Character Name: Lemonkit
Character Age: 4 moons
Gender: Male
Alliance: RushClan
Rank: Kit
Appearance (6 or more sentences): Lemonkit is a very light shade of ginger tabby, which seems to glimmer in the moonlight. Darker ginger stripes can be found on his body, though; which can appear golden in the sunlight when he sunbathes. Overall, he looks more ginger when wet. The more ginger shade of his high cheeks emphasize his eyes, which strike out as a bright lime green, in a sort of lemon/oval-shape. The whiskers are long enough to tickle his cheeks, but are only a thin few. He has white patches in places, like his back left paw, belly, and the tip of his tail is also white. Lemonkit's short nose is a soft pink. The insides of his big ears are an even paler shade of pink, in between his ears are a short length of a forehead. His fur stretches at an average-length. Lemonkit is known for his a-little-more-than-average store of fat on his body, but a good amount of muscle justifies that. The fat disappears quickly from his structure with a shortage of prey. He often gets tired of his abnormally large paws, yet feels proud of his long tail; both of these balance eachother to make sure his walk includes much stumbling but remains balanced. The tail is very fluffed out, looking like it squirted out from his rump; especially so when he is wet.
Personality (6 or more sentences--these sentences form their own section and do NOT count towards the 4 groups below. Those are additional requirements):
Lemonkit would share a portion of his past to any cat, not all. He can seem a bit sour to some, but usually gets along well with who he knows; especially the elders. In a battle he would be defensive, but would gladly run over and help a clanmate fight the enemy, being a good partner fighter. Water is his specialty, he loves the feel of it through his fur. His favorite free-time activities include playing with Clanmates, sunbathing, staring at the clouds, feeling the wind, and swimming. Most of the time he takes a regular-sized meal choice from the FreshKill pile, if not smaller, but often is teased because of his a-little-more-than-average store of fat. Often times he is confused by this fat because he drinks plenty of water and exercises plenty of muscle; but he accepts it as a part of himself.
---Likes (at least 3): He loves to eat fish and mouse, and enjoys sun, rivers, or being around cats his age.
--- Dislikes (at least 3): Lemonkit despises the thought of getting an unsuitable warrior name. He would almost gladly trade his large paws and excess fat, but accepts it as who he is. Lemonkit also isn't too good with strangers.
---Strengths (No MORE than 5): Swimming, catching water- and ground- prey, and getting along with elders.
---Weaknesses (At least 3): He isn't very good at climbing trees, balancing on uneven ground, catching tree-climbing prey or scenting things above him.
History (8 or more sentences): Lemonkit was born and partly raised in another Clan for some time, in a forest. His mother, Badgerpetal, was mates with a cat named Sedgepelt. They had Lemonkit’s older sister, Aspenkit, along with other kits too. Badgerpetal fought a big argument with her mate once she was predicted to bear kits again, so she chose to leave the Clan. Aspenpaw decided to join then, while her siblings stayed in the Clan. Unfortunately, it was during the wintertime. They traveled for a while until Badgerpetal gave birth. Something went wrong, Lemonkit’s sister, Acornkit, didn’t make it and Badgerpetal fell sick afterwards. They made slow progress until Lemonkit’s brother Reedkit and Lemonkit’s mother finally passed away. Lemonkit felt guilty, only he had survived, and Aspenpaw would have been made a warrior already if she had stayed. In the end, they came across RushClan, and Lemonkit found a new home there with a fostering mother(?). In tears, Aspenpaw told her young brother she had to leave. She planned to return to her former Clan and tell them the news, then perhaps with her siblings there she’d travel to yet a new Clan.
Roleplay Sample (Required for first advanced bio):
Lying on the rocks and soaking up sunlight, Lemonkit sighed in contentment. The hair on his tail tingled gently, and he could feel the coolness on his ears melt as they warmed up. A breeze blew over him, and Lemonkit took in another breath of fresh air. His eyes flew open to see a soft fluff of thistledown land on his nose. Trying to shake it off, he only managed to draw the fluff inside his nose. After a good couple of sneezes, he blew it out, but the calm scene was shaken. Stumbling a little over his big paws, Lemonkit headed back towards the nursery. There he was met by the other playful kits. Before he knew it, Lemonkit was tumbling around with his foster litter. “Hah! Got you!” He had a hold on another kit’s tail.
Comments (optional): The history is a bit dramatic. Let me know if I need to change that, please.
I've heard that advanced bios are automatically accepted... but I just wanted someone to look at it so I know if it's good enough, or needs improvement. Thanks.