New apprentice- Sneezepaw thread 2

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    OOC: sure you can. I dont though, coz I have the patience of a flea. xD
    'IC: "Usually I tickle him to wake him up," Screechpaw mewed, trotting over.
    "Or I drop a rabbit infront of him. It's his favourite food." Duskpaw added.
    Sneezepaw, if he were concious, would have pricked his ears in alarm and in joy. He HATED being tickled, but he LOVED rabbit. He hoped he would wake before anycat tried tickling, so he could squirm away.

    Brushtail nodded and padded out to get a rabbit. He plonked it in front of Sneezepaw.

    Sneezepaw smelt the rabbit, and his head spun with hunger. His belly rumbled. He managed to open his mouth with a squeal, and move his paw, but he fell straight back to unconciousness.
    "Did you see that?!" Duskpaw exclaimed.

    "Yes!" said Brushtail excitedly. He nudged the rabbit closer, hoping for a better result.

    Waterlily grabbed a small cup thing and got some water. she placed it down and mewed," Have you ever tried splashing water on him? That wakes almost everycat up." She saw the rabbit and her belly rumbled. " I'll be right back, I'm going to get some mice." She grabbed two mice and ate them quickly. She ran back up and watched him carefully. Meanwhile, Mistpaw was watching Wintertail and making sure she didn't get too hot or cold. "Come on sis wake up,,," She whispered. Mistpaw and Wintertail were sisters but not in the same litter. Wintertail didn't know they were sisters. Not yet anyway.


    OOC; I have some patience but I dont have usuable laptop right now. But otner then that i have a patience of a fles too, :P

    OOC: hahaha xD
    'IC: Sneezepaw tried with all his might to wake his body up, but it wasn't working. He stayed in a coma, helpless. He yowled in his head, so angry that he suddenly snapped his eyes open and jumped up, bristling, his tiny claws sinking into the ground. Then he realised that he was awake, and he mewled joyfully.

    part 1
    Mistpaw jumped as the apprentice woke up and mewed. "Hey your awake! Brushtail and the others are gonna be happy! They've been soooo worried about you." She looked over his scratched and injuries to make sure he wasn't bleeding anyway. All his cuts seem to be healing. "I think Brushtail went outside to get something to eat with the others. I was supposed to keep an eye on you until you woke up."
    Wintertail was in a forest. It looked similiar to the small forest they hunt in. A cat appeared to her. "Who are you?" The cat said nothing and motioned her to follow. She followed the shining cat and led to a lost kit. It was mewling for help. It's eyes hardly open and it barely walking. Out of nowhere a white cat, identical to wintertail, snatched it up and brought it back down into a badger den. It was abandoned of course, but it was still dangerous. Then Wintertail saw it! She saw that cat in a dream but the cat was in danger. She looked at the cat spirit and notice a resemblance. "T-That cats you?" the spirit nodded. A tear fell form her face. Those are her kits! I have to tell the others! Wake up! No use she could still see the cat spirit and the kits. It kept playing like a movie, then she heard a screech. A fox came out of the bushes and attacked the mother while she was hunting. Wintertail noticed that she had no claws. The twolegs must of gotten her declawed. The fox slashed her and she fell to the ground on her back.

    part 2
    The fox leaped to the mothers belly and ripped it open. It started to eat the mothers inside. Wintertail almost started to vomit. What happened next frightend Wintertail the most. four of the five kits wondered out looking for their mother. "No I have to stop it! Let me stop it!" Wintertail shrieked. The fox attacked one of the kits. It screaled as loud as it could for a second and laid limp in the fox's jaws. The other three kits started to whine louder and then two of them quitened as the fox bit both of them at once. The last kit stumbled apon it mother. It mewed helplessly for its mother. Then Wintertail saw it. The slightest blink. The mother was still alive! Suffering from the blood spewing out of her and sitting there watching her kits die. Wintertail wanted to jump in and save but all she could do is scream. The fox finished the three other kits. He heard the other and saw it mewling by its mother,licking her face for her to get up. Wintertail close her eyes. All she heard was the whine of a kit and then silence. She opened her eyes and and saw inside the badger hut. Inside was one last kit.

    The kit stayed inside the deepest part of the pit. The fox went by the whole but smelled badger instead of cat. He went out and started to finish its gruesome meal. Then she heard Brushtail and Sneezepaw and she heard hershelf yowl. The vision disappeared. wintertail was crying. No not crying, bawling. Tears rushed down her face like a river. the spiirit cat made wintertail look at her. she mewed very gently," Go get him." She touched Wintertail very gently on the forehead with her tail. Eintertail woke up. She saw Mistpaw and Sneezepaw chatting. She yowled as loud as she could. "SOMECAT HELP ME!! I HAVE TO SAVE HIM! I HAVE TO SAVE HIM!! HE'S GOING TO DIE IF WE DONT FIND HIM!! LET ME OUT OF HERE!" Tears flowed her eyes and looked at Mistpaw," GO GET EVERYONE NOW!!" Mistpaw ran out screeching and howling for everyone to come.

    OOC: Hey! Look at my avatar! It's Windwistle and Sneezepaw owo
    'IC: Sneezepaw crouched down with his ears pinned back to his head. It seemed like everycat was panicking and yowling, and it was so noisy. His tiny sensetive ears pounded and his heart was in his throat, beating so hard and so fast he was sure every other cat could hear it. He began to back away, the whites of his kitten-blue eyes that had not yet got their own colour showing. He squealed when he reached the back of the den, and began scratching at the wall with his tiny claws, wanting to escape all the noise. He could hardly breathe; he began to have a panic attack.


    Screechpaw and Duskpaw pricked their ears up and ran to Wintertail. "Calm," murmured Screechpaw, brushing his cheek on hers and reaching out one gray paw to stroke her flank. "Calm down. What's happened?"
    Duskpaw sat down, his green eyes sparkling with worry.


    Windwistle ran out, and joined the others. "What's wrong?" The quiet warrior puffed. He saw Wintertail and pressed against her.

    Brushtail rushed inside and mewed a greeting at Sneezepaw. He turned his attention to Wintertail and mewed, "What's wrong? Did something happen?!"

    Sneezepaw looked for somewhere to hide in desperation. He found a small space big enough for only him to squeeze through. He scrambled in and closed his eyes, clamping his tiny paws over his ears, head spinning, heart pounding.

    Brushtail caught sight of his apprentice and went over. He crouched and nuzzled the cat mewling, "Everyone was really worried about you."

    Wintertail was breathinf deeply.," The fox...The fox ate a mother... She had 5 cats living in a badger den...You have to go find it....It's going to die...It's going to die..." Wintertail try to get up. Waterlily slammed Wintertail down." You ARE NOT getting up! That paw is in no condition! You'll be lucky to have a paw right now! I'll talk to the leader and have a bunch of cats look. Other than that you stay here!"
    "FINE! The kit is in a badger set but it smeels like a badger still. Please becareful and don't let him die."
    Wintertail was ascting like she was its mother. The spirit cat chose her to find him so maybe she has to take care of him.

    Sneezepaw began to calm down at the sound of his mentor's voice. Everything was going quiet now, and he could breathe easier. He crawled anxiously out of his hiding place and hid behind Brushtail's forelegs, until he saw Windwistle. He scampered up to his father who licked him gently.
    "I'll look for the kit if you want," He said when he looked up again. "Can somecat come with me? I think this is a job for two." As soon as Duskpaw and Screechpaw opened their mouths, he shook his head. "Not you two. You are both too young and too small. If the fox is still around it would eat you in one gulp."
    The apprentices exchanged horrified glances as they clamped their mouths shut.
    "I thought so," Windwistle dipped his head at them. "You can look after Sneezepaw for me though," he added kindly.
    The two eight moon olds looked at eachother exitedly.
    Windwistle turned his blue gaze back on Wintertail. "What cat should come with me?" He asked gently.

    Brushtail came forward and sat down, watching everyone with interest.

    OOC: No the vision was from the past. sneezepaw already killed the fox but the kits mother was showing me she wasnt the foxes only meal.


    IC: Wintertail shook her head,"Let the apprentices go the more the merrier. The fox was is dead. The mother cat showed me a part of the past. Before we got to the fox it ate four kits and their mother. I can watch Sneezepaw unless he wants to go. I just want everycat avaible. I feel as if the mother asked me, told me to take care of her young. I need to find that kit HAVE to find that kit." Waterlily was already giving Sneezepaw a small check up. "His eyes are normal and his injuries are good. He should be fine as long as he dont get stuck in a thorn bush."

    Windwistle shook his head. "Sneezepaw has just come out of a coma and recovered from a panic attack straight after. I won't allow him to go. You may he the medicine cat but I am his father." His blue eyes were stubborn, but they softened as he bent to his son's tiny height. "Sneezepaw, I am going to go away for a while. I'll be back soon, and Screechpaw and Duskpaw are coming with me. You can stay here with Wintertail, and look after her. Make sure her paw gets all better, okay? Help Waterlily and Mistpaw. Do you understand?"
    Sneezepaw blinked, and then nodded. He tumbled over to Wintertail and began sniffing her paw. Windwistle chuckled.
    Duskpaw and Screechpaw shot up. "Great! Let's go now!" Duskpaw exclaimed, running to the camp entrance.
    Screechpaw sighed, amusement glittering in his yellow eyes as he followed his brother. Windwistle dipped his head to Wintertail. "We'll find the kit. I promise," He meowed sincerily. "Bye, Waterlily, Mistpaw. Bye bye Sneezepaw. You be good!" He turned and followed the younger cats out.
    Sneezepaw put his head to one side. Where was daddy going?

    Wintertail watched Sneezepaw follow them. Then he came back over and started to look at her paw. "So Sneezepaw. How was it like being in a coma?" She ocvered her mouth with her tail knowing that the question was rude to ask. Mistpaw came over and changed the old, bloody badages and replaced them with new ones. she saw the was her paw was sewed up. I've seen a twoleg kit like that. she thought and remebered being in a windowseel one night. The twoleg cut his hand on a sharp thing and the big twolegs ran out the door with him. The came back and he had these weird black wires coming out of his hand(Sticthes).