⚫◼Whisperclan◼⚫Can You Hear You Destiny◼⚫

''Soulstar was following me?!'' He perked his ears and turned all ways, searching for his eyes. ''What if he thought my pouncing was bad?! Or..or my attack?!'' He flattened his ears against his head, sniffing the air.

"I think he was impressed just like me. So don't worry your a great hunter."

He purred to the compliment, picking up his sparrow. ''You were watching to?'' He asked calmly.

"Sur, I was absorbed in hunting first, but then I heard the bird and was watching you. But I missed almost everything, I've just seen the end." Dawnheart grinned.

''Ohh...Ok then. Well..I should get back to hunting..I asume Soulstar is still watching me..'' He looked around, picking up his sparrow and dropping it back into the dirt. ''See ya later!'' He sprinted off.

She watched him, then she hunted on and took her prey to the fresh kill pile.

Meanwhile he caught his last kill and ran to his burried kill hole. He grabed all of his kill and started to run back to camp. His narrow eye made him run into a bush, dropping all his prey. He yowled as he ran into the thorn bush. Wiggling to escape, blood dripped down his fur as the thorns sunk into his soft fur.

She raised her head when she heard him yowling she ran back. "Narrowpaw? Where are you?" Dawnheart looks around for Narrowpaw.

He yowled loudly as a large thorn stabbed him into the stomach as it started to bleed. He was in so much pain it was hard to speak clearly. He didn't move.

Sorry! This is so flooded so, I'm quitting! :( Bye! Sorry!

Awww Ok....

( Aww that's sad. Okay bye but don't you think about staying?)

Dawnheart was shocked when she found him. "Narrowpaw! You're always in trouble." She said worried then she tried to help him.

He yowled. ''Watch..the..THRONS!'' He sqeaked as blood rushed down his fur. Several thorns were pierced into his stomach as blood dripped slid down his fur. He was stressed. ''Stupid..EYE!'' He held back his tears of pain as the thorns were stuck into him.
Ooc- Btw..these thorns are huge.

Well, I was gone for three days and its already at 19 posts!

I had problems, too to get into it so I stopped playing here. Because I'm living in a different time zone, so nobody was on when I was on and when I had to go to bed, everybody came on xD)

"One moment please i'll have it soon" She helped him as good as she could and sthen she stood next to the bush with him "Are you okay?" Some thornes stucked in her front legs and in her fur she tried tu put them out.

His eyes were filled with horror. ''It..hurts..'' He shut his eyes. ''Get out of the bush..I can make it...'' He snapped a twig from the bush and bit it in his mouth as he pushed himself out the bush full of large thorns. Once he got out he fell to his side, bleeding frantically.

i need to quit too im sorry

She ran to him. "Narrowpaw" she stat next to him and tried to pull the thorns out.

ooc sorry soulstar was watching he didn't want to interupt till now also so Jaykit is not in the phrophecy can one of Soulstars kits be in the phrophecy and can Dawnheart just attamiticly be Soulstars mate please? So they can have kits?

Soulstar saw his apprentice and yelled "stay still narrowpaw ."and quickly unralved him from the thorns and said "get on my back.' he picked up the apprentice and put him on his back and waited for him to latch on correctly.

Dawnheart followed, worried about Narrowpaw. They got back to camp.