i n e e d e d y o u } fraggy's character gallery

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Don't know what's going on
Don't know what went wrong
Feels like a hundred years I
Still can't believe you're gone
So I'll stay up all night
With these bloodshot eyes
While these walls surround me with the story of our life

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About the Gemstone Black Onyx
Meaning- "The Stone of Self Mastery and Self Control"
Color- Black
Zodiac- Capricorn
Energies- Protection, Healing
Planet- Saturn
Birthstone- July
Click to go to the site where this info can be found~

Kits Name: Onyxkit ➪ Onyxpaw ➪ Onyxclaw

Kits Gender: Male

Kits Appearance:
Ah, Onyxkit? Well the handsome young tom is a cinnamon w/white tabby. He is short-haired, but his middle area is a bit poofed up and thick. His underside is white, along with all his paws and tip of his tail. The base-color of his pelt is a cinnamon-brown and his tabby markings are a darker cinnamon hue. His stripes start at his head and end just before the tip of his tail. He has long, slim legs that end in rather large paws and sharp, white claws. He has a broad muzzle and shoulders which add to his masculine appearance. He has long white whiskers penetrating from both his muzzle and where his brow would be, if he had one. Just under his 'brow-whiskers' are his eyes, quite beautiful yellow orbs. It appears that Starclan happened to give this kit the sun for his eyes.

Kits Personality:
Onyxkit is so social, it's scary. He is always gloating and running his mouth, it goes on nonstop. He will literally follow a cat if they walk away while he is talking, he just can't shut up. He likes to show-off a lot and usually tries to prove to his mother and father that he would make a great leader, which he believes that is his 'destiny'. He's not power-hungry, as some may put it, he just wants to be like his mother and father as much as possible. Despite his gloating and showing-off lifestyle he is a very kind and generous cat, usually offering to help with things and trying to earn the respect he deserves. He loves his family and friends and would do anything for them, anything. He doesn't mind speaking his opinion, which this part can get him into trouble. Although he tries, he just can't hold his tongue.

He likes, no scratch that, loves attention. He likes to have all eyes on him and to be the main cat in the group. He tries to be a leader, not a follower, which he would make a great leader if he'd learn to knock off his gloating and showing-off, but he feels the need to prove himself, as stated before. He likes to converse, work with others, and handle intruders. He likes to have a good conversation, sometimes, that involves another cat and not just himself running his mouth. He likes to state his opinions and hear another's, which makes him rather modest. He likes to work together and believes two heads are better than one and the term 'there's no 'I' in 'team''. He likes to be the cat who calls the shots when it comes to intruder, from kicking the intruder off their land to bringing them back to his mother and father for the final decision. All in all, big personalities come in small packages.

Likes ;;
+The Water
+Being the center of attention
+Being complimented
+Daytime{More play-time!}

Dislikes ;;
-Competition
-Being told 'no'
-Being bossed around

Strengths ;;
+ Agile
+ Intelligent
+ Good swimmer

Weaknesses ;;
- Acts before thinking most of the time
- Not too good at hunting
- His troublesome ways
- His mouth {If he says the wrong thing}

Plot Ideas [Must have 1!]:
Basically, I was thinking since my other character who found herself rather close to Bearstar, Grimpaw, recently died from her wounds from an intruder{I had no muse for her and I was thinking of killing her off anyways}. I was thinking maybe Onyxkit/paw/claw could be a reincarnation of Grimpaw, but like a better version of herself. Basically here's the plot line:

Onyxkit is born not any ordinary kit but to the leader and deputy of Riverclan. He thinks he is purrfect{excuse cat humor}, and had the most extravagant life. At the age of an apprentice he is on a solo-patrol when he meets a strange cat, a thunderclanner, the cat says that she had wandered onto the territory and was looking for her sister, Grimpaw. Onyxpaw, being born after her death, had no idea who the cat was. He tells her to get out and she peacefully leaves and that night while lying down he has a flashback of Grimpaw's memories{Bought reincarnation with memories and stuff}. It takes place when Grimpaw, at the time 6 moons, is being teased by her siblings and runs off. It shows where she runs away and hops across the river on some stepping stones and wanders into Riverclan territory while Bloodclan and Riverclan rage in war. She had heard of the war, but did not know much about the territory yet so she continued on, not caring. It gets to the part where Bearstar grabs her and brings her to safety, then the dream ends.

He wakes up the next morning, not remembering it. And every night he has a new dream, once he is a warrior the dreams start cycling through again and he goes on a search to find out who Grimpaw was and why he was having these strange dreams about her.

Other info:
I may have Grimpaw possess him at certain times {Saving up right now, so this will come later on}
He will defiantly be able to see her eventually, probably as an older apprentice {Bought}

Dun, dun dun.

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Plot 2 !

While on a solo-patrol, Onyxpaw goes for a quick swim and as he emerges from the water, he is caught up in a twoleg soda-can wrapper. The circle had been enlarged as it floated down the river and from the twolegs pulling on it while fighting over the last drink{Just to explain how it could fit over his head}. Discovering he can't get it off, Onyxpaw collapses on the shore only to be found by another Riverclan cat, possibly one of his family members. As the wrapper chokes him he passes out. The Riverclan cat drags him to the medicine cat den. Working to get it off, the medicine cat snaps it in half with their teeth, something Onyxpaw was unable to do with it around his neck. They revive Onyxpaw and Onyxpaw values his life more and learns to be thankful and less cocky and a show off.

-horrible plot-

Activity: [1/10] {I deleted all the other information, for it's pointless and if anything happens that takes me from the computer for more than a day I shall just PM you guys. But I've been avoiding doing anything stupid/rude/bad lately at the house and school so I won't get grounded xD}

Weekdays -- 9/10 {School, Chores. I get out of school at 1:40 and get my homework done first thing I walk into the house, so I usually hop on the computer after 15 mins of HW. Chore times range.}
Weekends -- 10/10 {Always online}

Advanced Enabled?: Of course~

Roleplay Sample:

Regular Muse

"To no offense Quailheart, but going around and gloating you are the best...that's an immediate turn off and just proves that you aren't the best, but not the worse, more in the middle class," Starscape rasped calmly. The old tom looked at her with irritated eyes. Why must Lionstar have chosen such a young deputy, why not wait till she was older then choose her, or just choose a temporary deputy? His tail flicked in anticipation of what she had to say about his opinion and statement, "There is no best. There is no worse. I don't see why cats refer to themselves as these when they aren't. Tell me something worse than a leader's death, the horror it strikes through every cat, the guilt they all feel. Tell me something that is worse than that. Tell me what is better than a new generation entering the world, the joy of the mother, father, clanmates. Tell me something that is better than that, Quailheart," he grunted. He was pushing his chances, and he knew it. His words, although confusing had some hidden meaning. He had said nothing was best and nothing was worse, yet he gave examples of the better and the worse. Why this was? He had no idea. It had come to him and he felt it was right.

High Muse

Oh damn, he's so pissed right now! Why did I have to tell him that?

The rather small Bengal slunk through the undergrowth her golden-eyes sorrowful and worried. She glanced over her shoulder as if expecting something, no someone, to jump out and kill her. Little did she know, that this creature she was expecting was merely in her head, an apparition of herself being, that she never thought would be unleashed, his cage unlocked. She moved forward, now fearing to turn around, to see that mangled, hairless, giant-sized beast looking over her. Oh how she would regret her next move.

She looked over her shoulder, twisting around in shock. It wasn't Sightless, her angered companion, herself. No, it was not as worse as the angered beast but it was bad. She took a step back as the black and white beast took one forward. She tripped over a tree root, flipping over onto her stomach. She gave a loud grunt, and the beast lost it, charging forward straight at her, "Sightless!" she screamed, coming to her paws and twisting around quickly before bursting into a panicked sprint, Eyesore, your always getting in trouble, you idiot, what did I tell you about leaving? Eysore heard the voice she came to know as Sightless invade her mind, making her want to scream. She hated these moments. She didn't dare glance over her shoulder. The beast was already gaining speed and quickly, it's long claws scraping over the ground.

BANG!

While more concentrated on Sightless, Eyesore soon found herself upside down, the beast charging forward. She had no time to recover before it hit her, dragging it's long, thick, sharp claws across her eyes. She screamed in agony, rolling over blindly, My eyes! My eyes! Sightless their bleeding! Sightless I can't see! she screamed in her head, to her dismay not hearing Sightless. She backed up, blindly against the tree, stopping once she felt it press against her rear, her tail slipping under her belly. The creature advanced forward, he reeked of badger, of course it must be a badger, "S-Stay back!" she hissed, the fur along her spy bristling in fear, pain, sorrow, defense.

With Onyxkit

The stones and pebbles of the river bank pressed against the kit's pawpads as he continued forward, closer to the water. He was of Riverclan, and all Riverclan cats knew how to swim, or at least he thought they all knew. He dipped a paw in the water, testing it's temperature. It was still chilly, but lucky for him his pelt was rather thick.

He took another careful step, then another, and another until he was up to his belly in the water. He grinned widely as he went deeper into the river, having to paddle around now. He dipped under water, coming back up quickly. He hadn't liked the way the water had rushed up his nostrils when he submerged, it burned. He swam back to the shore line, emerging from the water. His pelt was soaking wet. He shook himself, water flying everywhere. He had gotten most of it off but his pelt was still wet. He twitched his ears at the sound of a soft chewing noise from between the cattails.

He crouched down, his tail flicking silently as he kept it straight out behind him, slowly slinking into the cattails. He spotted the culprit of the noise, a small field mouse chewing on what appeared to be a grain. He unsheathed his claws, pouncing towards the mouse.

Onyxkit landed with a thud, grunting as he stood up. The mouse had escaped his grasp! How could that have happened? He frowned, flicking his tail madly as he twitched his ears for any other signs of it's presence. It was gone. He gave a grumpy sigh as he heard his mother's call.

Onyxkit bounded towards home, Riverclan camp, skidding to a stop in front of the nursery. He poked his head inside, finding his mother, accompanied by his father, and his siblings. He crawled down, curling up beside his mother, his fur now damp. He looked over at his brothers and sisters, their sleeping bodies slowly rising and falling as they breathed. He closed his eyes, falling into a dream-filled sleep.

Theme Songs:
Gone Forever -- Three Days Grace
Avatar: Jake's First Flight -- Copyright to the musician who composed this and James Cameron
Far Away -- Nickelback
Stranger -- Katie Costello "Switched at Birth" soundtrack.
Louder than Thunder -- The Devil Wears Parada
Like it Like That -- Hot Chelle Rae
Mark it Up -- Repo! The Genetic Opera

{Gone Forever, Stranger, Louder than Thunder and Far Away are "sad" songs of a sort but they are based on the fact he can't figure out about Grimpaw and is lost in thought about her.}

I feel so much better
Now that you're gone forever
I tell myself that I don't miss you at all
I'm not lying, denying that I feel so much better now
That you're gone forever

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