Bloodstare a scary to but nice needs a mate(NO TOMS)

Shimmerfur was in the nursery protecting firekit and flowerkit.
She told them to stay put as she ran outside the nursery to help battle the rouges but a tom rogue snuck in and snatched up the two kits.

Shimmerfur rushed over to help but as she was running over a Tom pushed her over and she fell to the ground she was pinned down she vigorously was trying to help save her kits. After that the tom dug his claws deeper and deeper into her fur until she cried out in pain HELP ME!

She smiled not afraid of his hideuos face "It's nice to see a new face around here all I've seen of my family was my sister when we were young appreantices she nearly drowned in the river." She mewed laughing she flicked her tail

Shimmerfur runs into the nursery holding firekit and flowerkit by the scruff she curls up in a corner protecting them.

Rosepelt noticed the long fight ahead and saw the she-cat rush into the den she looked back at the fighting toms and ran to the den she stood out side the den protecting the intrance she hissed at the other toms and she-cats circling her RosePelt swiped with her claws twitching her ears she scratched the tom and rolled over and the tom pinned her down she hissed and clawed at his flank one of the toms crawled into the den and hissed at the she-cat and kits RosePelt pushed off the tom that pinned her down and ran into the den she leaped on the other tom and hissed she clawed and flicked her tail hissing as a state of warning the all the toms ran away "Are you ok? I'll protect your den and make sure no cat comes into this den one pad." Mewed RosePelt walking to the intrance.

Thank you so very much I will remember this and so will they said Shimmerfur
Yeh thanks but I could deal with those silly rogues anyway commented firekit
Firekit be polite wait until your father hears about this said Shimmerfur in an angry tone.
I am very gretaful cats like you care said flowerkit.
Well said sweetheart replied Shimmerfur.

WATCH OUT BEHIND YOU shouted firekit.
Stay put you two said Shimmerfur getting up to help rosepelt with this massive tom it was two times there size joined together and looked like it could smash them over like prey Shimmerfur jumped on the Tom clawing and scratching him. He smashed her off she got back up ready to fight covered in blood.

RosePelt gasped blocking the kits for safety she hissed at the tom as a state of warning another black she-cat came the one that killed her old mate RosePelts hazel eyes stared at the black she-cat RosePelts black fur ruffled her memories started she had a flash back of the time her old mate Thundertail's blood flew through the misty air and pain hit RosePelt's fur when she didn't relize she felt the real pain for real like in her flash back the black she-cat sinked her claws into her fur blood spilled onto RosePelt's black pelt her hazel eyes were scared she hissed and them screamed:HELP!!! RosePelt's breath rose and kept in a fast patteren her heart beat fastly thinking she were going to die at the moment right after she met a nice tom.She tried to bulit er strengh and couldn't "I will not die..." Mewed RosePelt her voice fading her eyes half closed her strengh bulit she gritted her teeth and hissed pushing the she-cat off her body the blood marks from her claws on RosePelt's fur dripped and her Hazel eyes fled with anger she ran out after the she-cat chasing her away from the valley she stared at the she- cat as she ran for her life she ran back to the den and breathed heavily her ears flicked and her tail flicked back and forth she smiled "And thanks for saving me from that huge tom." Mewed RosePelt she went over to the kits "And thank you for warning me if it wasn't for you would have been deadand so would have I." Mewed RosePelt smiling at the little kits

Shimmerfur was still attacking the huge Tom she was nearly ready to give up and die.

fall fern coughed loudly her voice rough. " i wish some one would love me!" she wailed then sat shivering on the river bank crying musically. her cries reached across several tail-lengths.

fall fern heard the cries and raced there in a flash. she killed two toms in a flash then rounded on a nother snarling. her two-toned eyes blazed with hate and heart broken love and fear. she snarled and slashed his neck then he grabbed her paw and bit down hard. she bit down on his neck. she then turned to limp away.

Shimmerfur had finally killed the huge Tom.

fall fern started to stumble. her eyes,paws,and neck were bleeding in many places. she collapsed in the bushes three tail-lengths away. blood pooled around her.

Shimmerfur got the medicine cat.

"Oh about that I'm a medicine cat in ShadowClan." she mewed flicking her tail

( this is thunderclan )
Quick she said fall fern is hurt.
Shimmerfur went to see how the kits were.
She gasped as an apprentice sized shecat was creeping up on them she lunged herself at the cat.