Falcon Of Dawns River

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  • Falcon Of Dawns River
    [img width=505 height=367]http://bobtailcat.com/sitebuil…eamermalekit9wks.jpg5.jpg[/img]
    11 moons


    Gender - she cat


    Alliance - The Empire of Rising Sun


    Rank - Council of The Rising Sun


    Appearance -
    [img width=505 height=367]http://bobtailcat.com/sitebuil…eamermalekit9wks.jpg5.jpg[/img]
    Falcon is a bengal bobtailed she-cat. She has beautiful blue eyes and a black dog toothed color. She is a small build so it makes it easyer to climb.She has a couple of scars on her back and tail. She is light-hearted and will do anything for her friends and family. Sometimes she will be gentle, sweet, and mother-like, others she's a maiac, evil, and inmature.


    Personality - Ever since Falcon of Dawns River was a small child, she wanted to be a council member. Her calm, quick actions made her a perfect canadite. Sturdy, strong paws and brisk manners were all that mattered. She locked her real feelings away, never to be seen again, disguised by a small smile. Sometime she can be evil, but most of the time she is a sweet, kind, and mother-like cat. She also is a leader-like cat, She would do anything to keep her clanmates safe, even if it means dying for them.


    Likes - She adores climbing trees. She would ask shyly to Sage if he would come. She also adores talking with him and Scorch.


    Dislikes - Falcon dislikes Sage's upset side and would do all she could to reverse his heart. She also hates it when he's hurt, and would destroy the being who caused his pain.


    Strengths - She loves Sage enough that drinking in the sight of him makes her feel stronger. She thinks of him as she hooks fish floudering in the shallow shore water and as she pouces on scittering shrews. Everytime she has to ward off an enemy, she thinks of him.


    Weaknesses - When Sage feels all is hopeless, inside she feels the same. But on the outside, she really tries to change her opinion. A weakness of hers could be that she'd do anything for Sage, anything at all. If he wanted her dead, she'd gladly kill herself off. If she'd hurt the handsome tom cat, she'd torture herself daily for it, paying slowly over the course of her lifetime.




    RP Sample - Falcon whatched him go, her stomach tight with uncomfort. She gazed at him as he left, taking in the gentle swish of his tail as he walked. She turned back around to the pile of bones and sighed. She probbed the fish's skull distatsefully.
    "I really hope he likes me back..." She murmured, half to herself, half to the skeleton. "What do you think?" She mewed quietly, never really having a friend.
    After a while of waiting, knowing nothing would happen, she'd tossed the bones into a hole and had buried them quickly. She sat and gazed out at the water. The tabby stood and turned to the east side of the beach.
    Falcon walked along beach line, leaving a trail of paw imprints. Her eyes were clouded with an emotionless gaze once again as she worked her way over the shells that pressed into the sand. Her long, graceful tail brushed the shore smoothily, leaving a brushed image inbetween the paw imprints. Her expression was dull and faced directly ahead, as now that Sage had left, she was once abandoned in a cloudy storm.


    History -
    With only a simple look at the Council, Falcon knew she had to be one. She had to work her way into perfection, filling in every crack of an escape route for her insides. After a while, she managed to completley conceal her heart in the desire to hold power. Her plans? To become the best Council Member The Empire of Rising Sun has ever seen. Will it come true? Possibly; If she chooses the correct path. She would be the best one day. She new it.


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    The post was edited 1 time, last by ✘☣ℱαℓ¢øηℜαїη☣✘ ().

  • Hey there, great bio! :D However I see some few things you need to change before I can approve this.


    -- You need more than a picture to describe her. You need six sentences.


    -- Two more sentences in personality.


    -- One more sentence in history.


    -- You have a few random capitalization. Only the beginnings of sentences and names need capitalized.


    Bump this when you edit it! :D


  • Hey there!


    Your bio is looking great. However you need one more sentence in personality and a couple more in history. Other than that this bio looks great!



  • [justify]Hey Falcon, almost there! You still need:


    - One more sentence in Personality


    Just fix that and bump again, and I or another staffer will look over your bio again promptly![/justify]