Can You Stop Me?

Okay so the plotline going on here would be that my character, Luke, has been bullied all his life. He's tired of it and he wants to end it all. He plans to take his step-father's gun and take it to school to kill the bullies who have tormented him his entire life before killing himself. Maybe you can talk him out of doing it? ((You may either RP a bully, a random schoolkid or a girl whose had a crush on him or something and wants to help him or his only friend))

PLEASE BE AT LEAST SEMI-LITERATE!!! Preferably no one-liner posts and use the proper capitals, periods, commas etc.

Mini Bio-
Name- Luke Allen
Age- 17
Grade- 11
Appearance-
Personality- Quiet and normally keeps to himself. Doesn't like being around others and is basically friendless. Always gets picked on for being quiet. He is also blind in his left eye and the bullies love approaching him from his blind-side to surprise him. He could be a good friend, even if he is depressed.
History- When Luke was four his dad died and two years later his mom remarried. He has a younger brother named Andy who is 11 years old. By the time Luke turned eight his mom died of cancer. His step-dad turned drunk and beat his two sons, taking out his drunken rage on them. Luke did his best to protect Andy, including send him to an orphanage. He hasn't seen his brother since and misses him badly. He has been blind in one eye since birth and had been bullied since even before that. He has been cutting since he was 15.

Luke sat on the bus, the gun weighing heavily in his pocket but he felt light-hearted. After today it would all be over. No more bullies. No more pain. He glanced up as he saw the head honcho bully, a large guy named Don, step onto the bus and smirk at him. No, he won't get to me. Luke thought. No one can after today.

Sweet :) You can start RP anytime

Luke glanced at Ella and then began staring out his window. Don sat down behind Luke and leaned forwards, pushing Luke's face roughly against the bus window. "Hey loser." he sneered and Luke winced, his face pressed against the window.

Don grinned at Kara but it was far from reassuring as he let go of Luke and leaned back, flashing the skull rings on his hands, the sunlight outside glinting off of his leather clothes. Luke sat back, slouching in his seat and pulled out his IPod, placing his earbuds in and pretending to listen to music, the gun in his pocket still making his heart pound.

Ooc~ just so you all know, its supposed to be winter out

Ooc~ lol meowed XD

Ic~ Luke looked up at Ella, his face speaking the silent words I'm sorry. He turned his face back to his IPod and slipped his hand into his pocket, the cold metal of the gun heavy in his hands. Soon, soon it would be over.

Ooc~ lol I understand :)

Finally the bus pulled up to the school and people began to exit. Luke got to his feet only to be shoved to the ground by Don, who laughed and pointed, his cronnies, Alex and Logan laughing and snickering dumbly. Luke just got to his feet, not caring that his IPod was smashed to pieces on the floor of the bus now.

Luke walked off of the bus, the gun in his pocket almost a comfort. It was a reassurance that soon his pain would be over.

Luke was about to go to his locker when Don grabbed him again, pressing him roughly against the wall. It was almost deserted in the hall aside from the bullies and a few girls. "Hey loser, what you gonna do?" Don sneered as Luke groped for his pocket. "Oh are you gonna throw an old Kleenex at me are you?" the bully laughed, "Well lets have it then!" his eyes widened in fear as he stepped back when Luke produced the gun, waving it almost madly. "No!" he yelled, "No, no, no! No more!" he leveled the gun with Don's head, square between his eyes, "I'm sick of you Don!" he screamed.