Looking for an advanced tutor.

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    As the title states above, I'm looking for an advanced tutor to help me enhance my writing and role-playing skills. Anyone willing to take me on a student?

    freestyle ღ wrote:


    Let us begin c: Let me see your average roleplay post.


    Spanky [ Gone until Monday~! ] wrote:

    Frillykit's life seemed to zoom by. The little she-kit, the oldest of the bunch, couldn't even comprehend herself. One minute she was a newborn, and the next the little kit was stumbling after her family as they attempted to escape. For what reason, the kit did not know. All she knew was that her family was leaving, and that she needed to follow them or else she would get left behind. And she did not want to stay here, all alone. Her dauntless acts have not yet developed yet, but that bold she-cat was slowly burrowing forward towards the light of day.

    Looks good, now you tell me, what do you think you need help with?

    More descriptions. I feel that my RP posts, compared to those I RP with, a very... well, very bland and boring. I want to give the RP post a little bit of life, y'know?

    Some words in that post seemed a bit awkward and didn't flow like the post should, try picking them out and fixing them c:

    freestyle ღ wrote:


    Let us begin c: Let me see your average roleplay post.


    Spanky [ Gone until Monday~! ] wrote:

    Frillykit's life zoomed by in the blink of an eye. The little she-kit, the oldest of the bunch, couldn't even comprehend herself. One minute she was a newborn, and the next she was stumbling after her family as they attempted to escape. For what reason, the kit did not know. All she knew was that her family was leaving, and she needed to follow them or else they would leave her behind. And she did not want to stay anywhere her family wasn't.


    I think I fixed it? I don't know. :P

    I just re-read it, and it does flow easier than before. Reading out loud really does help. xD

    That is always a good tip, before you post, read it out loud and make sure everything flows well ^^ What next, you don't have any spelling errors <3

    Making my posts longer and with better descriptions are my main goal. I want to be as advanced as possible. :)

    What I do to help my advanced skills is work on making different bios for characters. Sync yourself in and find your stye.

    Thank you~! That is how I get better, I am constantly making bios to improve my skills <3

    [justify]I guess that does make sense. Could we practice with a mock bio?[/justify]

    Sure, create a bio for a character named....Leaftail <---Random character xD


    She is a brown tabby with green eyes. She has a skinny body structure.


    She is ill-tempered, bi-polar and over all mean.