Shadowclan Prisoner

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  • Disasterclaw stopped struggling and lied on the ground.He perked up his ears and listened and wondered what is going to happen to him next.Though he could handle alot of pain and wounds,he still didn't want to get hurt more.He knew he had no chance to escape,he was surrounded by Sunclan cat and if he did run away,he wouldn't come back to Shadowclan, because he can't see the way.His only chance of surviving is to submit to the Sunclan cats completely,but his pride didn't allow him to just bow down infront of some weak kittypets.

  • Brambletail sliced his claws across Failpaw's face. "Attack him now!" he snarled, his teeth bared savagely. The black and white apprentice stumbled backwards, letting out a yelp of surprise.

  • Disasterclaw growled loudly as he heard Brambletail orded Failpaw to attack him.After hearing the yelp Disasterclaw lifted up his head and tried getting up. "LEAVE HIM ALONE! He doesn't want to do it,you are not the leader and he doesn't have to listen to you!" He hissed to Brambletail.

  • Failpaw hissed at Brambletail. "I was wrong about SunClan," he growled. "You are nothing but a bunch of kittypets. You aren't real warriors." He snarled and dashed away, leaving Brambletail staring at him, shocked. He turned to Disasterclaw.


    "This is your fault!" he yowled, leaping at the ShadowClan cat.

  • Disasterclaw heard the yowled and started crawling away from the leap but it was too late.Brambletail leaped on him and Disasterclaw's body hit to the ground hard.Disasterclaw tried squirming out but he couldn't left up his body. "Its not my fault" he hissed as he kept struggling.

  • Brambletail hissed and lifted his paws high in the air. He brought them down, claws glistening, aiming for Disasterclaw's face.

  • Disasterclaw yowled in pain and struggled like wild as his face got raked by Brambletails claws,leaving deep cuts on his face. "Stop it!!"He hissed as he squirmed shaked his head.

  • Brambletail lifted his paws off of Disasterclaw and laughed. "I think it's your turn now, Sunkiss," he growled. "I'm going to get a bit of fresh-kill."

  • Orbpaw watched, his eyes wide. He pressed himself to the ground, the dampness of the ground seeping through his fur. His paws covered his ears as Disasterclaw yowled, trying to block out the horrible sound. He wanted to tell them to stop but he didn't want to suffer the same fate as Failpaw. So he stayed crouched, shivering, on the ground, trying to block out the horrible scene.

  • Disasterclaw panted,trying to catch his breath back.He was weak and tired,he wished he could just lay down in his nest,grab a nice mouse and rest for the day.He started whimpering in fear that he is going to get beaten again."Please...don't hurt me..." He meowed pitifully and kept whimpering.He curled up into a ball and covered his face, because he didn't want his face to get hurt again.

  • Failpaw poked his head into the den again after he was sure Brambletail was gone. He didn't like them hurting this cat. It wasn't right, even if he did kill another. He wished there was something he could do.


    OOC - How does Disasterclaw get free? He probably needs to be free soon so he can get his sight back.

  • OOC: I guess He will get his sight back then Oreo appears to him with the offer.So to make it more fun.Disasterclaw should be in a pit or in a prisoners den or something,where he coud be alone.At night,Oreo aprears and offers Disasterclaw his sight and he agrees.He gets his sight and strenght back during the night and he sneaks out from the clan,but before he did that,he goes to the nursery and kills off 4 kits and takes one of their body,for revenge. :)

  • OOC:...Theres no way cats can dig a pit! So someone can put him in one of the old sheds or something!

  • Cherrypaw turned to Brambletail after Failpaw disapeared, her lips pulled back in a snarl. "Look what you've done!" She growled "Leave him alone!" She wasn't exactly sure who she was talking about, maybe it was Failpaw or maybe it was Disasterclaw. Whoever it was, she wished Brambletail would stop. Glancing at the apprentices den, she spotted Failpaw and padded towards him. "Are you alright?" She asked gently, examining the scratch Brambletail had given him.

  • OOC:Sure,a shed is good. :D throw him in a shed if some apprentices want to help,they can secretly bring him some food too. :D

  • Brambletail spat at Disasterclaw. "I'm done with you for now. Come with me." He gripped Disasterclaw's scruff and quickly dragged him across the clearing. An open shed would be a perfect place to house this cat. He gruffly tossed the ShadowClan cat as best as he could into the shed and then used his shoulder to close the door. "Every cat is to leave Disasterclaw alone. Don't feed him or talk to him."


    Failpaw looked up at Cherrypaw, his eyes still wide. "I'm fine," he murmured. "I just don't understand why they would hurt him. He may be bad, but doesn't every cat have a little bad in them?" He looked down at his paws again. "It feels so wrong."

  • Disasterclaw growled in pain as he hit the hard floor.He coughed a little as he heard the door closing.Disasterclaw sighed sadly and started licking his wounds,thinking of what is going to happen to him next.After a hour of licking,Disasterclaw curled up into a ball and fell asleep,trying to get some rest and ignore the non stopping pain all over his body.

  • Claws scrambled from the outside of the shed, little claws...
    A small she-cat soon opened the door, making it creak a bit. The cat was holding a small mouse in her jaws, she padded into the den. She sat down by the entrance, inside, and started to chew on the mouse. She stopped in mid-chew as she noticed Disasterclaw, she looked at him and crouched to the floor in fear.

  • Cherrypaw nodded "I know, it is wrong." She mewed, giving Failpaw's ear a comforting lick "I understand that he killed some Sunclan cats, but cats die everyday! And anyway, we're sinking to his level if we keep acting like this." She flicked her tail to where Brambletail stood.