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Satinkit of ParadiseClan (WIP)
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Character Name: SatinkitCharacter Age: 4 moons
Gender: female
Alliance: ParadiseClan
Rank: Kit
Appearance (6 or more sentences): Satinkit is a very small kit with an exquisite dark ebony and chestnut tortoise shell coat. She has mythical dusty blue eyes like pools of crystal clear water. Silvery white patches cover her chest, stomach, and the inward side of her neck. The white fur that extends from her neck covers her chin and pours over half of her face, making her right eye and cheek white as well as her muzzle and the base of her left cheek. Her hind paws are both white as well as her hind legs and the inward side of her flanks. Her front left leg matches her hind legs, but the white patches on her right front leg only covers her right flank and her upper leg until it reaches the bend in the leg. Satinkit is extremely small because she was born a runt. Her claws are the size of an average size kit's, concluding that they look quite large on a kit of her tiny size.
Personality (6 or more sentences--these sentences form their own section and do NOT count towards the 4 groups below. Those are additional requirements): Satinkit is a very timid kitten with a big heart. She is a free spirited cat with alot of compassion and patience for others. She loves to help others with problems no matter how difficult. She is shy and hesitant because of her small size, but she knows that every cat has a place in the Clan no matter how small. She uses insults from others as an opportunity to grow stronger and face challenges ahead by telling herself inspiring things that encourage her. She is always truthful and very aware of her conscience. Satinkit is also a very noble cat who works only for the good of her Clan. Therefore, she cannot live with herself if she does something wrong that effects her Clan negatively. This tiny kit may face many challenges, but she always grows stronger despite what anyone else says.
---Likes (at least 3): Satinkit likes loyal friends, rainy days, and problems she can tackle. She also likes having the ability to prove her worth to the Clan.
--- Dislikes (at least 3): She dislikes cunning ambitions, injuries, the smell of rotten food and mouse bile, and when a cat doesn't see her worth.
---Strengths (No MORE than 5): Her mental strengths are the ability to feel empathy for and work with others and the abilty to gain from her weaknesses. Her physical strengths are her abilies so be fast, lightfooted, and agile, making a useful hunter for the future.
---Weaknesses (At least 3): Her mental weaknesses are, being small, lack of confidence, and shyness. Her physical weaknesses are, lack of strength, stanima, and size.History (8 or more sentences): Her father and mother were loners who had run away from their clans in a stoop to weakness, anger, justice, lifestyle, or even each other. Just moons after they had met, her mother, Plumfur was expecting kits. The father, Jaggedstone, went off to find a place to stay while the kits were young. He searched until Plumfur couldn't go any farther, then he went to look in a nearby cave. The cave was inhabited by large wild creatures of fierce nature. The creatures began to charge toward Jaggedstone. Soon, the backed him into a wall and the lead beast killed him there. Plumfur was and weak and depressed. She dragged herself into a ditch and spent a night there. When she awoke, she found that the ditch was filling up with snow so she tried to drag herself out of it, but she just kept falling into it from the slickness of the snow. The physical exertion caused Plumfur to have the kits early. After the last kit, Satinkit, was born Plumfur began to loose blood and she gave in to death. Satinkit was the smallest kit, but the only survivor. Her sister and brother froze to death before the tiny strained mewls reached the ears of another cat. Satinkit was taken back to the clan of her rescuers, ParadiseClan, where she was named and cared for and treated as an equal. Throughout the following moons she was teased because of her size, but she remained strong in faith that she was important and loved. As she grew to love the cats whose clan she was a part of, ParadiseClan became a part of her, and she realised a dream, she wanted to train to be a medicine cat. She may not be the largest or the strongest or the fastest, but she carried a secret and suttle ambition to care for her Clan. She dreams that one day she will be the best she can be, even if her dream never comes true.
Roleplay Sample (Required for first advanced bio): I stare out into the camp. My heart pounds as I realise the truth. I will never be the same. I will always be different. I will always be smaller, and weaker and less powerful than the rest. I have spent my days shut away from the rest of the Clan. But today is my day to rise. This will be the day I become known. I will walk out into the clearing and see the camp closely. I am a recovered cat. I have forgotten my past. It is behind me
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Satinkit walks into the clearing. She has spent her entire life recovering from her birth. This is a new world. She walks forward toward the other kits and sits a few feet away. She observes them for a while before making any effort to join them. She remember the first and last words her mother ever said to her, I may not be there to guide you, but you must reach out ino the world to be what you can become. Be strong my kits. You are a gift, you are important, and you will always be the best thing that ever happened to me. I see the kits playing and I decide to make a move. I analize all of the kits. Snowkit. Pridekit. Snailkit. Divinekit. And Boastkit. I've always had sort of a secret guilty crush on Boastkit. I tilt my head to the side to observe them. I walk over and introduce myself to the other kits, "Hello," I say, "I'm Satinkit."Comments (optional): Satinkit will have a Peacock tatoo in the future. :)
Hey there, nice bio! Just fix up the followimg for me please;
-You have a couple capitalization mistakes [i.e.: we don't capitalize 'clan']
-Can you have you roleplay sample in third person please
-How is this tattoo coming into play, since cats can't give themselves tattoos.'Bump' when you're done! :-)
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bump!
I don't really know how to explain the tattoo more considering she's still a kit.
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Like, define how a cat would get a tattoo, seeing as only humans can give tattoos. Unless this is in fantasy rp.
As well, you're missing a capital~
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StarClan.
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Character Name: SatinkitCharacter Age: 4 moons
Gender: female
Alliance: ParadiseClan
Rank: Kit
Appearance (6 or more sentences): Satinkit is a very small kit with an exquisite dark ebony and chestnut tortoise shell coat. She has mythical dusty blue eyes like pools of crystal clear water. Silvery white patches cover her chest, stomach, and the inward side of her neck. The white fur that extends from her neck covers her chin and pours over half of her face, making her right eye and cheek white as well as her muzzle and the base of her left cheek. Her hind paws are both white as well as her hind legs and the inward side of her flanks. Her front left leg matches her hind legs, but the white patches on her right front leg only covers her right flank and her upper leg until it reaches the bend in the leg. Satinkit is extremely small because she was born a runt. Her claws are the size of an average size kit's, concluding that they look quite large on a kit of her tiny size.
Personality (6 or more sentences--these sentences form their own section and do NOT count towards the 4 groups below. Those are additional requirements): Satinkit is a very timid kitten with a big heart. She is a free spirited cat with alot of compassion and patience for others. She loves to help others with problems no matter how difficult. She is shy and hesitant because of her small size, but she knows that every cat has a place in the Clan no matter how small. She uses insults from others as an opportunity to grow stronger and face challenges ahead by telling herself inspiring things that encourage her. She is always truthful and very aware of her conscience. Satinkit is also a very noble cat who works only for the good of her Clan. Therefore, she cannot live with herself if she does something wrong that effects her Clan negatively. This tiny kit may face many challenges, but she always grows stronger despite what anyone else says.
---Likes (at least 3): Satinkit likes loyal friends, rainy days, and problems she can tackle. She also likes having the ability to prove her worth to the Clan.
--- Dislikes (at least 3): She dislikes cunning ambitions, injuries, the smell of rotten food and mouse bile, and when a cat doesn't see her worth.
---Strengths (No MORE than 5): Her mental strengths are the ability to feel empathy for and work with others and the abilty to gain from her weaknesses. Her physical strengths are her abilies so be fast, lightfooted, and agile, making a useful hunter for the future.
---Weaknesses (At least 3): Her mental weaknesses are, being small, lack of confidence, and shyness. Her physical weaknesses are, lack of strength, stanima, and size.History (8 or more sentences): Her father and mother were loners who had run away from their clans in a stoop to weakness, anger, justice, lifestyle, or even each other. Just moons after they had met, her mother, Plumfur was expecting kits. The father, Jaggedstone, went off to find a place to stay while the kits were young. He searched until Plumfur couldn't go any farther, then he went to look in a nearby cave. The cave was inhabited by large wild creatures of fierce nature. The creatures began to charge toward Jaggedstone. Soon, the backed him into a wall and the lead beast killed him there. Plumfur was and weak and depressed. She dragged herself into a ditch and spent a night there. When she awoke, she found that the ditch was filling up with snow so she tried to drag herself out of it, but she just kept falling into it from the slickness of the snow. The physical exertion caused Plumfur to have the kits early. After the last kit, Satinkit, was born Plumfur began to loose blood and she gave in to death. Satinkit was the smallest kit, but the only survivor. Her sister and brother froze to death before the tiny strained mewls reached the ears of another cat. Satinkit was taken back to the clan of her rescuers, ParadiseClan, where she was named and cared for and treated as an equal. Throughout the following moons she was teased because of her size, but she remained strong in faith that she was important and loved. As she grew to love the cats whose clan she was a part of, ParadiseClan became a part of her, and she realised a dream, she wanted to train to be a medicine cat. She may not be the largest or the strongest or the fastest, but she carried a secret and suttle ambition to care for her clan. She dreams that one day she will be the best she can be, even if her dream never comes true.
Roleplay Sample (Required for first advanced bio):
Satinkit walks into the clearing. She has spent her entire life recovering from her birth. This is a new world. She walks forward toward the other kits and sits a few feet away. She observes them for a while before making any effort to join them. She remembers the first and last words her mother ever said to her, I may not be there to guide you, but you must reach out ino the world to be what you can become. Be strong my kits. You are a gift, you are important, and you will always be the best thing that ever happened to me. Satinkit thinks a moment about these words. They bring her heart to life. She is determined to be the best she can. She sees the kits playing and decides to make a move. She analizes all of the kits. Snowkit. Pridekit. Snailkit. Divinekit. And Boastkit. Satinkit has always had sort of a secret guilty crush on Boastkit. She tilts her head to the side to observe them. She walks over and introduces herself to the other kits, "Hello," she says, "I'm Satinkit."Comments (optional): Satinkit will have a Peacock tattoo in the future for her compassion, nobility, patience, and truthfulness.
Since Paradiseclan is a fanclan, if the clan gives unrealistic things like small tattoo's, that's fine :)
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Thaanks but I've started over to meet new requirements