[align=center]Mysterious Kit~The Book!
Note: this is a remake, due to a lack of space. Original is here.
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Yes, to all of you that were awesome enough to be part of the thread known as "Mysterious kit" Thread, I am writing a book! First, I must get a couple things out of the way. One. MANY MANY MANY (There should be more many's, but if i put that many, there would be no room for the book. XD) thanks to Guardianstar, who loyally never ever stopped RPing with me. All, thanks to Kitty1, Who also RPed with me, near the end. Also, thanks to all the people who RPed in the thread, I wouldn't be able to write this if it weren't for you.
the other thing is that This book may be updated roughly every couple of days. Feel free to comment, or constructively criticize. With that said, lets begin!
WAIT! I forgot to mention, this takes place in an alternate Thunderclan. AND, It will be a vastly different style and somewhat different genre than my first book, because its a RP based book. The VERY last thing. THANK THANK THANK YOU Guardianstar, for being my editor. Your writing is absolutely epic!
OK, NOW we can begin. :)
It was night time while Sharpkit crouched warily at the border of Thunderclan. He had been there for most of the day and was growing impatient. Didn’t the cats of this clan ever patrol this border? He was a black kit, somewhat large for his age. One of his eyes was green, the other was blue. He had many mysterious scars on his body, a record of his battles as a loner. He waited, wondering if a Thunder clan cat would ever spot him.
He looked out into the forest and spotted a golden brown she-cat heading this way. “At last,” he muttered.
Bronzegaze the brown she-cat headed along the border, unaware of Sharpkit. She was only several fox-lengths away when she finally spotted his pitch black pelt. She bounded over to him. "What’s an apprentice doing out here?" She glared at him, not knowing that Sharpkit was just a kit and a loner too.
"I've been looking for someone like you" he said calmly. "Are you from Thunderclan?"
"Yes," Bronzegaze said warily. "What are you doing out here?"
"I would like to join Thunderclan,” Sharpkit mewed. “I've heard about them and I prefer Thunderclan over any of the others. Could you escort me to your camp?" He wasn’t sure if this cat would agree or not, but there was no reason why she shouldn’t accept his request. Besides, he was only a kit.
Bronzegaze narrowed her eyes. She considered the situation carefully. She couldn’t turn him away; he was clearly not from the forest. She looked over his body and gazed at his scars. Someone with that many scars must mean trouble, but I can’t turn him away. I’ll let Wrathstar and Wildeyes deal with this. "I'll take you to Wrathstar. But don't get your hopes up."
"Thank you. I look forward to meeting him." replied Sharpkit.
At that moment, Dingokit jumped out the bushes and laughed, "You didn't know I was here did you?!" She grinned, still laughing. Sharpkit missed the laughing and spun around. He hissed, fluffing up his fur to twice his size.
"Whoa!" Dingokit exclaimed and jumped back a few paces.
Sharpkit smirked a little and asked, "I'm sorry, did I scare you? Who are you?”
"A bit..." Dingokit admitted, smiling. "I'm Dingokit" She was a small, pale golden she-kit, who looked like she was covered in red dust.
Sharpkit smirked again. "I assume you are a Thunderclan kit also?" he asked.
Dingokit jumped into the air. "You got it!" she replied, grinning once again.
Sharpkit sighed. "Could you please just show me your camp?" he said, feeling slightly impatient
Wildeyes leapt from a tree and landed amongst the gathered cats, "What in the name of Starclan is going on here? Who is this kit?" she mewed fiercely.
This is... I actually don't know!" Dingokit answered.
"I'm Sharpkit" he said. "I am ah.... a loner. I only wish to speak to your leader about joining. I hope you don’t think a kit like me poses any threat," he said.
Wildeyes snorted, “You’re not from around here, but you are just a kit. There’s not a lot you can do against us.”
"You coming or what?" Bronzegaze asked ten fox-lengths away.
"Coming" said Sharpkit. He ran up to her. "What is your leader’s name?" he said to Bronzegaze.
"Wrathstar," She responded.
"Why the prename Wrath? And do you believe he will let me join?"
"Wrathstar's a very kind and wise cat, and I believe he'll let you join; but I can't read the future." She pointed out.
"Hmm...." he thought. For a moment, Sharpkit felt a pang of regret for what he was planning. These cats did not seem like what is father said. He shook himself. Turning to Bronzegaze, he said, "Well I am a good fighter and I already know how to hunt."
"That’s not all you need to know to be a clan cat. You must also follow the warrior code, and respect each other fairly." Bronzegaze explained.
"Of course" said Sharpkit. "I am willing to do that; I just need to learn the warrior code." As he said this, he thought to himself silently; them and their weak warrior’s code. But he showed no emotion on his face.
Dingokit jumped around happily, smiling "The clan is a really nice place!"
Wildeyes had stayed silent for most of the conversation, but now she spoke up. "You say you want to learn about the warrior code? Well, you're just a kit. You're not old enough to become an apprentice," she paused, "unless you're six moons old." Wildeyes tipped her head to one side, a tick she'd developed whenever she questioned someone, "Are you six moons old?"
"I'm 5 and 3/4 moons old. To be exact," Sharpkit replied
Wildeyes blinked at Sharpkit. "Okay, I will take you to Wrathstar. Don't do anything stupid, be respectful and stay out of every cat’s way. Even if Wrathstar accepts you, everyone will be suspicious. You must prove to us that we can trust you. We might welcome you into our clan but it's up to our leader to make you an apprentice." Wildeyes turned and headed towards the camp. She stopped and turned her head, "Bronzegaze, follow me. Dingokit, stay with Sharpkit in between us. Don't even think about wandering off." She looked at Bronzegaze again, "Let's go."
"Naturally, I will be respectful to the leader and deputy" said Sharpkit. "That much I do know and I am quite willing to learn." Sharpkit glanced at the deputy. It won't be this way for much longer. He thought to himself. But he showed nothing.
“Nice to know,” Wildeyes nodded.
Dingokit sped up until she wad padding next to Sharpkit. "It's no fun staying in camp all the time!" she stated.
"I didn't know that kits were allowed out of camp" he said to Dingokit. Such an innocent kit... he thought to himself.
Wildeyes flicked her tail, "Kits aren’t actually allowed out of camp. But this one doesn’t care about that, she’ll wander off anyway. But you can have as much fun inside as you can outside. Besides, you'll be an apprentice soon," she thought a moment, "maybe, if Wrathstar says so, you and Sharpkit can train side-by-side." She chuckled; they might even become great friends.
"Hmm ...I like that idea" said Sharpkit. "I want to learn as much about clans as possible." he mewed, looking around him curiously.
"Well you came to the right clan to learn from. Other clans would chase you out on sight, kit or not. We're also the best warriors. If you want to learn, learn from us." She paused, "I just hope the knowledge is used in the right way." said Wildeyes.
"What is that supposed to mean?" said Sharpkit, sounding clueless.
Wildeyes sighed, "Thunderclan hasn't always been filled with 100% loyal cats." She looked up at the sky, "There's always a cat, at some point, which’s so hungry for power that they'll betray their clan."
For a moment, a pang of regret washed through Sharpkit. Then he remembered his father and pushed those thoughts away. "That's terrible" Sharpkit said. "What kind of cat would do that?"
Wildeyes shook her head, as if to clear the bad thoughts. "Never mind, those were the old days. If another cat dares to betray our clan, I'll kill them myself." She suddenly stopped, he eyes wide with horror. "How could I ever say that? I'm not bloodthirsty! I sound like a Shadowclan cat!" She dipped her head in shame, "I've changed. I don't know how. Maybe it was when..." She trailed off as she remembered how her mate had died in battle.
"Shadowclan?" said Sharpkit. "I assume they are another clan right? What are they like?" he asked.
Dingokit jumped in "There are four clans! Shadowclan is one of them! They are scary cats!"
Wildeyes looked up, a cold hatred in her eyes. "They're another clan, yes. They are fox hearted monsters!" She swiped at a rock and sent it sprawling into a bush. She stomped on in a fury, "They killed my mate in battle," she snarled, "I won't ever forgive them. I won't let it cloud my vision though. My only reasons for living now are my kits and clan mates."
"Scary?" said Sharpkit in response to Dingokit. "Why, do they live in a haunted graveyard or something?" he asked jokingly.
Wildeyes shrugged, she'd cooled down now. "They live in marsh-land. It's sort of misty with fog. All I've seen of their territory is what's in sight from our side of the Thunderpath"
"What is the Thunderpath?" asked Sharpkit, genuinely puzzled.
"It's a path that the Twoleg monsters move on. Stay away from it though," Wildeyes warned, "If one hits you, you'll be dead before you can say "Starclan help!"
"Oh wait! I know what you’re talking about!" said Sharpkit. "Where I come from we sometimes call it a Blackpath."
Wildeyes nodded, a twinkle in her eyes, "Yes, because it's black." She paused, "Where do you come from? You can't have simply popped up from nowhere. You have a clan cat name but your ways are different." She looked Sharpkit up and down, "You come from somewhere but where?"
"Well, my parents were... um... loners. My parents named me Sharp but I wanted to join your clan so I named myself Sharpkit." he mewed. He tried to keep the awkwardness out of his voice. He needed to be more prepared for questions.
"So your parents were loners? Well, where are they now? I'm sure your mother and father is worried." Wildeyes blinked at Sharpkit, "Did you run away?"
"No, my father is dead and my mother is... well I’m pretty sure she is dead too." mewed Sharpkit, sounding sad and angry.
Wildeyes blinked, there was no pain, shock or hurt in her eyes, only sympathy. "You must be upset," she sat down and smiled at Sharpkit. "When my mate died, I was devastated. It was even harder to tell my kits." Tears ran from her eyes, "They kept saying that he was only 'sleeping.' "
"That’s terrible" said Sharpkit. For a moment, Sharpkit felt bad about what would happen if he went through with his plan but he ignored it. You must not be weak he astonished himself.
Changing the subject, he said "How did your mate die?" he asked Wildeyes
"There was a Shadowclan raid, they attacked our clan. My kits had been up to their usual mischief, getting into trouble. They left the hollow to explore our territory and were found by the Shadowclan cats. My kits ran but one was caught, Moonkit. My mate, Hollowfang, ran to his rescue with a patrol. I was in it, desperate to save my kit. There was a huge battle. My mate died saving our kit." She looked up at the stars. "I won't ever forget him."
"But why would Shadowclan raid? And then try to steal a kit?” said Sharpkit. "That seems cold hearted" he added
"I don't know why. Shadowclan seem to ignore the warrior code. Steal a kit? What could drive any cat, even Shadowclan, to do such a thing? It gets worse as well." Wildeyes looked into Sharpkit’s eyes, "They killed Pepperkit as well."
"KILLED!!!!! WHAT!?!?!" said Sharpkit in shock.
"Yes, Pepperkit was one of my kits who were there. When my mate was killed, we won the battle. Little did we know that another Shadowclan patrol was heading in the direction my kits had run? They found them again. We found them but when we got there it was too late."
"Killing a defenseless kit is so... so... dishonorable. They should not even be called warriors!" said Sharpkit, sounding angry.
Sharpkit growled at the thought. Then with a shock he realized the damage his plans might do. Whatever happens he thought, I won't let queens and their kits be hurt. "So," said Sharpkit, "who do you think will mentor me?"
Wildeyes blinked, "Well...I...um. To be honest, I was hoping to mentor you. Over this short time, I’ve grown to like you a lot." She looked at Sharpkit, "Would you like me to mentor you?”
"Wow! What an honor to be mentored by the deputy! I would like that a lot." replied Sharpkit eagerly.
"Well; it would be an honor to mentor you, Sharpkit. I will talk to Wrathstar about it. Let's go, we're almost at the camp. Stay close to me when we get there. You never know what might happen." She looked towards the trees ahead. "Sharpkit, I told you how other clans would have chased you out. Our clan isn't that far away from that. There are cats here that would want to chase you out but they will listen to Wrathstar. What he says goes. But I said there can be betrayers, you have to keep your eyes open to see them."
"Alright" said Sharpkit, moving a little closer to Wildeyes.
She smiled and stepped into the bushes. He reminds me of Pepperkit, she thought. Same black pelt and everything, maybe he's...stop it! He's not Pepperkit, I saw the blood! Something inside Wildeyes made her pause. Could it be?
Sharpkit saw Wildeyes looking at him and looked away. I wonder what she’s thinking he thought.
Wildeyes turned back to let Sharpkit catch up. "We're close, get ready."
Then, Wildeyes led Sharpkit into the entrance for camp.
The cats entered the camp and Sharpkit couldn’t help but gasp.
It consisted of a large clearing in the brambles. He could see several dens around the clearing, one had a group of elders talking inside, another held the sound of queens chatting as their kits played, there was a den where a gathering of young cats were playing, another had a bunch of big cats who glared at Sharpkit as he walked past. "So this is Thunderclan camp?" said Sharpkit wonderingly, looking around. He ignored the cats but couldn’t avoid their gazes for long.
"This is Thunderclan," said Wildeyes, as she eyed a few cats of the cats who were hissing at Sharpkit, "Clear off! I'm taking him to Wrathstar, not as a prisoner.” She looked around camp and said, “As a guest,” as one of them opened their mouth to object.
Dingokit blinked, “Weird, the warriors don’t usually act like this.”
Wildeyes sighed, “Dingokit, go and play with Starkit and Moonkit in the nursery. I need to take Sharpkit to Wrathstar. Bronzegaze, sort out the warriors.”
Bronzegaze nodded and walked to the warrior’s den, glaring at the cats. “Idiots, is this how you treat a kit? You should be ashamed for doing…” She padded into the den and disappeared.
Dingokit sighed and ran to the nursery.
Sharpkit blinked, “Who are Starkit and Moonkit?”
“My kits, I told you about Moonkit earlier, Starkit is his sister.” As the cats walked off, Wildeyes leaned over Sharpkit, "Don't worry. If things get out of control, I'll protect you." Sharpkit hissed back equally threateningly, fluffing his fur up and snarling slightly, feeling anger towards these cats. Wildeyes only chuckled, laying her tail on his flank. "There's no need to be afraid. Show them your true colors when they attack. Otherwise Wrathstar will see you as a menace. Be friendly. Kindness is victorious where brute force fails. But you can't use kindness after, only before. Trust me."
Sharpkit flattened his fur and assumed a very dignified manner.
"Good. If any cat threatens you again, be friendly. They only hiss at you because they're scared of what you might do. You can't hurt them but they're wary of what you might bring with you. For all they know, you're here with some evil plan and all hell would break loose!" She laughed, "But that's idiotic. I know you wouldn't do anything to harm us. I trust you." She licked his flank and moved on.
"Ok" said Sharpkit. So naïve, he thought to himself with an inward smirk. "Thanks for the advice" he said.
"You’re welcome. No one else listens to my "kind before evil" tactic. It's like all anyone cares about is killing." She sighed, "I'm glad you came, Sharpkit. I might be deputy but...no one seems to care anymore. Since my mate and kits death, it's like they've been ignoring me. You're the only friend I have now, honestly." She looked at Sharpkit, "We should stick together. No one trusts you and no one likes me. We make the perfect match." She smiled to herself and stopped outside Wrathstar's den. "It's time to meet my leader."
"Well I'm glad there is one welcoming cat in this clan." good thought Sharpkit to himself. I need someone who trusts me.
"Okay, let’s go." Wildeyes stepped through Wrathstar's den entrance and waited for Sharpkit.
Sharpkit stepped into the den and faced Wrathstar. "Greetings Wrathstar," he said, dipping his head respectfully. "My name is Sharpkit and I am a loner. I wish to join your clan, if you will have me. I am old enough to be apprenticed to and I am willing to learn all you have to teach me."
Wrathstar looked at the kit that had just stepped into his hollow so suddenly. "Young kit, I want to hear a full story of your background. I don't want to hear any lies. Just tell me, from beginning to the end."
"Go on," Wildeyes said, "You can trust us."
Sharpkit took a deep breath, and began. "My mother and father are loners who lived in the Twoleg town. My father was killed in a fight with… another loner" he said. "My mother was taken by a couple Twolegs about three moons ago. I continued living in alleys, fighting other cats and hunting rats. Then I heard about the forest clans. I tried to get as much info as I could and I decided I liked Thunderclan. I decided that clan life sounded more... honorable, so a came to Thunderclan to join. And now I am here." he said, finishing his story.
Wrathstar thought for a moment. "Do you know the loner who killed your father?" he asked.
Yes, yes I do, thought Sharpkit. Instead, he merely said "Just a traveling loner, a ginger tom. My father attacked him after the loner tried to steal food. My mother was captured about a moon after his death. I think she was so unhappy about my father’s death she wasn't watching for Twolegs" he mewed sadly. Sharpkit began to feel slightly uncomfortable. I hope they don't get too suspicious He thought.
Wrathstar squinted at him, "Where did you get those scars, kit?" he mewed, looking at the scars that were on the kits body.
"In the alleys I often had to fight for food. After my parents weren't there to protect me anymore, a big white and black tom started taking their patch of territory and stealing food. I lost to him once, but after our second fight, he NEVER bothered me again. In fact, he ran away from that town entirely." said Sharpkit. He was glad that at least that much of his story was true.
Wrathstar blinked, "How long did it take you to find us?"
"Well, I knew you lived in the forest, so you must have forest smelling scent markers that probably smelled slightly of squirrel and pigeons and such. I sniffed around until I found a scent that was yours and I waited." he replied
"Yes, but how long did it take? The Twoleg place is big. I want to know how well you could navigate it's...area." inquired Wrathstar.
"OH, I lived about halfway to the center of the Twoleg place but I often roamed very far to search for better food. My fighting skills meant that cats were too afraid to try and steal from my territory and I had no trouble taking whatever food I found on my travels. As a result, I know almost every nook and cranny of the town. It took me about two days." replied Sharpkit.
Wrathstar considered for a moment. "How long were you in the Twoleg place? It must've been a while if you knew so much about it. Was it a few months? That's reasonable, it takes even longer to map the forest but I'm being generous."
"Well, I lived there for nearly six moons but I was alone for about 3 and a 1/2 moons. I am pretty good at creating a map in my head so it didn't take me long to learn the town."
Wrathstar narrowed his eyes. "Have you lived in the Twoleg place all your life or only when your father died and after your mother was taken?"
"All of my life." responded Sharpkit.
"How did you know our scent? You said that you walked the forest until you found our scent. You have never smelled us before so how do you know the difference between us and Shadowclan?" said Wrathstar curiously.
"Well, I knew for sure that you lived in the forest, so I figured you'd smell like the forest and its food." said Sharpkit innocently.
"Yes but how? We smell like cats, they smell like cats. How do you know the difference?" Wrathstar was getting suspicious, what was this kit hiding? He hid it well, but he would uncover it soon enough. I might as well keep an eye on him, thought Wrathstar.
Wildeyes blinked at Wrathstar, why was he asking all these questions? How were they important? She shrugged inwardly and continued to listen.
"Well, I suspected but I didn't know. That’s why I asked the first cat I met if they were Thunderclan. Besides, forest cats have forest scents don't they?" he asked. But inside, he was nervous as heck.
"Yes, but we all have our own individual clan scent." He paused, "In time, you will learn to put a name to each scent in our clan. Maybe even beyond." Wrathstar responded
"Wow, ok!" said Sharpkit. "Will you accept me?" Sharpkit was nervous. What if he won't? Then everything is ruined. He thought. But he showed no emotion, only excitement.
"I won't appoint you as an apprentice straight away. I want to keep an eye on you until I trust you. For now, you will stay in the nursery with the other kits. Wildeyes, I'm putting him under your surveillance. Adopt him as one of your own."
Wildeyes gasped, "What? He may be my friend but my kit? This is crazy, I won't do it!"
Wrathstar growled, "Wildeyes, you will do as I say!"
Wildeyes wanted to object but she sighed, "Fine."
"Don't worry Wildeyes; I'll prove I can be trusted. Then you can mentor me" he said excitedly.
Turning to Wrathstar he said "I'll show you that you can trust me."
Wrathstar snorted, "I hope so." He walked out and leaped onto the High ledge.
"Come on," Wildeyes whispered and walked out.
Sharpkit followed Wildeyes out of the den. "What happens now?" he asked.
"Wrathstar's going to announce your arrival to the clan."
Wrathstar yowled across the camp, "Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey, join here beneath the High rock for a clan meeting!"
Sharpkit walked up eagerly, waiting for Wrathstar to continue. I wonder what he’s going to say about me.
When all the cats were gathered, Wrathstar spoke, "We have a new arrival in our clan. A rogue kit named Sharpkit has requested to join our ranks and become a warrior of Thunderclan." There were harsh whispers and yowls of protest but Wrathstar continued, "He has shown promise and strength. He has lived a harsh life, but that will make him stronger. He will be under Wildeyes guidance until he becomes apprentice. She will adopt him as one of her own and will treat him as one of her own. As far as any of you may be concerned, he is her son." He narrowed his eyes at Sharpkit and yowled, "This meeting is over." He stepped down from the ledge and re-entered his den. There was a moment of silence before the cats soon turned and headed back to their normal duties.
Sharpkit heard a cat hiss to his friend, “That little termite won’t ever be part of this clan! Since when does Thunderclan welcome rogues?! Wrathstar has lost his mind! There’s no place in the clan for that loner…!” The voice trailed off as they padded further away.
Sharpkit narrowed his eyes at the cats and would have run over t give them a piece of his mind if Wildeyes wasn’t standing next to him. "So, what now Wildeyes?" asked Sharpkit, trying to hide the strain in his voice.
She paused, "I'll show you around camp, I wouldn’t want you to get lost." She leapt off of the highledge and stopped outside a large bush. Sharpkit peered in and saw a few warriors inside. "This is the warrior's den. It's where the warriors sleep." A large cat stepped out and glared at Sharpkit before moving on. "That's Brackenclaw."
"Hello, Brackenclaw," said Sharpkit respectfully. The cat only grunted in reply, not looking back. I guess it will take a while for them to accept me, he thought. Then, turning to Wildeyes, he asked, "Where is the nursery? I’d like to see where I’m going to sleep from now on."
"The nursery is over here," Wildeyes smiled. She padded over to another bush, this one looked more cared for and welcoming, "Do you want to come inside and meet my kits? They're almost the same age as you."
"Sure," replied Sharpkit with a smile.
Wildeyes padded inside and Sharpkit followed. She called to her kits, "Moonkit, Starkit? You've got yourself a new littermate. This is Sharpkit, your new adopted brother."
The two kits raced over and circled Sharpkit. Starkit sniffed him and wrinkled her nose, "He smells funny!"
"Don't be rude! He probably thinks the same thing of you." She licked Sharpkit's head and settled down in her nest. "It's been a long day. Why don't the three of you come to bed?”
Moonkit sighed, “Fine. I guess we can play with Sharpkit tomorrow.” He leaped into the nest.
Sharpkit settled down and glanced at Moonkit and Starkit. "How long till you two become apprentices?" he asked them.
"Half a moon! We can't wait to get there! We can talk at night without Mattedtail snapping at us to go to sleep!" Starkit gave a sharp glare to a grey she-cat who was sleeping in the corner with a black kit. “She’s Dingo’s ma.”
Sharpkit blinked, “Dingo? Is that what you call Dingokit?”
Moonkit nodded, “Yeah, well…we only call her that sometimes.”
Sharpkit chuckled. "Maybe we could be apprenticed together along with Dingokit."
"I'd like that," said Starkit. She yawned and curled up beside Sharpkit.
Wildeyes smiled and licked each of her kits, even Sharpkit. "Goodnight my little ones," she breathed and closed her eyes.
“Goodnight,” muttered Moonkit.
“Night,” whispered Starkit.
“Goodnight," smiled Sharpkit.
The next morning, Starkit was the first to wake up. Moonkit woke up with her and Sharpkit was soon to follow, but not by his own free will. Starkit pounced on Sharpkit, "Wake up Sharpkit, wake up! Let's go play outside!"
Moonkit mewled eagerly and scampered out of the hollow. "Go on," Wildeyes smiled at Sharpkit, "I'll be out there too in case anything happens. Remember what I told you about good before evil."
"Ok," said Sharpkit, sounding a little confused.
Together, the three kits went outside to play.
Wildeyes smiled, “I think this moon will fly like a bird. They’ll soon wonder how time had passed so quickly.”
And they did. After half a moon of the best fun Sharpkit had ever had, it was time for their apprentice ceremony. It hit them flat in the face so suddenly that they could only sit and stare before celebrating.
“We’re going to be apprentices!” Dingokit squealed.
“I’m so excited!” Starkit laughed.
Moonkit grinned, “We’ll finally start our training!”
Sharpkit grinned; I’ll finally earn the trust of the clan. Then my plan will come into form…
"Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey, join here beneath the highrock for a clan meeting!"
The kits bounded up eagerly, excitement shining in their eyes.
"We've all met the young kit Sharpkit..." There were loud mews from Moonkit, Dingokit and Starkit, "...it is now time to name not only one but four new apprentices."
Wildeyes gasped, "No! Look at the state of them!" She grabbed Sharpkit, Starkit and Moonkit and licked them rapidly. Mattedtail beamed proudly at Dingokit, whom she had cleaned earlier in the morning.
Sharpkit wriggled under his adopted mother’s licking.
"Keep still! Do you want to look all messy in front of your clan?"
Sharpkit sighed and stopped moving.
Wrathstar sighed and carried on, "Starkit, Moonkit, Dingokit and Sharp kit. Step up to the highrock." Wildeyes stopped licking and watched her kits and Dingokit step up to the highrock. "Starkit and Moonkit, step forward." The two kits stepped up.
“Starkit, you have reached the age of six moons, and it is time for you to be apprenticed. From this day on, until you receive your warrior name, you will be known as Starpaw. Your mentor will be Hazelwing. I hope Hazelwing will pass down all she knows on to you. "STARPAW STARPAW!" cheered the clan.
"Moonkit, please step forwards.”
Moonkit beamed and stepped up and stood before his leader.
“Moonkit, you have reached the age of six moons, and it is time for you to be apprenticed. From this day on, until you receive your warrior name, you will be known as Moonpaw. Your mentor will be Patchpelt. I hope Patchpelt will pass down all he knows on to you."
"MOONPAW MOONPAW!" cheered the clan.
He turned to Sharpkit and Dingokit, "Sharpkit, Dingokit, step forwards..."
Wildeyes whispered in Sharpkit's ear, "It's time."
Sharpkit stepped forwards with Dingokit by his side.
“Dingokit, you have reached the age of six moons, and it is time for you to be apprenticed. From this day on, until you receive your warrior name, you will be known as Dingopaw. Your mentor will be Frozenleg. I hope Frozenleg will pass down all he knows to you."
“DINGOPAW DINGOPAW!” the clan cheered loudly.
"Sharpkit, you have reached the age of six moons, and it is time for you to be apprenticed. From this day on, until you receive your warrior name, you will be known as Sharppaw. Your mentor will be Wildeyes. I hope Wildeyes will pass down all she knows to you."
Wildeyes gasped, "But he's my kit! I can't mentor my own kit."
Wrathstar rolled his eyes, "He’s not your blood related kit and he's under your ‘surveillance’. Mentor him!"
Wildeyes nodded and stepped forwards.
"Wildeyes, you are ready to take on an apprentice. You had received excellent training from Jaggedmane, and you have shown yourself to be an excellent fighter and you have great wisdom. You will be the mentor of Sharpkit and I expect you to pass on all you know to him."
Wildeyes touched noses with Sharppaw. "Sharppaw!" the clan cheered, though not quite as loud as they had with the others. "What do we do first?" asked the new apprentice of Thunderclan.
"I'll show you our territory. It’s simply amazing, you have to see it. It’s better than Windclan’s moors, it’s better than Shadowclan’s swamp and it’s much better than Riverclan’s wet river lands." Wildeyes grinned and looked at Patchpelt and Hazelwing, "Do you lot want to come too? We could be the border patrol. Bring your apprentices along too."
Starpaw looked up, “Why not bring Dingopaw along too?”
Wildeyes sighed, “That would be nice, but Frozenleg is taking her on a short hunting trip. I’m sure she’ll be able to come next time.” She looked up at Patchpelt and Hazelwing, “Well? Are you coming?”
They nodded, “Wouldn’t miss it for the world.”
Patchpelt nodded, agreeing with Hazelwing, “It would be best if these three trained together, later it will be with Dingopaw too.”
Wildeyes nodded and started towards the entrance, "Let's do it!"
"Ok," said Sharppaw.
Moonpaw grinned, “Let’s go!”
Starpaw laughed, "Where should we go first?"
Hazelwing smiled, "We'll patrol the Riverclan border then make our way down the Thunderpath. After that, we'll cover the Twoleg fences, make sure no Kittypets are in our territory."
"Ok," said Sharppaw.
Moonpaw nodded, “We’ll guard the forest with our lives!”
It was a long walk to the River. When they got there, Wildeyes smiled, "Everyone, look in the water."
The three apprentices peered in and blinked, seeing a shape flash by in the river. Sharppaw asked, "Is that a fish?"
"Yes, Riverclan cats eat fish. Don't try to catch one though. The river is their territory, we can't eat here." She renewed a scent mark nearby and looked towards the trees, "Let's go to the Thunderpath." She dashed into the bushes.
Sharppaw dashed after Wildeyes "So, what’s on the other side?"
“What, of the river?” Wildeyes blinked.
“No, I mean the Thunderpath,” Sharppaw chuckled.
“Oh…,” Wildeyes paused, “that’s Shadowclan’s territory.”
Sharppaw blinked as a hard gaze slid over Wildeye’s eyes and didn’t say anything.
They padded through the Sandy hollow and Patchpelt smiled, “This is where you’ll do most of your training. We mostly work on battle here, but it’s also used to learn hunting tactics. We’ll take you here on your next training lesson.”
The apprentices looked around and saw Dingopaw training with Frozenleg. Moonpaw waved but she didn’t see. She was too busy training.
The next thing they passed was the Great Sycamore. Starpaw stared at the tree, “It’s huge!”
Wildeyes laughed, “Isn’t it? Snakerocks is nearby, so be careful. It’s full of snakes, due to the name.”
Sharppaw grinned, “I could take them on with one paw tied behind my back!”
Wildeyes laughed, “Don’t boast, we’ve lost many cats to those snakes. Don’t mock their deaths by saying you could do better.” She paused when she saw a jet of black through the trees. “We’re here.” She padded through a bush and reached the Thunderpath. Sharppaw and Moonpaw stood at her side. Hazelwing and Patchpelt walked up with Starpaw. "That’s the Thunderpath. Don't go anywhere near it. You'll be killed. Can you see those trees on the other side?"
The apprentices nodded.
“Well there’s another forest on the other side, but it’s swampier.”
Starpaw screwed up her nose, “Shadowclan must have webbed feet to live there.”
Moonpaw snorted, "Am I the only one who smells another clan and sees eyes over there?"
"No I see it too," whispered Sharppaw.
"It’s a Shadowclan patrol," Wildeyes hissed. "Let’s go before they see us!" She darted into the woods. Shadowclan! Stupid fox hearted scoundrels! She thought inside her head.
Sharppaw bounded after Wildeyes, eyes wide, “What’ll we do?”
Hazelwing followed but paused and hissed anxiously, "Wildeyes, we have to get to camp before they strike because this is no normal patrol it is a battle patrol!"
Wildeyes stopped dead in her tracks and spun around, “What?!”
"You really think shadow clan will strike?" said Sharppaw worriedly.
Wildeyes glared into the forest, and then looked at Hazelwing. Her eyes grew dark with rage. "Starpaw, go back to camp and tell Wrathstar. Moonpaw, stay behind me. I won’t let another one of my kits die to those fox hearted cats! Patchpelt, Hazelwing, stay with me. We’ll tear those monsters apart!" She hissed and charged into the trees towards the Thunderpath.
"Please let me fight with you! I fought large group of cats all the time in the Twoleg place," begged Sharppaw.
Wildeyes sighed reluctantly, "Fine, but only fight if Hazelwing, Patchpelt or I look in trouble. Keep an eye on Moonpaw. Starpaw, I said go!" Starpaw ran back to camp. "Let's get revenge for my dead mate and kit!"
Wildeyes planted her paws into the forest floor and faced the Shadowclan cats. There were six, one of them looked familiar but she ignored him, "Did I follow the directions properly or did I come to the wrong group of fox hearts?" She sprang at a grey tom and a brown she-cat. Hazelwing knocked two over and Patchpelt wrestled with another. The sixth came towards the two apprentices, Moonpaw and Sharppaw.
The sixth, a golden tabby, sprang at Moonpaw.
Sharppaw snarled, “Moonpaw!" He pushed the tom off her and grabbed the cat. "You picked the wrong fight;" he hissed and slammed his head into the ground.
"Thanks," said Moonpaw.
Sharppaw nodded, “Wildeyes gave me an order and I must follow it. I’m going to protect you.”
Wildeyes nodded thanks to Sharppaw and deflected an attack from behind and kicked up a dust cloud, shielding the battle with a curtain of dust.
Starpaw leaped at a cat, sinking his teeth into its neck. The cat yowled but managed to wriggle away. Sharppaw looked around; it appeared that the battle was over.
Hazelwing and Patchpelt leapt forward with Wildeyes. The six wounded cats hissed at them. "Return to your clan!" Wildeyes roared, "Leave us in peace!"
The familiar cat laughed, "Don't you want revenge for your fallen kit and mate? I thought you loved them enough to kill me. I guess I was wrong."
The cat next to him hissed, “Don’t taunt her! She could kill you!”
Wildeyes ignored the other cat and gasped, an image clicking in her mind, "You're the cat who killed my kit!" She leapt forward, her eyes red with rage, and slit the cat’s neck with her claw, injuring it.
"He deserves to die," snarled Sharppaw.
Wildeyes traced his neck with her claw, "Maybe I'll kill him, if that’s what he wants." She snarled and bit deep into his throat, ending his life.
The five cats snarled but fled. One called back at them, “You won’t get away with this!”
Wildeyes snorted, “See if I care.”
"Good," snarled Sharppaw, eyes blazing angrily.
Wildeyes hissed and kicked dust over the body. She stuck her nose into the air and trotted a distance away from it before licking the blood off her paws as though it was water.
Sharppaw padded up to Wildeyes. "Why would Shadowclan attack us? We did nothing."
Wildeyes snorted, “Don’t know, and don’t care.”
Sharppaw was shocked; this side of Wildeyes wasn’t like her. It was different. It was more…Wild.
Hazelwing blinked, "Shouldn't we tell Wrathstar?"
Wildeyes looked up, "You and Patchpelt take Moonpaw back to camp. Tell Starpaw that she can ignore the backup patrol, we don’t need it. I'll stay here with Sharppaw in case anyone dares to come back." She resumed licking and the three cats left.
"Well?" said Sharppaw. "Will we attack Shadowclan in retaliation?"
Wildeyes stopped licking and faced her apprentice, "We aren't Shadowclan. We won't attack at random." She snorted, "There are some clans who actually obey the warrior code. Stupid Shadowclan! We'll mention this at the next gathering, two days away."
"Okay," said Sharppaw. Then in a lower voice he added, "Will you get in trouble for killing that mangy cat?"
Wildeyes sighed, "Shadowclan might over react but I wouldn't blame them. I just went against my own rule and that's enough to bring me down."
"Your own rule?" said Sharppaw, puzzled.
"My ‘good before evil’ rule, I guess I was lost in the red rage but I didn't have to...to kill. This make me no better than the cats I've come to hate so much." She hung her head.
Sharppaw snorted. "Well he shouldn't have killed your kit. He only got what was coming to him."
"I guess so, but that still doesn't make it the right thing to do. I'm a cat of great standards and I can tell you are too. We might not run by the same ones but they're all still standards." She bent down and nuzzled him. "Just don’t do anything silly, okay? You’re good at heart, I can see that.”
Good.... she trusts me... he thought. "Alright, I just can't wait to become a warrior! Then everyone will stop disrespecting me and finally respect me! How long does it usually take before a paw becomes a warrior?" he asked.
"It's not a matter of time as much as a matter of skill. Once you have had enough training from your mentor, you have an assessment. If you pass you become a warrior, if you fail...well...you don't." replied Wildeyes
"Great! Does the fact that I already have hunting and fighting experience mean I will become a warrior sooner?" questioned Sharp-paw.
Wildeyes chuckled, "It'll help with your training but it's up to you when your assessment comes. I don’t mean you can decide. I mean it's up to how much you train and how hard you work. Will you work hard to become a great warrior?"
"YES!" said Sharppaw excitedly. In his mind, he was thinking "Excellent... it’s going just excellent..."
Together, they returned to camp.
Later on that night, long after all the warriors had fallen asleep, one apprentice remained awake, only faking sleep.
Sharpaw's eyes slowly widened and he glanced around his den, the other apprentices were fast asleep. He looked at his ‘friends’, Starpaw, Moonpaw and Dingopaw, and smiled. Good, he thought, moonrise and everyone is sound asleep. He slipped silently out of the den and to the dirtplace. He watched the main entrance, making sure the guard wasn’t watching, then leaped onto a tree by dirtplace and clawed his way up. He looked back at the camp and grinned wickedly, everything’s going just as planned. He turned away and moved on, leaping from tree to tree. He didn’t stop until he had reached the border at the twoleg place. He dropped to the ground. "Good thing I practiced tree climbing before I came here," muttered the dark tom. He walked along for a few minutes until he came to an abandoned wooden twoleg nest on the outskirts of the twoleg place. Going inside, he sat down to wait. It was only a few minutes later when two cats strode into the nest, moonlight glinting off of their strange claws. The first cat was a brown and white wily tom with several scars, the second was a fierce gray and white she cat, also scarred. "Greetings, Snarl and Wolf," said Sharppaw, addressing the two cats respectively. They dipped their heads in submission.
"Any news, Sharp?" growled Snarl, the tom. “It’s been a while; you should have made some progress by now.”
"Yes," said Sharppaw. "I have become an apprentice of Thunderclan and my mentor’s the clan deputy. I have gained both the leader’s and deputy’s trust and the clan is starting to trust me more and more.”
"Good," muttered Wolf.
"Have you done as I commanded?" questioned Sharppaw threateningly.
"Yes, Sharp," they said. "We have been training all our cats in the forest and fields, just as you commanded."
"I hope so," said Sharppaw.
"When do we attack?" growled Wolf. “It’s been a while since I’ve seen red on my claws. I’m itching for a fight.”
Sharppaw turned on Wolf, eyes glinting. "We attack on my say. We’ll attack during a Gathering. No sooner no later.” He narrowed his eyes, “Tell the rest of the cats that if they harm ANY kits or queens, I’ll flay them alive." Sharppaw looked down at them, a dangerous tint in his eyes.
Wolf sneered, "Are you becoming soft, Sharp? You sound like a soft Thunderclan kit. Maybe their ways are rubbing off on your brain." She stood up to her full height and it was her turn to look down on Sharppaw. “Maybe you’re no longer fit to be in charge of this operation.”
Sharppaw lunged at Wolf with incredible speed, striking her to the floor and latching his claws into her pelt. "Say that again and you will be the first cat I flay!" he snarled. He leaned close to her and gripped her throat in his jaws. He slowly dug his fangs into her flesh and didn’t stop until she whimpered. He released her and sat up. "Go now, we will meet again in a moon." Wolf scrambled away from him, choking. Snarl made no move to help her. He just shoved her ahead of him and bagan to pad out of the twoleg nest.
Snarl turned back and looked Sharppaw. Their eyes locked and he said quietly, "Don't forget your father and what they did to him. Those Thunderclan cats deserve nothing but death; you should show them no mercy.”
"I know!" snapped Sharppaw. “Now leave before I put you in a position far worse than Wolf’s!”
Snarl dipped his head and followed Wolf. Sharppaw watched them leave, then he hurried back to camp the way he came and slipped back unnoticed. He climbed up the tree outside camp and carefully lowered himself in. He quickly ran to his nest and curled up, making sure the others didn’t see him. He sighed and was about to go to sleep when he saw Dingopaw move in her nest. He froze in a panic, quickly thinking of an excuse for being awake.
Dingopaw woke up and yawned sleepily. She looked over at Sharppaw and muttered, "Sharppaw? Why aren't you asleep?"
"Oh hey, Dingopaw,” he said in a low whisper so he didn’t wake the others, “I was just thinking about Shadowclan and why they seem to ignore the warrior’s code. Go back to sleep.”
"Oh... OK," She mumbled and fell back asleep.
He sighed and closed his eyes, falling into a long waited sleep, this time for real.
The next morning....
Sharppaw got out of his nest and gave a big stretch. He yawned, nudging Dingopaw, and said, "C'mon, let’s ask our mentors if we can go hunting."
"Oh yeah!" smiled Dingopaw, stretching.
Sharppaw padded out of the apprentice den and looked around, searching for Wildeyes. He spotted her talking to Starpaw. "Hey, Wildeyes, can Dingopaw and I go hunting?" he asked.
Wildeyes looked up and nodded, "Okay, it'll be good practice. I'll be keeping an eye on you though. I'll be hidden, so you won't see me." She said goodbye to Starpaw and padded out of camp, disappearing into the bushes. "It's not an assessment!" she yelled before Dingopaw could get excited.
"Yes! Let’s hunt by sunningrocks!" said Sharppaw, bounding away.
Wildeyes climbed up a tree and peered through the leaves as the two apprentices left the camp.
While Sharppaw approached sunningrocks, he slowed down, sniffing. He caught sight of a hole in the ground, covered with the scent of vole. He crouched behind a dark colored rock, his pelt blending in. He narrowed his eyes to slits and kept his eyes on the hole. He waited for what seemed like an age before a curious vole popped out of its hole and began tentatively making its way towards the invisible hunter.
Sharppaw slowly kept closer, careful to stay unseen and not to make a sound. Once it was right in front of Sharppaw, it realized the danger it was in, but it was too late. Sharppaw lashed out and snagged the vole, pinning it to the ground and killing it. Then he sat up triumphantly.
Wildeyes smiled, he'd used one of her classics! Sharppaw moved a short distance away and caught one more vole in the same method. Wildeyes crept onto a different branch to get a better view, careful not to stir a single leaf.
Sharppaw wondered if Wildeyes was watching. I hope so, he thought to himself. He padded into the forest and began sniffing the air. The he spotted a fat rabbit and smiled. I know just what to do, he thought. Slipping carefully past the rabbit, he sniffed around until he found its hole. Then he crouched in the bushes nearby and let out and earsplitting yowl. The rabbit immediately took off for its warren. It never knew what hit it and Sharppaw sat up, grinning.
In another part of the forest, Dingopaw silently headed towards the stream. When she got there, she saw a fat water vole lying on the bank, soaking up the sun like the elders would at sunningrocks. She quietly dropped into a hunting crouch and slowly moved towards her prey.
Sharppaw padded back to the stream and watched Dingopaw with interest. He had placed both his voles and his rabbit under a holly bush to keep it safe. He didn’t want anyone stealing his prey!
Springing forwards, Dingopaw trapped the vole, killing it quickly. She sat up and grinned goofily. It was an easy catch, but it was her first one. She sighed, wishing her mentor had been here to see it. He would have been so proud. He had spent the whole of yesterday training her hunting skills while the others had gone on a tour, she felt bad that he hadn’t seen her catch.
She shrugged it off, “Oh well, Wildeyes is watching. She can tell him all about it.” She picked up her water vole and sprang away.
Nodding to himself, Sharppaw went to catch more prey. He spent a lot of time sniffing around before he finally spotted a squirrel as it slipped up a tree. He climbed the other side of the tree nearest the squirrel, and then he leaped into a tree behind it and yowled. The squirrel raced up the first tree and Sharppaw leaped into the same tree. The squirrel tried to turn around but it was too late. Sharppaw grabbed it and killed it with a single bite. Picking up his prey, he buried it with the rest of his prey. One more prey, he thought to himself, then I’ll find Dingopaw and we can get back to camp. He looked at the sky, “It’s almost sunhigh. It’s been a long day.” He grinned, “I can only imagine the praise Wildeyes will give me.”
Wildeyes chuckled, the cheeky ‘paw! She bounced down from the tree she was sitting in and landed silently in the bushes. She smiled, “At least he’s decided to call it a day. My paws were starting to ache!” She laughed; gad to be far enough away to talk to herself. “I’ll head back to camp and when they get back…” She put on an evil grin, “…I’ll pretend I spent the whole day inside.” She laughed evilly, “The look on their faces will be priceless!” She ran a short distance, exited about her plan and eager to tell Frozenleg.
She padded out across a clearing, glad to be out in the open without fear of being seen, and walked through a low bush. “I’ll just take this short cut…” She came out in another clearing and blinked, surprised. “That’s funny, this should take me right back to camp. Did I take a wrong turn?” She blinked at the clearing and shrugged, “I’ll take a look around.” She walked on and was about to shoot up another tree when her paws fell into nothingness and she tumbled into darkness. The last thing she saw before everything went black was the sticks, leaves and dirt around her, falling. She let out an ear splitting yowl, then it was cut short as she hit the ground and the light far above was shut out.