the clearing he kept hold of her tail tightly and lovingly.


    ( Loll that happens to me all the time... not finding the right word and stuff xD )

  • occ: really?, i think you are really good at writing the right words, and you have a very good grammar and i mean it!, i serious wished i had such a good grammar like you have. :)


    ic: then they come out from the tunnel in to the camp, she notice he had not let go of her tail yet. she felt warm and happiness inside of her. she could not stop smiling, and her eyes was full of love and happiness for the tom. Brightpaw turend her ear towards a group of cats that was whispering about them. But she ignored them. When they stood out from the leader den she forced herself to look away from him. " leader we have to talk with you " she meowed and waited for the leader to ocme out.


    occ: should we say they have talked with the leader or something?

  • ooc: Thanks(: And I think you do good at your grammar! Honestly! And yeah lets just say the leader allowed the kit to stay and a queen could take care of it??


    ic: Ashstorm heard the whole camping buzzing with whispers and little giggles, but this time he wasnt bothered. And after talking to the leader he felt more energized than ever. "I'm so happy the leader let Blizzard stay!" he purred and nudged the kit to wake up. "W-ha?" the kit began sleepily looking around starting to open his eyes. Once they were open they were very wide. "Wow I've never seen so many cats in my life!" Blizzard squeal standing on Brightpaw's back now.

  • ooc: thanks :) but i think i have a bit to work on. yeah i guess a queen will take care of her. or did you think about anything special ?


    ic: Brightpaw walked by the tom side out from the leader den. she heard cats whisperd and giggles about them. she ignored them and instead looked back at the kit that now was awake. " you haven`t?, well you will get use to it, becuase you our leader allowed you to stay in our clan, so welcome to thunderclan blizzard " she meowed and smiled warm to her.

  • Blizzard's eyes opened wider. "I'm gonna live here! Who's gonna take care of me? Would you Brightpaw?" she said looking at her with pleading eyes. Ashstorm wasnt surprised Blizzard had asked..Brightpaw is good with kits, but she is just an apprentice and probably doesnt wanna give up that time when she is a warrior.. he thought curiously wondering what she would do...