Mysterious kit~A ThunderClan fanfic!

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  • [align=center]Mysterious Kit~The Book!
    Note: this is a remake, due to a lack of space. Original is here.
    http://warriorcatsrpg.com/index.php?topic=726693.0;topicseen


    Yes, to all of you that were awesome enough to be part of the thread known as "Mysterious kit" Thread, I am writing a book! First, I must get a couple things out of the way. One. MANY MANY MANY (There should be more many's, but if i put that many, there would be no room for the book. XD) thanks to Guardianstar, who loyally never ever stopped RPing with me. All, thanks to Kitty1, Who also RPed with me, near the end. Also, thanks to all the people who RPed in the thread, I wouldn't be able to write this if it weren't for you.
    the other thing is that This book may be updated roughly every couple of days. Feel free to comment, or constructively criticize. With that said, lets begin!


    WAIT! I forgot to mention, this takes place in an alternate Thunderclan. AND, It will be a vastly different style and somewhat different genre than my first book, because its a RP based book. The VERY last thing. THANK THANK THANK YOU Guardianstar, for being my editor. Your writing is absolutely epic!


    OK, NOW we can begin. :)







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  • [spoiler=Chapter 10~Four]The sickening stench of blood hit Sharppaw full on, along with the mysterious buzzing sound. He stumbled towards it, feeling his gut twist in fear of the worst. He swallowed hard and pushed through the final layer of brush that stood between him and whatever the mysterious sound was. When he got through, it took his eyes a moment to adjust. Nothing could have prepared him for the horrifying scene before him.


    There, in the middle of a clearing, lay Wrathstar’s unmoving body. Only blood surrounded him, staining the forest floor with crimson red. A long gash ran from his neck to his tail, scoring across her underbelly. Blood… Oh no no…no… feeling nauseous, he forced himself to lower his gaze to Wrathstar’s bloody paws. His claws were missing. Claw… Sharppaw gasped in horror and prayed that he was wrong or just seeing things. He took a terrified step closer, to get a better look. That’s when he saw the cat bone, trapped under Wrathstar’s forepaw. The bone had been picked clean. Bone… he thought with horror, shaking with fear. He averted his eyes and stole a glance at Wrathstar’s chest. Two diagonal slashes were scored across it, forming an X-like scar. "Scar..." he whispered to himself, terrified out of his wits. He knew the signs all too well: blood, bone, claw and scar.


    Sheer terror gripped Sharppaw’s heart and he ran out of the clearing, not seeing where he was running. "I have to get away! They're coming! I must tell the Clan! I must tell Wildeyes!" He never saw his mentor until he ran full tilt into her.


    Wildeyes was still staring at Wrathstar's body, shaking from the horror. "H-he's...d-dead. Wrathstar's...dead." She backed away, shaking her head. "Sharppaw, it was BloodClan, it has to be! No warrior would kill like this, not even ShadowClan would do something like...like this." She shook her head and turned away. She bolted, running as fast as she could, her heart pounding like a thousand clashes of thunder. She knew that lightning hadn’t quite struck yet. "Wrathstar's dead!" she screamed.


    "It's not just BloodClan," Sharppaw muttered, trembling with fear.


    Wildeyes faltered in her run, causing her to trip over a stone and do a somersault in midair. She landed on her paws and spun around. "What do you mean?!" she asked shakily. "Who else could there be? It's bad enough while it's just BloodClan on its own! Are there more?"


    "The four Twoleg place Clans," murmured Sharppaw, shaking.


    Wildeyes blinked, "'The four Twoleg place Clans?' What do you mean? There's more than just one rogue Clan?! You've got to be kidding me!"


    Sharppaw sighed, still trembling. "It's a long story. It began several moons ago, when I was just a kit, not long after my father's death. My three highest ranking cats disappeared. Their names were Bone, Scar and Claw. Later on, I heard that three new Clans of rogues had been formed: BoneClan, ScarClan and ClawClan. In order to distinguish themselves from BloodClan, they each did something horrific to their victims. BoneClan would take a bone from their victim and leave another in its place, ScarClan would put and X-like scar on their victims and ClawClan would steal and wear the claws of their victims. BloodClan, taking up the pattern, joined this group of marks and would paint their victims and the area around the body with blood. But none of the Clan cats ever go near each other and they never EVER chose the same victim. All those marks on one body can only mean one thing: that the four Clans have joined as one. The only reason they'd ever do something like that would be if they all shared a common goal. Now, all these cats were greatly loyal to my father, Scourge, and all wanted revenge. Therefor, the only common goal all the Clans share is their desire to destroy the forest and the Clans within." Sharppaw sat back, trembling more than ever. "What are we going to do Wildeyes? There are so many rogues in each Clan..." Sharppaw's eyes were full of fear.


    Wildeyes was quiet for a time. When she finally came round, she stood firm and locked eyes with Sharppaw. "Four Clans of the forest against four Clans of death, LionClan against those rogue cats." She sighed, "We've lost our leader. Now we need a new one." She closed her eyes, thinking hard. "We need to take Wrathstar's body back to camp so we can sit vigil for him and say goodbye to his spirit before he goes to StarClan. Then I'll go to the Highstones with Shadowfall to get my nine lives. After that, you'll know me only as Wildstar," she looked into Sharppaw's eyes and her eyes brightened ever so slightly in that depressing place, "leader of ThunderClan."


    Wildeyes turned and walked back to Wrathstar's body. She ignored the blood and picked up her leader’s body. She looked over her shoulder at Sharppaw. "Help me carry him back to camp." Her eyes were wet with tears, but Sharppaw knew she was crying out of weakness, she was crying out of sorrow. She'd have to have a heart of ice not to cry.



    Sharppaw nodded and walked over to his mentor. They carried Wrathstar’s body back to camp in heavy silence.


    ***


    Wildeyes lay Wrathstar's body on the ground in the center of the camp. Cats around were letting out yowls of sorrow and horror. "Who did this?!" Someone yelled. "Was it ShadowClan?"


    Shadowfall came out of her den with Starpaw and they set to work cleaning the blood from Wrathstar’s fur. "Get me some wet moss, Starpaw. We want Wrathstar’s body to be clean for his ceremony."


    Starpaw nodded and ran back to the den. Wildeyes sighed and looked up at the sky. She could see the stars beginning to come out as night set in. She climbed up to the Highrock and called out, "Let us all sit vigil for our great leader before the eyes of StarClan and bit her farewell before h

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  • Awesome! I just finished the first chapter, 'Innocence', and I'm hooked! However, the only thing I would suggest is a prologue; it could indicate that a prophecy might happen, or it could show a part of the battle.