Nightwing began to cross the rocks. Riverkit mewed as his hind legs touched the cold water below.
Nightkit was on the other side of the river, laying down. His hind paw was caught under a fallen tree. "Help!", he mewled
Ooc: gotta go. Bye! 
Vixenpaw leaped onto the next rock, careful to keep a firm grasp on Shimmerkit's scruff. Please StarClan, let me make the next rock. Vixenpaw prayed as she realized this was going to be the farthest jump she would have to make.
OOC: bye
Vixenpaw dashed across the last of the stones, panting with effort. She felt the heat of the flames singeing her pelt.
"Thank you, Aspenstar." His hind paw was crushed. Mouse dung!
Vixenpaw placed Shimmerkit on the ground for a moment to stretch her jaws. "Aspenstar, where do I head from here?" she called across the river.
Nightkit hopped across the rocks. He slipped but caught himself. When he landed on the other side, he stared into Shimmerkit's face.
Nightwing jumped to the other side of the river. She panted with the effort, and she almost dropped Riverkit. "Someone help me carry him!" she meowed.
Nightkit padded over to Nightwing. "I'll help you."
OOC: can Nightkit turn into an apprentice after we leave the fire?
Jayflight took Riverkit, his son, gently.
Spottedpaw crossed, carrying Crystalkit.
Echostorm and her kits crossed safely.
She licked Jayflight's head gently before dashing off with the rest of the clan.
Nightkit said, "Never mind." He lay on the ground. Everyone hates me. Why?
All of my characters were with the clan, safely over the river.
Ooc: Oh.
Nightwing saw Nightkit. "Come on! We have to go!"
Nightkit got up, and solemnly walked with the clan.
"What's wrong?" she asked the little kit.
"Everyone hates me and my parents left me. I wish my life was normal."