Ok, now I'll try:
Deadwhisker poked his head outside of his den to see the Breezeclan cats fleeing from their camp.
Swiftmaus grunted in his sleep and rolled over on his back.
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Ok, now I'll try:
Deadwhisker poked his head outside of his den to see the Breezeclan cats fleeing from their camp.
Swiftmaus grunted in his sleep and rolled over on his back.
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Daftflight grimaced at the scene, then looked at her apprentice and forced a smile. "It's okay.."
OOC- Banner! [img width=505 height=335]http://i916.photobucket.com/al…fanzo/Teknoclanbanner.png[/img]
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Deadwhisker thought, 'What's wrong with Breezeclan?'
Negastar turned to Deadwhisker. `Lightning snapped their Great Oak in half, and they fled.`
OOC- Looks great!
IC- Linkinheart padded into the camp and headed towards Negastar. He sighed when he heard about Breezeclan," Its a shame how tings must end."
Scalepaw woke up and went to his mentor. The day was overcast, with thick clouds making the light a bit dull. `What should we do today, Linkinheart?`
Lyrepaw playfully hit her brother`s head with a paw. `Silly Scalepaw! Today is our First Rings Assessment!` She meowed excitedly.
The dark brown she-cat nodded. `Yes, it is time for the two of you to be assessed to be warriors.` Negastar gestured to the Deputy and Linkinheart to explain the assessment to their apprentices.
Oh! One more thing. Chibuscus, you need to add the newest cats to the members, and maybe, add a section for banners?
Deadwhisker nodded. "Poor Breezeclan..." He mewed sadly.
Okay!
IC: Daftflight purred. "I'm so proud!" she said to Lyrepaw. "And I'm sure you'll make me even prouder."
[10 mins later]
Lyrepaw and Scalepaw dashed into the Night Club. Lyrepaw immediately found a green ring just like the one her mother gave her. `HeY! MoRe CaTs?! QuIcK! CaLl AnImAl CoNtRoL!!` Voices the apprentices couldn`t understand quickly grew angry. Large hands tried to grab Lyrepaw, but she dodged and stole a violet ring. A large pile of rings was on a table, and she hid in it after grabbing another violet.
`LYREPAW!!` A yowl rang out from Scalepaw as he was scooped up by large hands and carried outside into a cage. The cage was put into a monster. I`ve been eaten by a monster! The black tom thought as a door was shut in the back. He thrashed about in the cage as a loud roar made his ears ring. Scalepaw yowled loudly until the cage slid to the back of the monster, and he hit his head on the impact, knocking him out.
Uhh, Chibi, the Cat list is... glitched or something.
OOC: Let me see what's wrong...
IC: Daftflight glanced over. That sounded like Scalepaw... she thought. "Negastar? What..." she cut hersef off, running to where she heard his yowls.
Lyrepaw dashed behind the monster, and leaped, digging her claws into a piece of wood on the door. She climbed up, and tried to force the door up until it suddenly rose up very quickly, taking her with it. A cage containing her brother rolled out and fell onto the Thunderpath. Lyrepaw yanked her claws out of the wood and jumped off the monster, pelting to the cage with her brother.
I see a cat... who is it? Is it Gravemist, my dad? Or... Scalepaw`s vision was blurry, and he went unconscious again.
Daftflight ran up next to her. "Scalepaw! Lyrepaw! Are you two okay?" she asked frantically.
OOC: Fixed! I hope it doesn't happen again, it took a long tiiime.
Lyrepaw nodded, and licked a bleeding cut on her leg.
Scalepaw woke up, and thrashed about in the cage.
Daftflight shifted her weight on her paws. "Don't worry, I'll figure something out..."
OOC- Meh.....I missed an intense moment! And now I'm on low muse X.x
IC- Linkinheart stretched and looked around camp.
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Skilletvine yawned.
Lyrepaw ran back to camp suddenly. `Deadwhisker...` She panted. `I`ve decided... to be... your... *gasp* Apprentice!`
Scalepaw thrashed some more in his cage, and noticed a silver key laying on the Thunderpath nearby. `Key! I see key!` He was a bit disoriented, and felt numb all over.
Name- Metricpaw
Appearance-
Rings- blue on front legs.
Apprentice- Nuuu
Mate/Crush- O.o
Gender- shecat
Age- 9 moons
Rank- apprentice!