Re: Another Romantic Story [Private After First Post]

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    shadowheart walking in the woods as a cat ran right on top of her a said " who are you and what are you doing out in the woods of the river clan shadowheart said "well to find food and i am a kit dose that answers it got up and stared walk back to here clan with no food the kit was a tom ran up with shadowheart and said " my name is nightcalw i'm kit too so shadowheart look at him and night claw look at her and nightclaw said "well here some food shadowheart look at him and said " thank you and simle and ran away

    so when shadowheart went to her clan and sat the food down she told her mom that she met a kit that she like her mom said who "shjadowheart said a river clan cat her mom said what a river clan cat NOOOOOOOOO !

    Eheheh hi Natalie ^w^
    At least I think it's you, right?
    Ugh I'm so tired I can't think straight >.< :-X

    (I got the thread invite........Why is it in Vampire Roleplay if its cats? XD By the way,What exactly do you want me to RP? or who or whatever......And try to fix your typing,its hard to understand what is speech and what isnt because you dont put the quotation marks n the right places or whatever...XD)

    ZombieLand wrote:


    (I got the thread invite........Why is it in Vampire Roleplay if its cats? XD By the way,What exactly do you want me to RP? or who or whatever......And try to fix your typing,its hard to understand what is speech and what isnt because you dont put the quotation marks n the right places or whatever...XD)


    oh ok :-[ :-[ :-[

    ♥shadowheart♥ wrote:


    so when shadowheart went to her clan and sat the food down she told her mom that she met a kit that she like her mom said who "shadowheart said a river clan cat her mom said what a river clan cat NOOOOOOOOO !


    mom calm down he's nice like a cerry and he gave me food you sould say thank you to him with out him i wont have food right now mom says "ok i will ok " shadowheart say "thank you , thank you , thank you so much ".

    ooc: nvm so who do you have rping the riverclan kit or are you rping him yourself?




    ic: the wind blew(nvm i hate it when people post this sometimes) a kit watched the 3 frm a distance

    moondarkness wrote:


    ooc: nvm so who do you have rping the riverclan kit or are you rping him yourself?




    ic: the wind blew(nvm i hate it when people post this sometimes) a kit watched the 3 frm a distance


    he just in my story he was made up ok?!

    ♥shadowheart♥ wrote:


    XxangelclawxX here hey zombieland can you tell me why are you Confusd?
    it simple oushed

    Oushed? What does that mean? Im confused because 1. I cant understand the speech,You need to remember to put quotation marks before and after speech,2. Its in a Vampire roleplay and its Cats,3. you said:

    ♥shadowheart♥ wrote:



    what do you mean the cat in my story

    when you should perfectly know what moondarkness meant

    *flails arms* It's A-l-e-x-i-s!!!
    Geez ._.
    But, you fail, Amber.
    For not spelling my name correctly >:3


    Oh, and Natalie?
    Would you like some roleplaying tips from a NINJA SLAYAH?!
    I have posted more than 20,000 times here, anyway ;)


    Okay, first things first....


    You RP likez this:


    Shadowheart walked up to her mother. "Hello," she mewed.


    Not like this:


    shadowheart walks up to her mom hello" she said



    It's always past tense, not present.


    Two, use quotation marks (" ") around speaking, like this:


    "Gotcha!" Shadowheart squealed as she trapped a mouse between her paws.



    Three: Don't try to RP the story, otherwise the people invited would be useless in this situation. Explain what'cha need and what cats you need to RP.


    And four: Wrong forum to RP in. This shouldn't be in the Vampire Roleplay section if there is no vampire or Twilight-related-stuff(XD) in it. You should make a similar thread to this one in the Roleplay/Resources thread.



    Sorry if you don't understand ;)