Aprilshowers||May bring flowers||Done

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  • [align=center]Character Name:


    Aprilshowers


    Character Age:


    12 moons


    Gender:


    She-cat


    Alliance:


    Tempestclan


    Rank:


    Medicine cat


    Appearance (6 or more sentences):


    Aprilshowers didn't get her name for nothing. The gray she-cat was marked with white patches from birth. These white patches had the appearance of fluffy white clouds. She also just happened to have long soft fur which contributed to her cloud like patches' appearance.
    Though the first thing you may notice about April is her cloudy pelt there is still plenty more quite eye catching about her appearance. Like those deep olive green orbs for eyes, and her big black nose. One might say she flawless but that would be false. Though it more evident in her smile or at eats near her mouth. On the right side of her fang stick out around 1/4 inches below her bottom lip. April likes to think of it was a beauty mark.
    So I've told you about her appearance but not about her build. What is her build you ask? April is actually pretty stocky which implies she doesn't excursive but that not entirely true. She dose go out and about quite often it just her nature to be bigger then the majority of cats. Over all April is quite a beautiful she-cat.


    Personality (6 or more sentences--these sentences form their own section and do NOT count towards the 4 groups below. Those are additional requirements):


    April is one of warmest and most welcoming cat you'll ever meet. She open with many others its rare for April to be unkind to one. April has a habit of being motherly to the younglings she comes to meet. Being so warm and loving has it cons though. April is left somewhat vulnerable to being manipulated which is unfortunate for April.
    Regardless of being sweet and gentle she also loyal, and determine. She excites her tasks as best she can and makes sure that she did it smoothly and easily as possibly which is not always the case but thats a different story.


    ---Likes (at least 3):


    Kittens, kindred sprits, and making others happy


    --- Dislikes (at least 3):


    Being manipulated, not being able complete her tasks, and cold weather


    ---Strengths (No MORE than 5):


    Easily being able to make friends and allies, her vast knowledge of herbs.


    ---Weaknesses (At least 3):


    being so warm and open [aka being easily manipulated], wiling to give anything to help and be with kits, her ears are very sensitive.


    History (8 or more sentences):


    Aprilshowers was born on a rainy april day -thus her name- on this day a she-cat and tom place their oldest kit in a bramble and left without a trace. You see Apirlshowers was the first cat in her bloodlines to join a clan. Her parents had always wanted to join a clan but were never brave enough to attempt. So when their first litter was born the eldest of them all was left in tempest clan. They were hoping she would have kits and continue the the bloodlines in the clans.
    Unfortunately for them April showed a significant love for herbs in her apprentice years and ended up becoming a medicine cat swearing never to have kits. April never knew of her parents or their intentions had she known she may not have become a medicine cat but that is unlikely. In fact the only reason she wouldn't have become a medicine cat is if she hadn't grown up without others to play with. Granted there were other kits in the nursery but April found the medicine cats den more amusing.


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    Not my best bio :/

    The post was edited 1 time, last by ✞ Vermillion {Inactive} ().


  • Hey there Vermillion :D This bio looks great, however before this can be approved a couple things need to be fixed:


    -Could you give me a link to your first approved bio or your latest?
    -You have some choppy sentences c:
    -In appearance, you have a part that's not grammatically correct. I suggest reading over it.


    Bump when you're done<3