BlazingShadow's Bio

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  • Character Name: BlazingShadow


    Character Age: 13 Moons


    Gender: She-Cat


    Alliance: Nothing


    Rank: Rogue


    Appearance (6 or more sentences):BlazingShadow is a very mystical cat, although she can be transparent. She is all jet black, like the night sky of the tip of midnight. On her main pelt, she has Smokey grey splotches with tints of darker grey, like flecks. On her long thick tail, she has silver an blue/grey dapples, neatly placed along her tail fur. Along her wide, long ears, there are white an orange markings, not really a definite shape, though. Then, yes very detailed, these red and white patches along her swift legs and paws. But, the last thing along her wonderful pelt, is where she gets her name BlazingShadow, her blazing blue eyes, that glisten in the dim moonlight...


    Personality (6 or more sentences--these sentences form their own section and do NOT count towards the 4 groups below. Those are additional requirements): BlazingShadow will be sarcastic at times, when she has a point, she'll take it as another way to speak. When she sees a chance for a good position of something that she can receive, she wont give up for it. She is very arrogant. She always thinks she’s right, and will fight for her rights, but sometimes, she doesn’t have a main reason. Although she can be a pain, a friend, or the hunter that’s tracking you down for the death....She is very outgoing, she likes to stay along, and do her own things....


    ---Likes (at least 3): Her main like is being in trees, she’s a tree cat. All her abilities lay in the hands of trees. She can like her sister, Echo, at most times but at some moments...It goes down from there. She loves her three kits, Blaze, Dusk, and Rain. Her last thing she loves is being fresh an alive....Out in the open...
    --- Dislikes (at least 3): She hates desperate cats, that’s when her sarcasm appears....A small thing that’s not exactly her favorite, but its in the hate range. UpWalkers, they never treated her right, and forever her hate lies with them....But at some times her hate rolls on out of her soul, towards bobcats...That’s how she got her scar of her left eye, in the mountains of Tennessee.
    ---Strengths (No MORE than 5): All of her powerful strengths belong to trees. Like soaring, freshly through the air. Also, there’s a big one of being swift and quick on her paw pads, in the high branches. She is excellent at climbing, with her powerful claws. Her last ability is tracking down with her scent glands...
    ---Weaknesses (At least 3): Her main weakness is open moorlands, she isn’t well hidden an she feels trapped and watched. Her second one is Snow, with her distinctive pelt, snow will give her away with in a blink. And last is, UpWalkers and their monsters, she is terrified when they come along.


    History (8 or more sentences): She was born in a misty valley, in a small cavern with her mother, Frost, her sister, Echo, her lost brother, Blade. Along with her brother, she went missing on the age of four Moons. A fox came by and took her away, her life changing in the matter of time. She raised herself with Phelix at her side. Soon after she had everything, she left with a name of Blaze. Then she found her way into Dark Clan, then left with BlazingShadow. The name had then just stuck. BlazingShadow grew up with a dark mark on her soul. Now on, its the same with her life, with the same trail..


    Role-play Sample (Required for first advanced bio): BlazingPaw crept along the shore line of a wide crooked creek. The blue eyed cat leaped from a stone to stone with the raged creek, below. In between leaps she would rest with her limp paw, dragging behind. As the wind rolled by her, it carried along the reeking scent of Shadow Clan. She turned back and kept on running. As BlazingPaw went along, she came upon a slope. The muddy shallow hill, rolled her down every step she struggled to get up. She scraped her leg along an old root an heaved her self up. The distinctive she~cat ran as fast as she could until she came upon a ditch. BlazingShadow turned back and dove across. Soaring through the wind with disastrous things in her way meant nothing at that point. As the running came to the end, the scents faded away. The frail cat sat down, breathing fast and shallow. When she came to her destination, her mentor of Dark Clan, FlamingShadow appeared. He sat down beside her whining and praying to Star Clan. “FlamingShadow…I trailed ShadowClan away…But my leg..” she mewed her leg throbbing with pain. “Its okay, You did perfect. Just remember you saved the clan..” he rubbed into her, purring… “But, is the medicine cat coming, DuskSoul? My leg...and...my neck..” she whispered craning her neck to reveal a gash. FlamingShadow sighed and whispered, his voice crackly. “I told DuskSoul, what happened. Well, I sent RavenTear to tell her when I saw you. She said 'StarClan has chosen. I’m so sorry BlazingPaw. When you returned, Red Star was going to appoint you as a warrior.....I’m so sorry…” he meowed whining like a hungry kit. BlazingPaw purred and whispered.. “Its okay, you were the best mentor, as well as the best dad. Do you think Star Clan will approve my warrior name?” she asked, her eyes glimmering in the dim light. “I’m sure they will--And they will probably let you pick it, any ideas?” He said anxiously. "I was thing BlazingShadow...to honor my mentor" FlamingShadow's eyes twinkled, he rubbed into his daughter's fur and licked her cheek .”I love you, BlazingShadow!” he murmured. She purred...Her mouth gaped but her limbs and muscles tightened up. A silent wail escaped her throat and her body loosened. BlazingShadow's heart beat began to slow, and trailed to a distant breath. It had stopped as FlamingShadow whined and...He dragged his daughter back to camp....


    Comments (optional):Her one motto is "I’m not in this world to live up to your expectations. And your not here to live up to mine.."

    The post was edited 1 time, last by ●Båd~Mee₮ჷ~€vᵎℓ● ().

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    [size=8][font=georgia][color=white]Hey there! My name is Ryu. :)


    Your bio is looking great, although there's still a few things I'll need you to edit before I can approve you.


    -- Warrior names do not have spaces in between the two halves. Therefore it'd be Blazingpaw, not Blazing Paw. The same goes for clan names.




    Bump once you've made your edits. :)


  • This bio is looking great however there are some things that need to be fixed:


    -Rouge isn't really a rank in Bloodclan
    -It's unrealistic for a cat to be transparent, unless it's a ghost
    -I saw a few capitalization errors that need to be fixed


    Bump when your done<3


  • This looks good. However there is a part where you mention Scourge. Is that as in the Bloodclan leader or just another cat? c: If it's the Bloodclan leader please fix that as this is an AU, alternate universe, and cats from the books don't exist.


    Bump when your done<3


  • [size=7pt]- you need spaces after all colons, since you only have spaces after some of them
    - you don't need to capitilize the first letter of the second part of a warrior's name [i.e. correct; Firepaw incorrect; FirePaw]
    - you still many a fair ammount of short/choppy sentences
    - you start many of your sentences with the same words like "she", try using more decriptive words or a completely different word
    - you have some other letters that don't need capitilizing


    bump when you edit ^_^[/size]

  • Never mind....All of you keep saying something different...

  • [align=center][size=8][font=georgia][color=black]That's just because some of us notice some things another might miss. ^^


    Does this mean you would like to give up on the biography, or would you like to continue trying? :)

  • [align=center][size=8][font=georgia][color=white]In that case, I will lock this thread to prevent confusion.


    If you have any questions, feel free to PM myself or another staff member.


    Best regards. :)