No one could love a start like me…(werewolf)

Jakie walked silently though the frozen forest. Crunch, the snow and ice cracked beneath her steps. Her soft brown her flowed behind her freely as she avoided low branches that hung in front of her. Her blue eyes shot bright lights though the dulled, tangled birches covered in frost. Snowflakes dotted her hair and eye lashes lightly. Her lips were colored bright red and her cheeks were rosy from the cold the snapped at her. Jumping quietly over a frozen spring she kept walking on. She threw a hood over her face loosely trying to keep from the cold. Anyone could see the simple beauty she cast out though she didn't try to.
She kept her head low and her hands in her pockets. She avoided the small ice covered roads and lone towns nearby. Jakie walked deeper into the forest trying to get lost. She stopped in her light tracks and lifted her head slipping the dark hood off her light hair. Her green eyes piercing though the white surrounding her, she tilted her head back and looked into the starry sky spreading out above the tangling birch branches. The full moon hung eerily above her head the stars thrown gently across the dark sky. She trained her eyes on the moon. The soft glow that traced around the edges kept part of the unseen dark visable. Shadows stretched across the blanket of snow that covered the ground. She stepped out of the shadows into the light of the moon. Her hair caught the gentle light and sparkled like the ice around her feet. She closed her vibrant eyes that seemed out of place in the dulled forest. She relaxed, allowing her hands to slide out of her sleek jacket pockets. The still, sharp air held the night still, caught and frozen in the silence.
Jakie almost didn't want to be found. She was so used to the alone, no family or pack. She almost liked it better that way. The outcast. Loner. She waited For someone to come and mess up the silent scene. She wanted it to stay just how it was, but she was tired of being alone.

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Jakie lifted her head sharply. She changed her gaze from the moon to the shadows of the trees in front of her. She pulled the hood back over her brown wavy hair and stepped back. Her mind tossed back the though of running and the though of a fight. She buried her boots further into the snow and kept her breathing slow even though her heart was racing. Jakie took another step back further into the shadows so her deep blue eyes peered out across the small clearing.

She lifted her head and stepped forwards into the light showing her sharp features. Jakie stayed silent keeping her lips together. She held her hood over her head tightly. A small strang of hair fell over her eye. "Who are you?" she spoke firmly. Holding her gaze steady on him. She shifted back and forth on her feet still unsure of the stranger.

She narrowed her eyes then smiled slightly,"Jakie." she relaxed more seeing he wasn't a threat. "What are you doing wandering the forest?" Jakie pulled her hood back letting the dark curls of her hair fall over her shoulders loosely.

"Your what?" her eyes widened. She had heard him clearly but shock had made her ask again. Jakie opened her mouth to say something but couldn't. How could she not have noticed?she felt so Oblivous. She tangle her fingers in her. Her first though was, Stalker, but she wanted to hear his side.

She held her breath. "You didn't scare me." Jakie hurried eager to prove she wasn't weak. "Why are you trying to protect me? Can I not protect myself?" she narrowed her eyes. She was still standing in a patch of moonlight where the beaches were not as thick.

She breathed out and loosened up,"You have never even met me." she looked at him puzzled. Jakie tilted her head slightly watching him for his next move. Her head spun but she stayed upright and held her boots stiffly in the ground.

She stayed quiet for a moment looking down at the frosted ground. No one loves me. She was so use to being alone,"You can't love me." she shook her head unbelieving. Jakie was still puzzled she had lost her hope in most love. Jakie looked back up at him her bright blue eyes studying him closely.

She flinched. Jakie took the slightest step back,"You have to be lying." she still shook her head slightly. Her hair hung loosely down her back and her deep teal eyes looked him back in the eye. Why is he trying to break her?she though still thinking he was teasing her.