Character Name: Icekit/Icepaw/Icesplinter
Character Age: 19 moons
Gender: Tom
Alliance: RiverClan
Rank: Warrior
Appearance (6 or more sentences): Pale gray tabby tom with white patches on his chest, paws and tail-tip. He has ice-blue eyes that are such a pale blue that they seem almost white. He has a scar that runs across his left hind leg that makes him walk with a bit of a limp. His plumed tail is long and silky and he often uses it to confuse his enemies in a fight. He has one black spot over his left eye, giving him a rather comical appearance that many she-cats find quite cute. His overall appearance is quite handsome and he often finds she-cats fawning over him and he tries not to break their hearts as he gently tells them he isn't interested.
Personality (6 or more sentences--these sentences form their own section and do NOT count towards the 4 groups below. Those are additional requirements): Icesplinter is a sweet, caring tom who loves kits and is passionately devoted to his clan. He would make the perfect mate for any she-cat one day but he himself is still looking for the right she-cat. Whenever he finds out that a she-cat is in love with him, he tries to gently tell them that he isn't interested in them. He is a gentle tom but a fierce cat to go against in battle and he will always stand up for what's right. Sometimes he finds it hard not to judge others but he does his best to give everyone at least one chance, sometimes giving them more chances then they deserve. He is loyally devoted to his clan and would defend it to the death but he sometimes wonders whether the perfect she-cat for him is in his own clan. Overall he is just a bit sweetie.
---Likes (at least 3): Icesplinter loves being able to be on his own to fish, hunt, train or just think. He also likes helping out the queens by playing with their kits. He also loves swimming.
--- Dislikes (at least 3): Icesplinter hates she-cats who try to impress him without really liking him, cats who oppose his clan. He has an intense fear of monsters after his brother got hit by one on the Thunderpath.
---Strengths (No MORE than 5): Icesplinter is a charismatic cat and is really good at persuading cats to help him or his clan, a brilliant fighter and a strong swimmer.
---Weaknesses (At least 3): Icesplinter isn't a very good hunter and sometimes he stumbles over his words around she-cats. He has a deathly fear of the Thunderpath after his brother was killed by a monster and he hates monsters.
History (8 or more sentences): Icekit was always the most popular kit while his brother, Burningkit, was pushed aside due to his twisted paw, kinked tail, blind eyes and ugly mashed in face. Icekit never questioned his parents adoration of him but he always loved it, drinking up the praise and attention. When Icekit became Icepaw, his brother was held back and he didn't care at all. Three moons later Burningkit was finally made an apprentice and Icepaw would either spend his time ignoring or tormenting his brother along with the other apprentices. When his father died a moon later, Icepaw was stricken and refused to speak for nearly two moons, finally growing closer to his brother. He began to defend Burningpaw instead of tease or torment him and it seemed as though everything would be okay. But life is cruel and once more, disaster struck just as Icepaw was about to become a warrior when Burningpaw was hit by a monster on the Thunderpath. Icepaw grieved for three more moons, staying silent nearly the entire time until he became a warrior and was named Icesplinter. The young tom began to hate the attention that was bestowed upon him, wishing he had spent less time trying to be popular and more time protecting his brother. StarClan didn't care as they were punishing Icesplinter for his pride and a few moons later, they took his mother from him when greencough struck the clans. Icesplinter struggles to get close to a she-cat for the reason that he fears if he takes a mate he will one day loose her and their potential kits as well.
Roleplay Sample (Required for first advanced bio): “Hey look at this!” Icepaw looked up sharply to see Burningpaw standing in the middle of the Thunderpath, sniffing curiously at a bit of strange fluffy material. A low rumble filled the air and Icepaw's eyes widened, “BURNINGPAW GET OUT OF THERE!” he yowled but it was too late. A monster roared around the bend of the thunderpath and Icepaw clenched his eyes shut, flattening his ears, but he still heard the sickening 'thump' as the monster hit his brother. Then there was silence and he opened his eyes to see the prone mound of gray fur that was his brother. “Burningpaw!” he yowled, running out onto the thunderpath and nudging his littermate with his paw. Burningpaw didn't move. “No, no, no!” Icepaw wailed, staring to the heavens, “StarClan please no!” But all the wailing in the world wouldn't change the fact that Burningpaw was dead.
Comments (optional): My second advanced bio :)