Character Name: Specklefur
Character Age: 14 moons
Gender: Female
Alliance: Thunderclan
Rank: Warrior (Just BARELY became one)
Appearance (6 or more sentences):Specklefur is incredibly ugly, her long, matted fur is a putrid brown color with some dark gray spotted tabby markings and a dismal gray underbelly. Her disgusting Yellow eyes seem to always stare into space. She has a short, stubby tail and no whiskers. She has scars all over her body. Specklefur has a large nick in one of her ears which almost splits the ear in half. She is an eyesore to look at.
Personality (6 or more sentences--these sentences form their own section and do NOT count towards the 4 groups below. Those are additional requirements): Specklefur is very clumsy and is a terrible hunter. She gets frustrated within minutes of doing something, making it nearly impossible to hunt and to things. Since she has a birth defect she is referred to as downright insane by most cats. She is very violent and has been seen trying to teach the kits how to do very dangerous battle moves. Specklefur is VERY bad with other cats, and has no friends.
---Likes (at least 3): Violence, herself, doing nothing, learning.
--- Dislikes (at least 3): Light, The sun, the moon, other cats, herself.
---Strengths (No MORE than 5): Fighting. That's about it.
---Weaknesses (At least 3): Her ugliness, her easily manipulated mindset, her birth defect, her inability to hunt, her stammering, no one believes her, she lies, she comes close to dying, her failing at mostly everything, her low stamina, her frustration, having no speed, having poor vision, her lack of ability to talk sense to most cats, Her hard of hearing, etc.
History (8 or more sentences): Specklefur was born into a litter of three kits (she was the third). Her mother loved her, and her father at least tried to. Her littermates played with her and were oblivious to the fact that their sister had a big birth defect. Once the three were apprentices, however, her siblings shunned her for her lack of intelligance. Specklefur's mentor Antlertooth tried as hard as he could to train her, but she failed at everything. He eventually lost his hopeful gaze and concern of her being a warrior and put the stress on her, making her a great fighter. He gave her the nick in her ear. After being held back for 2 moons, She became a warrior.
Roleplay Sample (Required for first advanced bio): (Not required but doing it anyway) Specklefur smiled timidly at her mentor. "Hee hee. Hi Antlertooth. Me was um..hunting..?" He gave her an enraged stare. "For this, we'll work for the entire day! You MUST learn to battle, or you'll just become an elder instead of a warrior!" She had heard this threat many times. "C'mon." He started to pad towards Snakerocks. Specklefur followed him. She sighed. This would never end. The constant training would never stop. "Specklefur, I'll teach you something today." She was intrigued. She loved to learn. "Okay, how do you tell someone, no, I won't have any of this?" Antlertooth meowed smoothly. She stared at him blankly. "I... Dunno." He scowled at her. "By force! You take a blow at them! I'll show you." He saw a tree and leapt at it, clawing it and ripping it. "Oh. " Specklefur replied. "We'll go over this every day until you know this by heart. Only by force can you survive in this world." Her mentor meowed, a grin on his face. He would succeed in making this abomination into something good.
Comments (optional): I tried to make the most Non-Mary-Sue ever.
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