Help! Im alive! can anyone change me before its too late? medicine she cats

"Who do you think you are? I'm innocent!" He looked up, "starclans here..... zigclaw, your Back"

" I don't think they *cough* want me here "
He glanced at the mysterious clan and sighed. Suddenly he remembered that thunder clan killed his whole family. " what clan is this " He said with a flick of his tail.

He felt light headed, Brady growled weakly.

"Thank you"he said. 'As long as its not thunderclan' he thought. He wanted revenge.... I know, he thought, Ill kill the leader.

Bye bye bramblestar.

Brady woke from a long nap. His ribs were showing." Im starving" he meowed silently to him self. As he limped out of the den, eyes coming from all directions stared. He walked towrds the fresh kill pile and looked at the leader. She/he nodded in approvel. He took a rabbit and a squirrel. Brady trotted over to kitten, dropped them, and leaned over to nudge the fresh kill next to her paws.

"Whatever you say ;)" Brady bowed his head to eat.

Revenge, Brady thought, revenge, I must have it. "Are my wounds healed enough for a walk?"
'This wont be bad, thunderclan is just around the corner. Brady licked his shoulder and winced, maybe this was a bad idea.

"How did you...... now I'm scared" Brady stared into the mysterious shecat's eyes. Did starclan tell her what he was thinking. Brady looked at his paws in shame, thunderclans bloodlust was no match for him. It wasn't bramblestars fault, it was the warriors fault. He will just have to tell them. "I need to tell them something, they think I killed the deputy. They got revenge by killing my family, behind bramblestars back.... the new deputy has an obsession for blood, the whole reason that I was framed is that....." He leaned over and made a long whimpering noise

* prrrrrrrrr * "thanks"

When they were halfway there, a peircing bite made Brady yelp. A snake bit his ankle. "Oh no, nonono." He began to lean toward "Kit-"he sneered, the poison got to his head " bye bye......KITTEN!" He began to droop blood. He rubbed his paw on his mouth and made it look like he just committed a murder
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(Drool,sorry)
this is why I picked that title

Brady looked at kitten and hissed. She saw the snake slither with blood on its face. It was a frightining sight. Brady opened his mouth and coughed."grrrrrrrr, kitten." He ran to kitten, teeth bared.