Character Name: Minnowpelt
Character Age: 16 moons
Gender: Female
Alliance: Thunderclan
Rank: Warrior
Appearance (6 or more sentences): Minnowpelt is a very small, and kind of pretty she-cat with short-ish fur. She has a gray, almost silver pelt that is very well taken care of. Her tail is normal, and somewhat bushy, and softer than the rest of her fur. There is a deep scar on her shoulder from a battle against a badger when she was an apprentice. She also has very big, blue, almost turquoise eyes that sparkle in the sun. Her pelt is very soft, yet very sleek, as if she were a Riverclan cat. She got her name from her small, slender form and her sleek, gray fur.
Personality (6 or more sentences--these sentences form their own section and do NOT count towards the 4 groups below. Those are additional requirements): She's a very shy and clumsy around other cats, but when they get to know her, she's very playful, almost too playful, and easygoing. The past has left scars, and she is very depressed and lonely most of the time. She can be very kind, and gentle once you get to know her, or she could just hide away like she does around everyone else, it doesn't necessarily mean she doesn't like you, there's just times where she wants to be left alone. During battle, on the outside she's clawing and biting, but on the inside it hurts her to hurt any cat like how she was hurt as a kit. She loves Moonhigh, and she's usually up around that time, and it's one of the only times when she's outgoing. All in all, she's very shy, but also very nice, and she would make a good friend to any cat.
---Likes (at least 3): Moonhigh, Mice, Being loyal, Playing.
--- Dislikes (at least 3): Thorns, Her past, Suffering, Battles.
---Strengths (No MORE than 5): Running, Swimming, Climbing, Jumping
---Weaknesses (At least 3): Her shoulder, Terrains with steep hills, cliffs.
History (8 or more sentences): She was born on a stormy Moonhigh just across the Riverclan border. Her parents were from different clans, so she was born half-clan. Her mother, Stemfur had abandoned her at 4 moons in Thunderclan territory, and went back to Riverclan after her father had refused to take her in. After about half a moon of the helpless kit trying to survive on her own, a Thunderclan patrol found her, nearly dead under an uprooted tree. She had been surviving on slow-moving prey, crowfood, and frogs. She was given an adopted mother, and nobody knew she was half Thunderclan, half Riverclan, except for her father, who had pretended he never saw her in his life. In her apprenticeship, she had been attacked by a badger on hunting patrol, and had to fight for her life to get away, the battle left her with her permanent scar on her shoulder, and a few other ones that were only small and hardly noticeable. She was also labeled the fastest runner, and best swimmer in the clan, but no one suspected that she was half Riverclan, even if they had joked about it.
Roleplay Sample (Required for first advanced bio): Minnowpelt sat by Thunderclan's side of the Riverclan border, and looked up at the dark sky ahead of her. To her, this was one of the most beautiful sights that she had ever seen. She looked down at her reflection in the river, and bent down to drink some water. She pulled her head up when she was done, and looked around at the trees, casting shadows over the water. She stared over at the place where she had been discovered, and padded up to it, and ducked inside. She sat down, and just thought about everything that happened. All of the memories came flooding back to her, the good ones, the bad ones, all of them. She looked up at the stars, and back down at the leaves that lay on the ground. she lay her head down on her paws, and fell into a deep sleep, not caring if her clanmates would be worried about her.
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